You see the words, "Young Adult Novel." What would you think of? Maybe shoulder squeezes instead of rear-end pinches? Not with Between. And that was one of many things that rather irked me with this book.
The main character, Lindsey Waters, makes me frown. First off, she is a terrible example. In this book, the Christian god is present. And Lindsey has the opportunity to go to Heaven multiple times. Yet, she is still consumed with a sexual desire. And as soon as this desire isn't filled, it isn't "Oh my gosh, I should just back off." It's, "Don't you want me?" Uhg, you've known the guy for around two days!
Not only that, but she doesn't think of others nearly as much as she should. This may be considered a spoiler, but it's in the first chapter so I'll inform you that a car crash happens and she wasn't the one driving. A young man by the name of Ravi was driving. And once her body is transported to an in between zone, somewhere between Heaven and Earth (not purgatory, that would be between Heaven and Hell), she doesn't think about how much lain and grief and guilt it would cause Ravi if she died. If I knew I was directly responsible for someone else's death, that this person was in the car with me, and I could have easily, easily avoided it had I been paying attention, the guilt would be overwhelming. Out of the TWO HUNDRED FIFTY-SEVEN PAGES, she recognizes this at page ONE HUNDRED SEVENTY-SEVEN. She does, however, immediately take notice of how her dad would feel if she died. Good job, Lindsey. You even tear up. Of course, you tear up A LOT in the beginning, and you continue to giggle what feels like every two pages for the rest of the book, which also immensely irked me. I can barely imagine Katniss or Tris giggling as much as she does or saying "Ewww" as she had.
And the main male protagonist... He was okay except I hated how stereotypically Scottish he was. The author had full range of what time period to make Aiden from. Anywhere between the past and today. She chooses the time period in which they wore kilts.
He wasn't the only problem, but the relationship between Aiden and Lindsey was painfully cheesy:
“Aiden, you’re…” I stammered, trying to put into words how beautiful he was to me, how I could barely breathe when I looked at him.
“Thank you. I was about to say the same to you.”
This is even less clever:
“Wow, you look amazing,” I said, awed.
“I was just thinking the same about you,” he replied and lifted my hands to his lips.”
Gosh, that was horrid. I'm not smiling. That wasn't funny, it wasn't heart melting, it wasn't anything but bland and maybe mushy.
Oh, and I'm confused. If you can just summon ANYTHING by merely thinking it, why chop wood? Why not summon chopped wood? Why search for a camera? Why not just project one with your mind?
But this book still doesn't get a one star review. The chapter titles were nice. It could've been a whole lot worse, as a lot of young adult novels like to make the chapter titles HUGE and then put a nice, large symbol, and then skip, like, six lines and then FINALLY start the story. This one had the chapter titles normally sized in italics, and none of this one to two inch space before the story starts. Also, the way she writes is gorgeous. Just what she's writing is not my favorite. But if she were to put a good story in her own words, I'd be first to buy. And the nice, low price is part of what compelled me to purchase it.
So, all in all, it's a nicely priced novel with unlikable characters and messed up logic, but with nice chapter titles and corny lines, yet has gorgeous writing.