I started this book with a great deal of curiosity recently, for a book club. I had tried to read Gertrude Stein before--Tender Buttons--but have to admit that that novel bounced me out on the first page. Three Lives was an excellent introduction to her project, and accessible enough that I didn't quit right away, but actually got through the semi-middle of the second novella.
The actual "stories" of Three Lives, two German American servant women and a black woman mostly in mind-numbing conversation with a lover, were hardly what made Stein's reputation. It was the prose itself in which she made her impact, this weird, intriguing, blocky repetitive way of storytelling that reminded me a good deal of the oral tradition of folk tales, even of Homer. The way people are described by a certain rhythmic set of adjectives, and so they would always remain--types, rather than individual people.
For example, in the first story, which I did manage to get through--"The Good Anna"-- Anna's first employer is described as a 'large, fair, helpless woman..." and continues to be described that way each time, as is her current employer, another of the same type, and the words repeat in a singsong, "Anna found her place with large, abundant women, for such were always lazy, careless or all helpless..." "Anna's superiors must be always these large helpless women..." whereas Anna works and worries: "But when she was once more at work for her Miss Mary Wadsmith, all the good effect of those several months of rest were soon worked and worried away." There's great alliteration here too..
So what is Stein's project in Three Lives? It seems, to replicate way the mind loops back around to the same forms, the same shapes. There is an implicit world view of the human being here--one of stasis, and the lack of ordination of importance--small things and large things are given equal weight, like a Cezanne painting, an artist whom Stein admired, paying equal attention and weight to every part of the canvas, placing brushstroke side by side by side. "Anna was a medium sized, thin, hardworking, worrying woman." and so she will ever be. There's a good deal of sly humor in the first tale, watching Anna, who uses her position for the purposes of gaining power in each household. I enjoyed it a lot more than I thought I was going to.
Which was not the case in the second, longer story--that of the black woman, Melanctha, which I could only get about a third the way through. The blatant and unthinking racism not withstanding, the repetition here wasn't in the least bit fun, it was just brutal, especially in the dialogue. Good lord, I could not stand to read Melanctha's name repeated again and again twenty times in a single block of dialogue. It was like being punched in the arm in the same place, over and over again. I even liked her logic, she was much more realistic than the good Anna. For instance, Melanctha has an alcoholic friend, Jane, from whom she learned 'the wisdom of the world'. The boyfriend, with whom most of this excruciating dialogue takes place, is a doctor who is treating Jane and likes her a good deal. The doctor purports the best way to live is to avoid excitement, and yet Melanctha points out that that is exactly what he likes about Jane, than she's led an exciting life. But the writing... how many times can one stand to read the same point made over and over, and the repetition of character names in spoken utterance. It finally threw me out.
I am not rating Three Lives, as what Stein is trying to do was so extraordinary for her time--in 1906 she was attempting in prose what the modern artists she collected, Cezanne, Picasso, etc, were doing in art. Maybe a 5 for Inventiveness and 2 for pleasure? But she is the anti-Virginia Woolf--a note also given by another person in my book group!-- giving these people little interior life, and the blocky woodenness of the language, which was ultimately more than I could bear.
What was interesting is how you can see what Hemingway learned from her. He is not the avant gardist she is. He was a young and impressionable writer when he met her in Paris and she introduced him to her circle. And you can hear the coming of Hemingway in some of her simple constructions (she rarely uses a dependent clause, always the conjunction 'and'). Definitely she has a major place in the development of literature in English, and so worth trying out.
My advice is to read and enjoy the first story and figure, as Ram Dass said, "When you get the message, hang up the phone."