This was a page turner and was so well written that you feel anxious right along with Sam and Alan. What I didn't really understand about this though was Alan's insistence that he was an accomplice to what Sam did. Alan didn't know Sam had it planned, didn't know anything until after the fact. I don't understand his or Sam's concern that Alan would be convicted of murder when he neither helped plan or commit the act. Seems the worst he could be convicted of is failure to report a felony, right? This was one reason I knocked a star off. I just didn't understand that part of the story at all. And for the record, I didn't like how Sam handled the situation. I realize it was intentionally done as a set-up for this book down the road, but it would have been so much more satisfying for the reader if Sam and Alan could have figured out a way to outsmart both Brown and McClellan and gotten her caught too.
The other reason I knocked a star off. I have always liked Raoul but have never liked Diane. She is very flippant about others' thoughts and feelings and very into herself. She sees herself as this amazing therapist yet when she so desperately needs therapy herself, she dismisses it. I have had trouble with another series (Jenny Colgan's Beach Street Bakery) introducing an entirely new, never before mentioned drama late in the series, with so much emphasis on the main character's daddy issues that it prevents her from getting married and moving on in her life for a while, but no daddy issues were ever mentioned in previous books and she was excited at the thought of marrying her fiancé in prior books also. It seemed like Colgan was running out of ideas and needed to create some drama so she invented a new one, but it was too late in the series to make sense for the main character. My point is that in this book, I felt the same way about Diane's and Raoul's marriage. All of a sudden they're, what? Swingers? And Raoul's "heart belongs to Diane" but he sleeps with other women? And all of a sudden Raoul has squandered his massive wealth (which was assuredly not a problem in the previous book which took place only months before this one)? They were going to parties together and planning a big move with Raoul convincing Alan to sell their building so he could Diane the view she wanted? No. Everything about Raoul and Diane in this book was too abrupt and just didn't make sense for these characters, at least not to me. If Alan had written a steady decline through the last few books since Diane's kidnapping in Las Vegas, it might have made more sense. But if it's true that Stephen White's publisher said he had to wrap up the Alan Gregory series in just two more books, then it seems like White had to contrive this random and sudden marital explosion of two of the main characters just to create a new drama and burn some bridges between Alan and other characters. As Peter and Adrienne have already been killed off, and possibly Lauren (it's not clear at the end of this book if she pulled through or not) there is no one left for Alan except the kids and Sam. Can't people just ever move away and that be a good enough send-off???
Lastly, the unanswered questions and other things that didn't make sense. Diane bursts into Alan's office and says "this wasn't how you were supposed to help." But if she didn't send Amanda to see Alan, then what was she talking about? She didn't want Alan's help with anything except agreeing to sell the Walnut building (which was settled in the last book) and convincing her to move into the hideous apartment. (Also, why does he call it a flat? The British call them "flats" because all the rooms are on a single story, so it's a "flat" dwelling. I've noticed White uses a lot of British words and I love British authors and dialect but his use of the word "flat" was wrong and it annoyed me every time.) Other things were thrown out but didn't make sense either. Raoul mentions Diane and a rape but that's never come up before and is never mentioned again. Diane can't finish a freaking sentence but somehow it's determined through her babbling that she might be pregnant, even though she never mentions it, and quite honestly the way she's talking about her "window" makes it sound more like she's not pregnant and further resents Amanda because she IS. Also, if Diane has chlamydia, she's very likely to be infertile anyway. Just everything with Diane and Raoul was so left field. There were other ways to send them off. Like Diane wants to move and start over, so they move out of Boulder and Alan is short a partner. So many better opportunities that would have made so much more sense!