JON and WHITNEY
Okay, this book really had so much potential but ended up being so cringe!! It really annoys me when a story than can be good with a little bit of editing, is left to its whim.
Jon and Whitney gave the perfect lusty, sexy, obsessive, stalker-ish and insta-love vibes. The only issue I had with the book was the amount of ‘Daddy,’ ‘Daddy,’ ‘Daddy,’ used in this book was too much and excessive. It ended up being more uncomfortable than hot.
The whole point of daddy-kink was completely lost.
The good thing is that there is a story – somewhat. It’s not like a one-shot of just lust and sex.
The juxtaposition of the pure, virginal white dressed Whiteney and the blue-collar sexy older construction worker is well written, giving you the prefect opposite attract trope and the taboo feel, but the daddy-kink ruined it.