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"But when the scales tip, and Chaos rains, who will fight? And who will fall?"
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ㅤㅤThe second instalment in the Legacy series is surely bound to bring to light and to force you to endure the greatest frustration ever by bringing you right back into the doomed world of Devram, a world of villains where even the most noble of intentions must first endure the test of betrayals, lies and deception.
ㅤㅤWhat I did come to realise while reading Storm of Secrets and Sorrow is definitely that this is not a series for those weak of heart. Do not start reading this series expecting to find some beautiful and pure romance blooming in a world surrounded by darkness and ill intentions and do not expect villains to turn into heroes too soon. This book made it very clear that everyone is a morally-grey character, everyone has their own agenda and secrets are the best currency. But what I regrettably also found while reading this book is a pretty big letdown, demonstrating that when the characters aren't given enough attention and are completely unreasonable and infuriating, even a fantastic universe, a compelling story, and a fascinating prophecy are insufficient to elevate a work of fiction. It was a great tragedy that this book, regrettably, appeared to suffer from the infamous "second book syndrome."
ㅤㅤAfter highly enjoying the first book, I was completely disappointed with this sequel. I debated giving this a better rating because I didn’t want to base my review strictly on my personal taste, but I feel like the disappointment was so great that I just couldn’t bring myself to rate this higher. Therefore let me starts my, hopefully not too long (it will definitely be long because I have a lot of things to say), more in depth review of Storm of Secrets and Sorrow and explain my final rating of this book.
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-ˋˏ ༻ world building, writing and action ༺ ˎˊ-
ㅤㅤI will try to keep this part not too long, because I literally don’t have many comments to make in this regard. I fell in love with Melissa’s incredible talent in terms of world building ever since Lady Of Darkness series. You are immediately drawn back into the sinister and gloomy world of Devram as soon as you open this book because everything about it has been so painstakingly and expertly constructed, down to the last detail. I appreciated that this second book didn't stagnate in terms of providing more knowledge about the world and that you got to see a tonne more locations that help to create the whole picture of this dreadful world. I am constantly looking for comprehensive details about a world in a book so that I can create the perfect vision in my mind, and this book did wonders for the foundation that was laid with the first book in the series.
ㅤㅤI did enjoy the multi-POVs we get since this book introduces the POVs of Axel and Luka apart from the two protagonists. I found myself enjoying Axel’s POV probably more than anyone else’s and I think it was such a great addition to the story. And, as a great fan of Lady of Darkness, I cannot pass and not mention the incredible easter eggs caused with the appearance of some really beloved and dear characters for me. (My babies Scarlett and Sorin are just as delicious and beautiful as ever. And how much I enjoyed to see Razik and Eliza again in the epilogue 😭😭) Melissa has developed a wonderful universe, and it is just amazing to witness these worlds come together and make you hold your breath in anticipation of what will happen next and how they will collide.
ㅤㅤIn terms of action I have to admit I was not as intrigued as I had wished to be. Between the constant fights and banters and the small glimpses of whatever these characters are trying to achieve, not much transpired, making the book seem a little lengthy and dull at points. I have to admit that there were certain pages that I was just reading through and skipping over because there weren't many exciting events going on. I understand Melissa's desire for the reader to be confused since the characters maintain secrets all the time, and the reader is not offered the kindness of knowing these secrets until the characters deliberately choose to reveal them. Normally, I would find this fascinating since I enjoy theorising and speculating about the future action in the books I read, but there were so many unknown features and well-kept secrets here that the action felt too languid at times.
ㅤㅤWhen it comes to the writing in this book, once again I find myself not really having any complaints. The writing is undoubtedly appropriate for this very brutal and horrible environment, as well as the fantasy genre and its characters. I'm not a big lover of modern aspects in fantasy tales, but I didn't mind them because they didn't detract from the plot or the overall tone. Melissa's writing was as beautiful as I'd come to anticipate, and I love her ability to adjust her writing style to the novels and stories she's producing. There were a few times that made me wince while reading because of how bizarre they sounded in the particular context, but they were too infrequent and inconsequential to influence my review.
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-ˋˏ ༻ characters ༺ ˎˊ-
ㅤㅤI would advise to grab some popcorn and a comfortable chair because what will come next is a complete rant over the characters of this book and how they are built. Let me begin by expressing that I did not anticipate to see these characters transform into moral and value-driven heroes as the story progressed. But I did start this book hoping to learn more about these individuals' backgrounds, what drove them to become the horrible beings capable of harming everything and everyone without remorse in order to achieve their goals. However, this did not occur. This book provided practically no new information that made you feel anything other than aggravation for these individuals, and by the conclusion of the book, I felt as if we had just gone around in circles with nothing fresh to bring to the table.
ㅤㅤ🗲 Tessalyn - Despite the fact that she has every right to be as angry and irritated as she is, I was forced to label a character completely dumb and foolish for the first time. She is continuously confused because she can't determine her identity, and people who seem to want to help her keep information about herself hidden from her. She is right to be resentful and angry. However, she does such an amazing job at also making these people have all the reasons to not want to share this information with her. She is struggling, yet she refuses to accept aid. She vows not to be swayed and affected by pretty words, yet she does just that. She is absolutely naive and too infantile to realise that the people she says desire what is good for her, actually want to use her just as much. She is a tragic character forced to submit in a selfish world, but she makes the worst decisions ever. She refuses to accept or seek help from those who care about her, and her lack of trust, which was initially understandable, became increasingly illogical and stupid as the story progressed. I've never been more annoyed with the main character in my life.
ㅤㅤ🗲 Theon - I think him to be a very extraordinary individual, one who was subjected to several torturous experiences by his own father and was continuously told that he would never be good or strong enough. He was so tightly controlled and overpowered by his father that he now seeks control over everything, for only through control is he able to protect those around him; and he can control anything as long as he has information. However, he does not communicate with anybody. He refuses to offer his thoughts until the most vital moment, and he strives to address everyone's issues while failing to recognise his own flaws and faults. He becomes so consumed by his need for control that he becomes harsh to people he cares about. I was frequently annoyed by his desire to suppress facts, to maintain power, and the fact that no one seemed to call him out on it. I can see how his trauma shaped him, but he makes mistakes that were as dumb and infuriating as Tessa's throughout the novel, making it difficult for everyone to sympathise with him.
ㅤㅤAnd while I'm here, I'd want to point out that I've seen a lot of people hate and criticise Theon while not treating Tessa the same way. I think everyone forgets that both Theon and Tessa are intended to be equally evil and cruel as characters, which I noticed and passionately felt throughout the entire book. These two are both very terrible characters; they are so dark, irritating, and difficult to empathise with that I couldn't pick one over the other. I understand the reasons for some of their behaviours, but I couldn't sympathise with any of them, and I therefore won't condemn Theon any less than I would Tessa. Are they intriguing exactly because of how awfully morally-grey they are as characters? Absolutely. But I also had to stop myself and take deep breaths to not just throw the book out of the window at times because of them.
ㅤㅤ🗲 Luka - I have practically nothing to say about Luka because he has no personality other than being there for Theon and Tessa at all times. While I absolutely respect his loyalty, I was continuously bothered by his presence in every scene and his participation in every minor conversation. It would be nice to see some development in his character, and I have a guess about his future role, but up to this point, he's definitely the character in this book that I can't tolerate. And I will also, of course, mention the newly-introduced three-way bond which made an appearance in this book. I'm not a fan of poly-relationships appearing in books, especially when they're inserted just for fan service, so you can understand my dismay when I saw the growth of this type of relationship here. Especially with someone like Luka, who isn't adding anything fascinating to the story yet. I hope Melissa has an excellent plan for this in the future, because she has repeatedly demonstrated that she never does anything without a plan, but this relationship will undoubtedly play a significant role in my dislike of this story.
ㅤㅤ🗲 Axel - Despite being very briefly portrayed in the book, Axel completely captivated my interest and rapidly became my favourite character in the series. He is really kind and committed, and his desire to just do the right thing is quite lovely. Unfortunately, I don't have much to say about him at this time, but his POVs were my favourites, and he quickly became my favourite character in the series. I am thrilled to see more of him.
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-ˋˏ ༻ ending and conclusions ༺ ˎˊ-
ㅤㅤThe ending of the book is mind-blowing. Tessa’s reveal in the end of the book is both revelatory and cryptic which sets the perfect foundation for the development of the future books. The epilogue brought all the necessary information for some really interesting theories to start circulating and I honestly think the ending was really well-crafted and chosen for this second book in the series. And specifically because the ending managed to pique my interest completely and make me curious, I will probably keep reading the future 2 books in this series as well. (Not to mention that it was really so endearing and nice to see Eliza and Razik once again 🥺)
ㅤㅤI have to admit my excitement and expectations for this book were really, really huge. And unfortunately, the disappointment it brought is probably the reason for which I think I will not feel the same excitement for the following books in the series. What I am trying to say it that, despite being curious about the further development of the story, I'm not dying to read the third book. At this point, I will probably continue to read this series just because I absolutely love the universe that Melissa managed to create. I love the lore, I love the world building, I love the mystery of the book, but I am not sure they will be enough to make me consider this series one of my favourites in the future. I might increase this to a full 3-star rating once my feelings towards this book settle down and I have some time to digest what I read, but I am feeling too petty at the moment. A really sad case of a terrible sequel to a really amazing first book.