author’s note: baby dragon is evil
Readers should be forewarned that the baby dragon is evil. The author’s note at the end explains: “We can all blame Bale for the “dark” in the series’ “nobledark”. He, unlike any other dragon I’m aware of in the traditional dragon rider fantasy niche, is not inherently noble and good. Because the main dragon is an anti-hero, we see the FMC facing a lot of tough decisions and moral dilemmas in the name of protecting her dragon, the one she loves most.”
As for our FMC, the author also says, “But that’s why many on Elondria would see Skálda as a villain, and they wouldn’t entirely be wrong.”
The author writes her characters as morally gray, to the point where she has to explain in the author’s note at the end who the villain is. “You might also have unresolved questions about Eyrek. My friend, I hope you’ve seen enough of Eric to know this: as the Lord prince’s best friend, he is his overlord‘s righthand thrall and the central villain of A Breaking of Realms (and with the split, A Vanishing of Kings)… Let’s just say he’s a complicated character who’s not black-and-white evil… And because we are navigating through a nobledark world, also consider that he’s not entirely good or evil. He’s human, and every human lives on a moral spectrum. Without question he is a villain.”
So our FMC: villain, MMC: villain, and the baby dragon: pursues evil, aka villain.
I would not consider this to be nobledark. Noble/Grim refers to the main characters’ morality. Bright/Dark refers to the overall pleasantness of the setting. If all of the main characters can be referred to as evil/dark/villain, and the continent is ruled by sadistic killers with whole towns and cities being leveled, then you have a grimdark novel.
As a reader, I am sick and tired of authors trying to convince everyone that it is okay to be “sometimes evil”. The author repeatedly talks about how ”every human lives on a moral spectrum” and “It’s not as simple as telling an animal to fight against what is in their nature. We are all wired a certain way.” and “Characters carrying gray morals”. Nowadays a character will murder his neighbor and set his house on fire, but hey, he saved the puppies….sooooo morally gray. Or in this case, the “good-ish” characters murder puppies, with the FMC doing this for a living. (BTW, if you are a fan of dogs, don’t read this series, they all get slaughtered, as do most of the dragons you will meet.) But geez, at least she promises to never write with curse words! SMH
Also, I find the author’s writing style to be clunky and a bit confusing. Here are a few examples:
“It shall be a most pleasant journey we’ve ahead, you and I” Just oddly worded.
“Pink evenfall diffused through the vaporous air, gently warming his hands.” I have no idea how his hands are getting warm.
“the Elvish blade had touched her above her throat stone.” There is no explanation for what a “throat stone” is on a human woman. I am a human woman, and I have never heard of this anatomical feature. Do I have a “throat stone”? Am I missing my “throat stone”? (There is no indication that she could be referring to an Adam’s apple)