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Hidden Wolves #1

Unacceptable Risk

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For a hidden shifter, falling in love with a man may be the death of them both.

Simon Conley knows about being an outcast. Born into a secret werewolf pack, he’s the lone gay wolf, an outsider even among his packmates. The top wolves consider him a perversion, a failure, and a security risk. To survive in the human world, werewolves rely on absolute secrecy, and any breaches of their code are dealt with swiftly— and violently.

So when Simon falls in love with Paul, a human man, even his Alpha's grudging tolerance won't protect him. He must keep Paul from discovering the truth about him and the secrets the pack jealously guards, or it’s not just their love that’ll end up dead.

rereleased 2021 with light editing, and short story 1.1 included.

330 pages, ebook

First published October 11, 2011

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Kaje Harper

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I get asked about my name a lot. It's not something exotic, though. “Kaje” is pronounced just like “cage” – it’s an old nickname, and my pronouns are she/her/hers.

I was born in Montreal but have lived for 30 years in Minnesota, where the two seasons are Snow-removal and Road-repair, where the mosquito is the state bird, and where winter can be breathtakingly beautiful. Minnesota’s a kind, quiet (if sometimes chilly) place and it’s home.

I’ve been writing far longer than I care to admit (*whispers – fifty years*), mostly for my own entertainment, usually M/M romance (with added mystery, fantasy, historical, SciFi…) I also have a few Young Adult stories (some released under the pen name Kira Harp.)

My husband finally convinced me that after all the years of writing for fun, I really should submit something, somewhere. My first professionally published book, Life Lessons, came out from MLR Press in May 2011. I have a weakness for closeted cops with honest hearts, and teachers who speak their minds, and I had fun writing four novels and three freebie short stories in that series. I was delighted and encouraged by the reception Mac and Tony received.

I now have a good-sized backlist in ebooks and print, both free and professionally published. A complete list with links can be found on my website "Books" page at https://kajeharper.com/.

You can find me and my book reviews on my author page here on Goodreads - I hang out on Goodreads a lot because I moderate the Goodreads YA LGBT Books group. I also post free short YA stories on that group, more than 50 of them so far.

You can also find me on Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/KajeHarper

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4,072 reviews6,586 followers
February 2, 2025
Updated review and rating: re-read in 2025 (12 years later)

This series is special to me because it's one of my first M/M paranormal romance series I've ever read, but I thought, surely, after 12 years and thousands of queer romance books later, I won't like it quite so much.

Guys... I was wrong.

I LOVED IT. I loved it so hard.

I was at the edge of my seat, and was tempted to read while driving a few times, that's how BADLY I couldn't put it down. And I've already read it! I knew what was going to happen, and it was just unputdowable for me. It even triggered me to re-buy the entire series (I read the initial books from MLR press and couldn't even find where I stored the files from over a decade ago).

Love, sexuality discovery, shifters, incredible world building... just the whole package for me.

Promoted to my "best of the best" list

(see below for my 2013 review)

5+ stars. Holy F balls, Kaje Harper just knocked it out of the park!

Best shifter book that I have read this year and best M/M shifter book that I have ever read. Period. This book was amazing. Now, it isn't a flashy, insta-love, rapey kind of shifter book, if that is what you are into. It is a beautifully, perfectly crafted love story that manages to make werewolves seem realistic and not cheese-tastic.

Can we just take a moment and appreciate the awesomeness that is Kaje Harper? I mean, this woman can write anything! Throw a paranormal/a contemporary/a sci-fi at her and she handles it like a pro! (hint, that is because she IS a pro). I am so throughly impressed with her versatility.

I honestly have very few complaints. The sex was sweet and sexy (and gay-first-timers is my favorite theme), the romance was natural and believable, and the pack/shifter aspect was world-builded to perfection. Some may complain about the slower pace, but I think it is that leisurely style that makes the build-up to the romance seem organic to me. And I thought that the pacing was spot on, for the record.

How happy am I that this was the book that I chose to get in paperback so Kaje Harper could sign it for me?! I hadn't even read it but I was gambling on it being amazing- that gamble paid off!

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677 reviews
February 7, 2012
I don't read that many shifter books most don't appeal or hold my interest for long so imagine my surprise when I finally stumbled (gently encouraged) upon Unacceptable Risk. I am delighted to say this was a fabulous and interesting story with a nice bit of intrigue and suspense, especially the politics and hierarchy of the pack.

Paul was an adorable geek and thankfully devoid of the sulky (hold a grudge) attitude and major angst. His relationship with Simon wasn't perfect and they had to work at it which was stressful and tense at times. They were cute I loved how they did not jump into bed straight away and have sex and were not instantly mated.

You actually feel them slowly falling in love and getting to know each other with kisses and tender embraces a nice lovely romantic connection. Yeah I am a hopeless romantic but this worked out so much better for me than the instant sex scenario.

Now to Aaron wow what an alpha he is going to be strong, fair and sexy the fight for control of the pack was both exciting and tense. So I am eagerly awaiting to see how his story unfolds and who his mate is going to be!
Profile Image for Jo ★The Book Sloth★.
485 reviews448 followers
November 28, 2014
4 Lemon Cream Donut Stars



Simon is a werewolf. Unluckily for him he is also gay, something that not only is unusual for his kind but it is also punishable by death usually. Although he has long ago skipped the bullet of an authorised execution, some of his pack-mates aren't happy with that decision and after several beatings over the years it seems like the time has come when he is left almost dead in the middle of the road.

But as luck would have it the incoming truck sees him on time to stop from hitting him and the man jumping to help him is also a veterinarian who will help him heal his wounds. Too bad Simon can't tell him what he is because if there is one law in the pack that no one is allowed to break it is that the safety and secrecy of the pack is above all and anyone threatening their exposure is killed. Can Simon start something meaningful with Paul without exposing himself and without putting the man who saved his life in danger just for knowing him?


I picked up this book because I want to explore the M/M genre a little more without going out of what I like, which is relatively light romance with a heavy dose of paranormal. So after searching around for a bit I saw this months old recommendation and thought why not start there?

I liked this book. It was sweet and fun and the drama never reached critical levels. Simon, despite the abuse he has suffered in his pack, is a quite light-hearted guy that never lost his sense of humor or his determination to defend his choices. I liked how he never once wavered from what he wanted and went at it with relentless focus.

Paul was a sweetheart. Dedicated to his work, with a genuine love for what he did and a heart a mile long. Learning you like guys for the first time can't be easy but he took it well although he did need some time to fully accept it. I liked how he didn't jump in happiness at the idea because it gave a more realistic feeling to the book. He still accepted his sexuality pretty easily though but the fact that he already was so socially awkward but with a very open mind made it believable.

I also liked the paranormal aspect of the book. The werewolves don't have any freaky superpowers, they aren't super-strong or super-fast and they can't talk into each other's minds. They are just a bunch of guys with a genetic mutation that allows them to turn into wolves. The pack structure and rules are quite rigid and old fashioned but it seems like things are changing.

I did think the book was kind of slow at some points. Not enough for me to lose interest but definitely enough to notice and reduce a star. The writing was very good though and the story compelling. I'm definitely reading the rest of the books.

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143 reviews77 followers
September 1, 2012
2.5 stars

It was supposed to be 1 star, but I've slept on it and calmed down and realized just because I got so pissed with one of the MCs and wanted him moved to a different book does not mean I should discount competent writing and pretty decent supporting characters.

Simon Conley is a gay werewolf whose lifestyle is frowned upon by his pack. He meets geeky veterinarian, Paul Hunter, when he was left to die by the side of the road after being beaten within an inch of his life by five of his packmates. They develop a friendship, Simon pulls an insta-love, and Paul shows how much of a fucking diva he is almost every chance he gets.

I hated Paul and that's a first in a Kaje Harper book for me because she always seemed to manage to make her MCs pretty likable even when they're being insensitive asses. I think it's mainly because despite their faults, those MCs invest in their HEAs and show some balls when needed. They also maintain the hero-hero dynamic that is my main attraction towards m-m romances. Paul is the exception.

He started out fine, what with helping Simon out when Simon was in wolf form and getting the shifter back on his feet, but the more we get to know him and see how he treats Simon, the more glaringly obvious it is that the two of them are not meant for each other.

It's like this. Simon is going insta-love on the vet whose sexual orientation up to that point had been hetero. The ex-hetero is understandably confused but is sexually attracted to the wolf so he kind of decided to explore it. I'm saying kind of because Paul was pulling some passive aggressive shit while Simon was being all I'm-gonna-pursue-you-and-be-a-doormat-despite-you-not-really-showing-more-interest-in-me-than-what-can-be-expected-from-a-baby-gay.

In fact, that's how the whole relationship pretty much goes. Simon pursues and apologizes and bends over backwards for Paul and Paul acts like your run of the mill confused heroine that we all just love to hate. You know the one who can't say what she really wants and acts all "I don't know" every time the hero asks her a straight question? The one who makes the hero do all the work in the relationship and just provides sexual relief? That's Paul, for ya. And if I wanted to read an incompetent heroine, I'd have just re-read When He Was Wicked or something.

Which is really my biggest beef with this book. When I pick up an m-m novel, I expect for both MCs to be men - not one of them to be a bratty, bitchy, unappreciative heroine (ala Eve Dallas) or an immature, irritating boy. I might get flack for this, but Paul honestly read like the most irritating of romance novel heroines. He waited to be pursued, left Simon hanging with his constant "I don't know"s when everyone can see how hard he comes with just a little frotting, and pretty much sat on his ass until he got saved.

If there is anything in this book that showed Paul lifting at least one finger to contribute to the relationship, I never saw it. Simon was the one who made sure he ate (again with the Roarke-Eve Dallas shit), Simon who adjusted depending on the vet's moods, Simon who was willing to face down his pack to save Paul. In exchange, Paul bitched when told by the pack leader that Simon needs to be fed to keep his strength, Paul kept Simon at arm's length even during times when the wolf was in need of at least one friendly shoulder to lean on, Paul let Simon guilt trip himself into thinking shit that happened was all his fault, and Paul made sure the diva-slave dynamic in their relationship remain up to the end of the fucking novel.

I guess Simon is to blame in a way as well - giving Paul a free pass in treating him like shit and all that.

This is still a decent Kaje Harper book despite my grumblings, though, if you can get over the fact that one of the MCs is an ungracious, complaining judgmental little bitch. The supporting characters are interesting and prove to be more of a pull compared to the MCs. The violence behind pack management is explained well and I kinda liked how the setting is described. Aaron is also a turn on, so there might be chance I'll read the next book in the series. As long as there's not much of Paul in it, I guess.
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1,470 reviews167 followers
December 3, 2013
4.3 stars for a well-written really good shifter story - another great read - Ms Harper is a writer to always trust

~ Please, ignore the bland cover! ~

Unacceptable Risk is one of the more down to earth, trustworthy PNR romances I read. This is not “fluff & sparkly cute”, but about two realistic characters with their feet firmly on the ground. Both are struggling with feelings, the thought of being with another man (new for Paul), secrets about yourself (a wolf shifter in Simon's case ) and not always so very understanding Pack members (an understatement).

~ Again, I'm impressed by a Kaje Harper novel. ~
Do you just want a soft and fuzzy read? Don't read this one because this is so much more. ...But, so very lovely and gripping romantic too.

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One evening when Paul is on his way home from his veterinary clinic, he sees a large bundle on the way. A pair of green eyes reflected in the headlights. There is a damaged very large wolf-like dog. Paul manages to get Wolf, which he names the dog, to get in the car and take him to the clinic to get some medical attention. After a few days flees Wolf and Paul makes inquiry pics to paste up around the neighborhood. Almost immediately arrives a green-eyed very handsome man to tell the vet that he, Simon, is the owner of the lost dog. Or what he is not saying to Paul, Simon is the wolf...

Simon makes no secret that he is gay and starts pretty soon flirting with the shy (so far straight) Paul. Slowly, slowly, with the help of sweet donuts, china food, bowling etc get Simon his new friend (and hopefully future lover..) to begin to let go and enjoy a bit of life when he is not the always hard working "Vet Paul".
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“You kissed me.”
“I did. I'm not going to apalogize. You are extremely kissable.”
“I wasn't...I didn't expect you to apologize. I just,” Paul stared down into the mug. “I just wondering why.”
“If I have to explain that to you, you're even less experienced than I think you are.” Simon teased.
Paul's fair skin flushed red. “No, Jesus, I meant why me?”

I enjoyed this slightly innovatory wolf shifter story a lot. It's a nice, soft-hearted, but also to start with, quite anxiety-charged love story begins. There is much back and forth. Paul is anxious and indecisive. Which I actually think is good for it gave the story extra weight and feel of authenticity.

We also get a lot of Pack and werewolf politics. Simon must every day be sure to keep his back free from evil, so called, pack friends. Being gay is "a shame" and very controversial. So far, he is partially protected by the Pack Alpha, but it is on a thin brittle edge all the time. Unlike in many other werewolf's stories, only men can become shifters here. That fact doing it extra tricky with all the secrets.

The (light - this is mostly a love story..) "suspense part" was thrilling in the end. There are some guys to hate and fear (like the evil Karl..). Not unexpectedly becomes of course also Paul's life and safety threatened. - I got some really well-made surprises and everything wasn't to simply solved.
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‘Simon's eyes glowe with that odd green light as he kissed Paul firmly. “Sugar, when you've had sex with me, I'll be damned if you call it nice.”

There is of course also heat, lust and a slowly growing beautiful love story. I must admit that it was a slow burning story but in the end, so good.

I am now a big fan of Kaje Harper's writing. Her books have something magical and different from many other M/M romances. They are more everyday (even in a paranormal romance) and gives, in each case me, a sense of authenticity and good taste. Completely in my romantic taste every now and then. ~ I just want to read more of them.

I LIKE - very much - big applause for a well-made shifter story!


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If I have to complain about one thing, it must be that boring gray book cover. Why has this amazing author's books so dreary and bland covers. It must, of course not, be some naked muscular guys, sexy or very sophisticated, but it may perhaps be a little more enticing.

...So don't worry about the cover. "Unacceptable Risk" is NOT a gray-beige colorless story. On the contrary!
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783 reviews93 followers
November 13, 2011
Full five stars

Now, this is a kind of m/m romance that I love. Let me list the reasons.

1. The characters are males with penis. Not female with penis. Surely no damsel in distress. Even Paul, who physically is weaker, doesn't behave like he is dependent of Simon.

2. The romance is strong and sweet. Paul has doubts. Yet, he chooses to work on it. He may need time to think, but he does't stop the communication between them or being sulky all the time.

3. There is no unnecessary angst created by a reversed deus ex machina. Some authors sometimes run out of ideas on how to make their characters suffer, so out of nowhere they make the characters commit stupid action. Not here. No stupid misunderstanding to create plots.

4. No running around evolution. One of the main tenet of evolution is survival of the fittest. Sometimes, to do so, they have to kill. Just like characters in the pack. So often our 'modern' minds condemn all kind of violence, even when its needed to minimize the risk of bigger violence. That Paul is a vet perhaps helps. At least it makes sense to him when Aaron explained to him the reason of the violence.

5.

Thank you, Kaje!

Do I see a hint of Aaron being the next character?
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6,210 reviews489 followers
October 15, 2011
I have only discovered Kaje Harper in August 2011 -- and in that short span of time, she has bursted into my list of favorite authors. You might want to check another review from MandyM, whom I share a similar opinion with regarding this book

Unacceptable Risk is definitely a breath of fresh air, in a clutter of M/M shifter books that I have read (and yes, I love me shifter books :p).

One, there is no story of those "You're my mate, so let's go have sex and seal the deal" theme. Simon (the werewolf) doesn't immediately think of Paul (the vet) as his mate. The two guys actually take time to explore what can happen between them, and what mate-bond entails. Even if they arrive in that finish line under forced circumstance, I still find it believable.

It's also a gay-for-you story, since Paul has never even thought that he could swing that way before Simon. So it's the second reason why this is a fresh air ... that Paul also takes time to see what his attraction means. He even tries to check out straight porn and comparing to gay porn! I find that fun to read :)

And what other thing that makes this book a winner? The whole visciousness of the werewolf pack. Somehow, it's great to read about a pack where there are actual fights to claim the position. The fight in the end is a climax I welcome. Pack is not always just fun, and the whole pack politic reminds me of the fun I read of Patricia Briggs's or Ilona Andrews's series. Oh, and even if I don't think Aaron is a perfect Alpha name, dang if he doesn't (borrowing Mandy's word here) have the "Hawke" vibe (referring to my beloved Alpha on Nalini Singh's Psy/Changeling) series.

I do have a couple of niggles though. One, I cringe on the "baby" and "sugar" terms of endearment (at least the baby thing is not overused). And two, OMG, who makes the HIDEOUS cover!??!?!
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1,314 reviews279 followers
November 2, 2011
I don't really know what to say. Its not a bad book, nicely written but didn't hold my attention. I never really warmed up to Paul though I mostly liked Simon I didn't really see them going together as a couple.

Then the first half of the book was boring. Like nothing happened besides the same boring thing over and over. They would get close, Paul would pull away, we spent the day with both of them at work thinking about each other blah blah it was like that cycle through the first half. I got really bored with them at work doing nothing. i kept putting this down and i think i started and finished three other books before making it through half of this one. Second half was much better but still never really got me that into the story

Also the very descriptive female porn watching scene could have done without that. I think i would have liked it more if first half would have had more going on besides excessive details of their jobs or if parts of the first half where just cut out of the story.
864 reviews230 followers
August 9, 2016

M/M Bingo
Round 8 - Week 2
"Best Gay Shifters"


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3.5 stars

So…shifters.

I decided to finally take part in the Goodreads M/M Romance Group’s Bingo game this round. (For those who aren’t familiar with bingo, check out the info HERE.) In any case, I’m trying to challenge myself this year with more categories and genres and stuff beyond the contemporary cop/cowboy book or my easy-to-please need for YA. This week’s round was “Best Gay Shifter Romance” and I had to select from a predetermined list.

Some background…shifters just…don’t do it for me. Maybe it’s the Twilight thing. I don’t know. I just don’t have an urge or desire to read about them…and for some reason, my mind always associates shifters with…bad odor. ha! (I can’t even explain it myself). I’ve read one M/M shifter book that I liked (“Until Forever Comes” by Cardeno C), but that was shifter and vampire. I can kinda deal with that.

Unacceptable Risk is by one of my favorite authors…one of my go-to’s…Kaje Harper. Sadly, it starts already with the handicap that I don’t like shifters. And then, well, it pairs a shifter with a human. And then, well, the human meets the shifter in wolf form first (the human is a veterinarian) and there’s some weird bond there already forming. And I’m thinking blech…beastiality. So, let’s say, this book starts already at maybe a -1 star rating. (sorry!)

But then Kaje Harper works her magic.

The story is about Paul, a vet, and Simon, a gay shifter who is constantly at risk because of a pack who doesn’t welcome him. Seems bigotry and hate are prevalent in all societies, unfortunately. And the book takes us not only through a growing relationship, but it includes GFY elements, instalove, pack politics, danger, and some seriously exciting fight scenes.

I found Paul and Simon both really easy to like. Paul was just confused and wary and reluctant and stubborn and needy enough to make him believable and charming. Simon was just alpha and protective and smitten and proud and determined enough to make him believable and charming. The two of them together were HOT, funny, sweet, frustrating…and I found myself fully committed to their journey.

When the book started getting into the details of the pack, including growing factions, angry youth, challenges to authority, etc…I was less engaged. I mean, it was all really fascinating and Harper really WENT for it in these scenes. I just personally didn’t want to go there with her. And that goes back to my starting point and my disinterest in shifters.

So, I think the book and the writing and the story were all really really really good. And if I have to read a shifter book for bingo, I’m super glad it was this one. I would HIGHLY recommend it to not only fans of shifters, but also those who don’t mind them. But, since I’m just not into it, it didn’t resonate or hit the high points for me personally. Still…enjoyed it…and by the way? I just realized there are additional books and shorts to the series…and I may even go on to read those!
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2,024 reviews230 followers
September 30, 2013
If this was Review-a-Vision then you’d be blinded by a grin the size of the Grand Canyon because right now I’m one very happy reviewer and feeling even more so because I know I’ve got three more books - one novel and two ‘ interlude’ shorts - to read and review from this brilliant Werewolf series by Kaje Harper. What’s even better is I get to read them for free. Yaay…How cool is that!

I’ve been reading M/M for just over two years and for some strange reason have only just got around to reading Kajes books. I can’t believe I waited so long! Before striking gold with this series I’d not long ago read ‘The Rebuilding Year’ a standalone contemporary romance that I loved, and then because I enjoyed that so much read the first book in her wonderful series ‘Life Lessons’ that also wowed me, so I was intrigued to see if she could impress me with a series set around a genre that to be honest I’ve become more than a little jaded with …

So, colour me VERY impressed.

Loved, loved, loved it! Probably the most realistic take on Werewolves that I’ve ever come across. Nothing over the top or beyond belief, this story almost made me believe that unbeknown to us humans, Werewolves are living amongst us, working alongside us and living their lives quietly and secretly, just hiding below the radar and keeping themselves to themselves. It was believable and totally engrossing.

“We’re a rare species, trying to survive surrounded by millions of humans. We don’t have super strength, or immortality, or mental powers like in the movies. We survive by not being seen.”

” But, on the down side, that means no superpowers. If neither man nor a wolf can do something, odds are we can’t either. If we are magic, there are a few things I wish the wizard had added in.”


The world building around the Were’s is brilliant. The pack mentality is there and the mate bond that of course we’ve come to expect from wolf lore but this has has little to do with full moons or rampant flesh eating monsters with claws and big teeth! They heal fast, live quite a bit longer than humans, have enhanced senses and shift of course but Kajes wolves are more dangerous to each other than the humans they hide from.

“And the pack lived by rules, fiercely enforced and unbreakable”

So when Paul stops to pick up an injured Simon in his wolf form one night, little does he know how his life is going to change.

Simon is a funny, warm and loving character. I adored him. His status within the pack is tenuous because he’s gay, having talked his way out of a death sentence because of it, he’s barely tolerated by the rest of the wolves and although he tries to live his life without getting too involved, is caught up in pack politics, as a faction led by the Alphas evil second and ex enforcer Karl, tries to take over the pack using Simon as a catalyst. Falling in love with Paul, who he ( and his wolf ) recognises as his mate, puts them both in danger....please read rest f review at http://sidlove.wordpress.com/2013/05/...
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868 reviews32 followers
October 11, 2020
Re-read #3 Oct 2020 -
I'll be honest, I wasn't really in the mood for any book - I had exams and was stressed and couldn't focus and was in a bit of a book burnout after a really intense group challenge - but maybe exactly because of all of it, this story came as a balm for my soul. I would work hard during the day and then, when I go to bed at something o'clock in the morning, I would read about Simon and Paul, and the easy familiarity of an old favorite soothed me enough I could fall asleep, even stressed as I was. And the first thing I did when I finished my last exam today - I sat in my favorite chair and I finished it.

I love Kaje Harper's stories. To me, re-reading her books is like warping myself in a favorite blanket and being all warm & toasty while listening to the falling rain outside. And re-reading Unacceptable Risk this time was like meeting an old friend you didn't think you really missed until you met them again by accident.

Re-read #2 Jun 2016 - This re-read around I was really annoyed by Simon's constant use of "sugar" :/ Still awesome though!

Re-read #1 Apr 2013
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Author 251 books3,473 followers
September 14, 2012
Simon and Paul are a perfectly wonderful couple, and I loved that all of Paul's worries about a VERY worrisome subject were not wrapped up or dismissed. There would be repercussions from the ending, and I think that's only fair, since the rest of the book felt authentic and real, right down to Simon's role as resident smartass.
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973 reviews117 followers
May 26, 2013
4.5

Some stellar world-building here. I was impressed with the werewolf politics and how things played out, it was integral to the plot but it never overpowered the relationship building between Simon and Paul. I liked that things moved slowly and when circumstances force them into high gear that worked for me as well.

Lots of chemistry and surprisingly lots of humour, especially from Simon who uses his wit as a buffer to protect himself and others in the rigid werewolf hierarchy. This was a great book and one of the better werewolf stories I've read with a really coherent and developed story line with a strong romantic element.
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2,333 reviews39 followers
March 25, 2012
I’m a fan of shifter/werewolf stories but haven’t read one in a while! I loved this story!

Paul and Simon’s relationship was perfect it moved along at just the right pace. No angst just a beautiful, romantic love story.

Simon was the perfect gentleman, no I see you, I want you, you’re mine. He courted Paul which made this story different than other shifter/werewolf stories. He brought gifts (food) made him dinner (more food) and took on a date I can’t remember if there was food. LOL

Paul, sweet, sweet Paul supposedly the weaker of the two but I thought he had great strength!
It's nice to have a story where the main characters start as friends and end as lovers!

Well done Kaje! You are on my list of Auto buy authors and you never disappoint. Thank you!
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932 reviews
February 10, 2012
This book was such a change from most of the shifter books that I have read, thanks for that. I really enjoyed the way the Simon and Paul got together, it wasn't instant and they started more as friends, getting to know each other, at least from Pauls POV, even though Simon was pushing for more. The whole plot, including the hierarchy was interesting and kept the book moving along. There was a more realistic (if that is possible in a shifter book) tone that most books don't have. I thoroughly enjoyed this and really look forward to the next book to find out more.
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353 reviews127 followers
November 10, 2011
The Bloodlust & Mayhem Club Says 3 Stars

Hello everyone, my name is Laddie, I'm a bloodlust-aholic and I call this meeting to order.

One of my main gripes with books lately has been the absence of grit.
Kaje Harper's Unacceptable Risk didn't vibe with me completely but one thing this story did do was give me a group of shifters whose actions had me rubbing my hands together with eeeeevil glee.

The werewolf pack politics in this book were awesome. The pack infrastructure was rigid to say the least. These wolves fight to get where they are and they fight to keep their positions or move up in the ranks. Also, the way they handle alot of things is to simply kill people off.

Gay werewolves? Get killed.
Werewolves who reveal the existence of werewolves? Get killed.
Humans who find out about werewolves? Get killed.
If you lose a challenge? You get killed.

And where do all of these dead bodies go? Oh, accidents are staged and bodies are burned in a secret incinerator. Vicious! This book was like a breath of fresh air where shifters are concerned. These wolves were not at all cuddly. I'd pick the mafia over these guys.

Those three stars are for the pack politics. Yes, I loved the shifters in this book that much.

Now, unfortunately, the other aspects of this book fell short for me. Simon is a gay werewolf who is alive only because he's taken an oath to never be alone with a shifter younger than he is. He's a quick witted and handsome guy who falls for Paul a lonely veterinarian. Simon and Paul were characters that I liked but I didn't love them. There was nothing that really endeared them to me. Because of that, it took me a long time to finish this book. I wasn't invested in Paul and Simon's romance.

I think that this book suffered a bit because it's the first in the series. Alot of effort went into making the werewolf pack come alive and this book was a total success in that regard. The romance kind of got left behind though. Now, knowing that, I'm definitely going to read the second book in the series. Hopefully it's about the pack alpha, Aaron. I think that now that the scene has been set, the romance in the second book will hopefully be as strong as the other aspects of the story.















Profile Image for Jess Candela.
624 reviews37 followers
January 26, 2014
Updated review 25 January 2014:

I couldn't get into any of the various shifter books I tried for Bingo. So I decided to reread this one. Since the first time I read it was when that category was called for the first Bingo round, it was a bit of a sentimental choice. Plus, it's always nice to reread a favorite book.

But, silly me, I started it at night before bed. I then read the first 45% of it, and had to force myself to put it down to get enough sleep. I was eager to finish it the next day, and so glad I had the rest of the series (so far) already on my ereader, as I continued on with them immediately. And then did stay up too late, unable to put Unexpected Demands down for too long.

If anything, I think I loved Paul and Simon more, now that I know them better. And although it's made explicit in the text, I'm not sure I'd really grokked before that at the end of the book, they've only known each other two weeks. Fully understanding that helps put Paul's freak-out in clearer perspective, and makes me love and appreciate him all the more. I'm sooo glad Kaje wrote the interlude story, because it felt important to get to see more of them grappling with being together, before diving into Aaron's perspective in Unexpected Demands.

Original review 29 October 2011

I could say this is one of the best werewolf books I've read in a while, but that wouldn't be saying much because I don't read many. Though I love them when I find a good one, for some reason they just don't usually work for me. However, I could also say that this is one of the best books I've read in a while. Period. And considering how much I read and how rarely I like werewolf books, that really is saying something. It's been less than two months since I read my first Kaje Harper book, but she's rapidly becoming one of my favorite authors.

I loved how *real* these characters were. Even with the paranormal "mate" aspect, Simon didn't go over-the-top bananas about it. And even though he fell in love quickly, that was done realistically, too. Insta-love is one of my big pet peeves, it almost never rings true for me. But it worked for me the way it was handled in this book. I loved the scene when Paul tells him how crazy that is, and Simon acknowledges that but says that while Paul has the right to tell him to back off, he doesn't have the right to tell Simon how to feel.

And Paul. How much do I adore Paul, a scientist portrayed correctly, as an actual logical, analytical scientist? So often we're told characters are scientists, but then they think and behave in ways no one who's had a shred of scientific training would ever do. But Paul was a scientist through and through. Things like this quote made me shiver with delight:
His computer stood there on the desktop, waiting for him. He had been walking around it all day. Because he had scientific training, and that training said if you wanted to answer a question, you did the research. And the Internet was out there, offering to let him do just that.
YES! And then he proceeded to scientifically test his hypothesis. Even down to recognizing that "All the positive evidence in the world wasn't proof. You could claim that every animal in the world was a cat, and each cat you saw would support that theory, but the first dog you saw would destroy it. You had to check the negative." There are even actual scientists who sometimes lose sight of that little fact, so reading this made me almost giddy.

That perfect attention to detail, to reality, continued throughout the book. There were one or two moments when I questioned word choice (at one point Simon makes a point to stay "upwind" of someone when I'm pretty sure he'd have been better off staying downwind), but those were minor niggles in a fantastic story. The end felt complete, not a rushed wrap-up or anything. The only reason I wasn't quite ready for it was because I didn't want this book to end. Ever. So I'm very much looking forward to the next book, but it's not because I was left hanging by this one, it's because I want more more more. That is a feeling I'm learning to expect at the end of any book by this author.
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699 reviews
August 7, 2018
Kaje Harper taking on shifters, how will it turn out? I've been shying away from shifter stories lately. They either feel the same with nothing original to them anymore or feel too different throwing in everything under the sun only to come out too bizarre for my simple mind to handle. This book proves a solid cast of characters, a story without any major weirdness and an actual plot and wonderful writing all the way through can make anything work. And just about everything in this book did work for me from Paul and Simon's romance to the pack's life and politics and ALL things to do with shifting. Wait, did I see somewhere Aaron is next? Is it true? :D :D :D
Profile Image for Feliz.
Author 59 books108 followers
October 20, 2011
As a member of an all-male, strongly hierarchic and mostly homophobic werewolf society who solve their problems with non-conformists by killing said overstepper, Simon Conley is lucky to have survived his coming-out. Since then, he's been living on the outskirts of his pack, looked at askance but mostly - if grudgingly- tolerated since he has managed to make a place for himself despite everything. But the pack's balance has become precarious as their old alpha weakens, and with the loss of balance Simon's hard-won position is in danger, too. This leads to Simon being attacked by a bunch of bullies, which among werewolves, might amount to deadly. It is also clearly intended to be so as his attackers leave Simon, in his wolf form, bleeding and barely conscious in the middle of a frozen, snow-covered street to be run over by the next best truck.
Lucky for Simon, the next best truck turns out to be veterinarian Paul Hunter's. Even more to Simon's luck, Paul is devoted enough to his job that he immediately sets about saving the life of the big dog he thinks Simon's wolf is. Unlucky for Simon, Paul gets attached to his wolf in a way that makes it difficult to keep his dual nature a secret. Revealing who he is amounts to a deadly sin among werewolves, so Simon takes on every effort to destroy Paul's suspicion. Unfortunately Simon finds himself strongly attracted to the quiet, secretive, workaholic Paul. While Simon's wolf liked the man for his friendliness, Simmon, the man, wants Paul like nothing else. Paul bristling at him, Paul being straight, and Paul being a human Simon must lie to in order to leave him in the dark, are only minor obstacles to Simmon's determination.

This well-written story moved at a fast pace, with the conflicts among the werewolves and Paul's inner struggles making for a lot of enjoyable tension. While the focus of this book was on the relationship (one of the most convincing straight-to-gay plots I've ever come across), the author created a vivid and detailed picture of this unusual werewolf society, including complicated pack politics and a rather special lore. Add to it beautifully erotic sex scenes, subdued yet burning emotions, artfully threwn in sparkling humor, and werewolves who keep their wolf instincts even in human form, and this book kept me glued to the pages. Highly recommended.
Profile Image for Gina.
753 reviews111 followers
January 31, 2014
OMG I TOTALLY LOVE THIS BOOK!

I love shifter stories and i have read plenty of them, this is one that will stay with me. What appealed to me the most about this book were the characters. They were not uber badass alpha men, someone you would never run into in real life. But a slightly geeky, totally devoted to his work heart of gold, with a bad self image veterinarian named Paul. And the werewolf Simon, he is ranked in the middle of pack, he is barely tolerated because being gay is considered a perversion. Simon keeps to himself, no real friends in his pack.

The story starts with Paul closing up late one snowy winter night and almost running over what he thinks is a dog in the road. The animal was lying hurt and beaten in the middle of the road, from what appears to be multiple animal bites and cuts. Of course what Paul doesn’t know it’s Simon in his werewolf form. There are no wizards, angels, magic, the werewolf society is not bursting with money and influence. Their success to staying alive is secrecy, breaking this rule means death.

Simon was a sweet character that I so loved loved loved! He was devoted, patient, caring, protective. Because he is gay and most of his pack consider it a perversion he is always looking over his shoulder. He is always on the lookout for an attack, isolated, not sure if he can trust anyone.

I enjoyed the buildup of this story and the relationship between Paul and Simon. This was not insta-love, hot sex first with the relationship happening after. And while it was another GFY story, it felt totally believable to me. The suspense part of this story was also wonderful, who is out to get Simon? How is Simon going to keep Paul safe and out of the the line of fire?

Overall this was a 5 star hit! And I am happy happy happy to move onto the next books in this series!! Winner!!!
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2,197 reviews340 followers
March 24, 2012
I like Ms Harper's books, and this one was no exception.
I like shifter books too, so I was happy to finally get my act together and read this one.
My favorite part was that Paul and Simon didn't have instant mating, falling into bed, and the resulting all will be well with us, because you know, we are mates!
The pack politics were interesting, violent and weaves through the story.
Paul is a good guy and remarkably well adjusted despite his childhood, considering how easily he accepted not only being gay, but being in a relationship with a werewolf and said werewolfs pack wanting to kill them! :)
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639 reviews90 followers
April 30, 2013
In the days before e-readers, I read the "Twilight" saga on the recommendation of a friend in Eire. We eagerly anticipated each new publishing and purchased the hardback editions as they were released.
When the saga reached it's end I looked around for something in a similar vein to read, something paranormal. What a load of rubbish there is out there! The Kindle was my friend by this stage and I happily downloaded novels about Vampires, novels about Werewolves and novels about Vampires and Werewolves from the M/M section.
Again....What a load of rubbish there is out there. I was thoroughly put off the genre. Then I found Kaje Harper and loved her style, her plots, her story-telling and most of all her characters. Her "Life Lessons" trilogy hit all the right buttons for me, and then I noticed on the author's page that she'd written a Werewolf saga.
I admit to being reticent, I mean, What a load of rubbish there is out there, but here is an author I like so....
Loved it! So very different from the usual Werewolf / Paranormal m/m stuff. This novel was a pleasure to read.
"Simon Conley was born a werewolf, making him one of a tiny minority in a sea of vanilla humans. The safety of the pack lies in absolute secrecy, sometimes violently enforced. In a species where pack-members are born and not made, being gay is considered a perversion. So when Simon falls in love with a human man, (a straight vet at that) he's twice damned. Even his Alpha's grudging tolerance may not be enough to shield him from the hatred of the other top wolves. Then his lover Paul stumbles across pack secrets Simon was sworn to keep, and if the pack finds out, they may both end up dead".
Yes, the story is gripping. It opens with Paul the vet, nearly running over a large injured "dog" (yeah, right) in the snow. The animal is near death, viciously attacked and losing blood. Someone has dumped the dog on the road in the path of oncoming cars. Said big dog is bundled into the back of Paul's car and taken to his surgery and thus the love story begins.
Incidentally, the two main characters look nothing like the hideous cover to this book (IMHO).
Profile Image for Deanna.
2,725 reviews65 followers
June 28, 2015
I love shifter stories, especially gay shifter stories and this was no exception to that love. There is a slightly different spin to the shifter mystic in this one. These shifters have some of the usual shifter benefits, but not all. The creation of this community was clear and complex. The inhabitants had both good and bad traits just like "normal" humans. Theirs is a harsh world that must protect the secret of their existence.

Paul is works too hard as the sole veterinarian of his own practice and works much to hard for his own health. He is compassionate. On a snowy night he stops and rescues a large dog that he thinks was victim of a hit and run. He is drawn to the dog and thinks about keeping if he can save its life.

Simon is a gay shifter, a fact not accepted by most of his pack. Gay pack members are ordinarily killed when it is discovered. Simon has some support but not all. Someone wants him dead and left him to die in the snow on that lonely road. Since Paul first sees him as a "dog" Simon must retain his wolf while in the clinic.

Simon returns as a human to make sure Paul does not keep searching for the "dog" he had saved. Simon is drawn to Paul both by his wolf and his human side. He knows Paul is his mate. This puts Paul's life in as much jeopardy as Simon's.

I felt the attraction between Simon and Paul. Yes it was quick, but they were "true mates" so I con forgive the speed. I enjoyed Simon's attempt to woo Paul but not be too overpowering. They made an adorable couple. Of course not all could go easily for them and that is the story. Paul's reactions were believable.

Kaje Harper knows how to write and how to capture her reader's attention. I will continue reading this series.
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676 reviews
December 14, 2011
5+ Stars! Wow Kaje, you had me from the beginning to the end. The story just kept building from strength to strength. Simon, a werewolf and Paul a vetranerian were real men with men's reactions and actions. No wimps here. I experienced fesr, loneliness, harsh punishment, friendship, joy, romance and love with a good amount of laughter. The sexual expressions between Simon and Paul are beautifully written and perfectly placed in the story contributing to the overall effect of the book on one's passion for the MCs.
Kaje has created a slightly darker version of were society than most in this genre. Hierarchy is absolute and brutal is this pack yet there are insidious conspiracies that are affecting our heroes. Gripping to the end. The stark choice everyone has to make at the end shows two paths that in some way mirror our own society today.
Speaking of ending, I plead for a sequel! Even though the beginnings of a new life have started, there are still loose threads and dark omens that would make a great continuation of this story.
Love this book and the conclusion I have to make is anything Kaje writes I want to read, knowing I will end up cherishing it like I have Paul and Simon!
Beautiful!
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2,174 reviews109 followers
August 24, 2021
Interesting and original take on werewolves. No female shifters so they have to mate with humans and no other type of shifter or paranormal creatures.

I liked Simon right away and he was quite tenacious with Paul. Poor Paul didn't know what to think...he doesn't know if he's gay, but he knows that he needs Simon.

In some places, it dragged a little and it seemed Paul was always pulling back. But overall all, very enjoyable and I'll for sure read about Aaron. I did get mixed-up sometimes with all the other shifter guys...all their names kind of blended together.
Profile Image for Gabi.
702 reviews112 followers
October 6, 2020
dnf @67%
I was enjoying this mostly. I liked the growing romance and wanted to get on with it, so I felt annoyed when some pack business interrupted the development. There were some inconsistencies with Simon's personality, which was weird to me. You see... I quite liked him in his wolf form and when I was reading his pov. But when I read from Paul's pov, how Simon acted around Paul, the wolf came off as a smug dick.
In the end I lost interest.
Profile Image for Simsala.
524 reviews58 followers
October 27, 2011
4,5 stars

Should be used as a manual for other m/m authors how to write
a perfect shifter/werewolf story.
Loved it!
0,5 stars less for "sugar"....

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259 reviews31 followers
October 16, 2011
This is easily the best shifter book I've ever read and the author also did a fantastic job of making GFY believable.
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