Hole in the Wall

by Archie Finch

Two straight friends. One hole. And a mystery man on the other side.

Best friend? More like bad influence. Without him goading me on, I never would have had the guts to actually put my junk through the hole.

Now there's a stranger blowing my mind, and an all too invested best friend breathing down my neck. This is not how I expected my first time to go.

He's crowding me against the wall, teasing at my neck---and it's hard to think. I'm supposed to be straight, but my goddamn traitorous body is way too into this---It's too hot, too embarrassing, and I'm about to combust.

And now the stranger wants me to return the favor---but there's no way I can get on my knees for another guy, right?

So why am I desperate for just one taste?

Genres: M M Romance, Novella, Friends To Lovers, Erotica, LGBT, Spicy, Romance

36 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 29, 2023

Reviews

[Ditte · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sometimes self-care is reading a short story about two besties realizing they're gay by sucking a stranger's dick together at a glory hole.

[Brooke · Rating 4 out of 5]

⭐️ 4 stars ⭐️

I was getting my dick sucked by a stranger—A man—Ray right by my side, watching it all.

Yes to all of this. Ray and Matt were so damn hot. First times, a mystery man beyond a wall, glory holes. I loved the connection between Ray and Matt, the caressing turning into licking, Ray going from voyeur to participant.

He wanted me to lick it, with him. Wanted us to do this together.

Gonna go check out more of these little sexy stories.

Ray's cock—I couldn't see it in the dark, but it was alive, and real and touching mine and—oh fuck, I don't know if I can handle this.

CW and tropes (spoilers):
- Double queer awakening?
- Friends to lovers
- Glory hole
- Blowjobs w/ a stranger
- Virgin MC
- Frotting

[Pauline · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ehm, yes please and thank you 😂

[Mx. T *Chaotic Reader* · Rating 4 out of 5]

And still stress-reading double sexual awakening at a glory hole while sucking a stranger's dick because why tf not.

[˗ˏˋ mckenna ˎˊ˗ · Rating 5 out of 5]

if you see me rating this 5 stars, no you dont

[Kati *☆･ﾟ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hot af short. 🔥

[Alix · Rating 4 out of 5]

See Teased by the Doctor for comments

[Elizabeth · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and spicy

[Lb [worlds longest slump] · Rating 4 out of 5]

FIRSTLY the cover for this is phenomenal. So bad it’s good type vibe. When I opened it on my kindle I couldn’t stop giggling. SO GOOD.

Anyway this story has the kinda shit I like cause I DEVOURED it and would like more please 🤲 hot hot hot hot to go.

Along with all the usually stuff for this series of novellas (first time, besties, sexual awakening) this one ALSO had:

🔥 glory hole (duh), so;
🔥 sharing
🔥 one MC helping the other MC get an unidentified stranger off 🥵
🔥 voyeurism

And I slurped that shit up with a straw! This one will be going on the re-read shelf 🙂‍↕️

[Bree | breesoleilreads · Rating 5 out of 5]

I’m having way too much fun with these! They’re smut-tastic and that’s all I really need 😏

[Kayeana · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was so freaking good, wtf! 🤭🤭

[Daniel Myatt · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ha! So yeah, it's exactly as you'd think, but actually well written. 😅

Best line "Because sometimes you have your first sexual experience at the back of a strange porn booth. With your best friend. Who happens to be a guy. And you kind of need some fucking Taco Bell."

[Betty Loves Books Galore · Rating 5 out of 5]

story of Matt and Ray

This is best friends to more romance, featuring Ray and Matt, and is short story in the Straight To Gay Best Friend series.

All I can say about is I was left a bit speechless reading this one. Holy moley! Matt and Ray stumble across a glory hole. A dare leads to first times, high heat and spice with a mystery guy and each other and a sweet ending. For a short story, it’s super smutty!

Things to expect in this MM romance are:
2nd book in series
MM Short story
Best friends
Glory hole
Dare
Dirty talk
Voyeurism
Mystery guy
First times
High heat & spice
Bi awakening
HFN hint

[PleaseGoAwayImReading · Rating 3 out of 5]

Another - even shorter- one from this author. I did not enjoy this one as much as Teased (?) by the Doctor, but it was still ok.

I loved the idea of two (seemingly) cis best friends, bonding over what turns out to be a glory hole in the room of a smex shop. The idea of one daring the other to stick his appendage into the hole to see what happens is kind of fun, and once it becomes obvious that there’s someone on the other side of that wall, there is so much possibility for this story.

Yes, one of the MMCs getting serviced via the GH is hot. So, too, is it hot when MMC #2 joins in with bestie to return the favor. I think where this one falls a little short for me is that once that spicy time is done, the end feels abrupt. The TbtD story also ended soon after spicy time concluded, but I felt like it gave me more of the hope/possibility of “what comes next” after the MMC goes “straight to gay” for his friend.

I don’t give a lot of 3 star reviews as I tend to round up. As a mood reader, I never quite know what will “do it” for me and what may not, so I try to wade through the generous side of things. But this one just left me a bit unsatisfied.

[M · Rating 4 out of 5]

wowza

This one is a steamy one! Talk about HOT! No plot, all spice, just how I like these short stories! Definitely recommend.

[Kim B · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was truly so fun! I'll admit - the cover caught my eye ;)
Super fun, super hot, super short! All good! Will read more by this author for sure

[Dan · Rating 4 out of 5]

When I finally looked up, Ray was a mess. I’d never seen him quite so undone, sweat-slick hair stuck to his forehead, face flushed and hesitance coloring his features. Once I started, I couldn’t seem to look away.


Matt and Ray are both 19. They are very close friends.

They have passed the sex shop a whole bunch of times in the past, but now they’ve finally worked up the nerve to enter.

Ray is popular and charming, while Matt is a shy virgin. Ray is very…encouraging.

Ray’s praise. Teamwork.

Good physiology. The interactions with Ray begin with touching and being held…and continue to heat up.

I hadn’t even tried to resist. Still wasn’t. My mind had gone a little blank the moment he seized my neck.

Returning the favor.

Good descriptive detail and action. Size, circumcision status, taste.

Takes 83%, but finally ditches the Straight Thing.

The passion is done well. Nice kissing.

Matt surprises himself—and Ray surprises Matt.

Cute and hopeful HFN.


And he looked a little incredulous, and a little delighted, those golden brown eyes coming to life.

[Kestrel · Rating 5 out of 5]

Cheese and crackers guys, that was full on. Not read this author before but after that experience I'm off to devour everything else they've written. The chemistry and UST (then very much resolved ST) was off the charts, and for how short this story was it packed a lot into it. I'm partial to a friends-to-lovers (though this could be classed as two guys just getting carried away with each other), but even if this wasn't up my street I think I'd still have loved it given how well-written and steamy it was. It could be classed as MMM but since the third person is a faceless entity (or, really just an appendage) it's mostly MM between Ray and Matt. I would give it 4.5/5 stars, and the 0.5 drop is just because the ending is a bit abrupt and quite open/ambiguous and I would've preferred a bit more clarity. This will definitely be a reread at some point.

[Misc · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy shit, this author is phenomenal at writing smut, not just bc of the kink aspect but also bc of their incredibly descriptive & provocative writing style that perfectly immerses you into it and lets your imagination do the rest of the work. Incredibly sexy, dirty and erotic with just the right dash of sweetness to balance it out and draw you in emotionally. 10/10, no notes. Both short stories from this author that I’ve read have been slam dunks. I hope they don’t ever stop producing more books lol.

[Leo · Rating 3 out of 5]

No soy fan de los libros MMM, pero este estuvo algo bueno. Me sigue incomodando que hayan agregado a alguien más al juego, pero qué se puede hacer jajaja.

Dos amigos van a una sexshop, hasta que ven un gloryhole, un reto y luego uno de ellos mete su pene ahí. Todo bien hasta que una boca empieza a hacerle una mamada. No sabe por qué su amigo está tan cerca y empieza a obligarlo a tomar la polla cuando es su turno.

Caliente, salvo por el tercero jajaja.

[Leanne · Rating 4 out of 5]

Glorious Glory Hole

Well that was hawt… nothing like having your bestie coax you into doing things you wouldn’t otherwise do, and then be there for all the things.

Who needs a solo glory session when you can have your bestie right there with praise and guidance? I swear these two combusted and tried hard to melt my kindle.

If you like a bit of strange and a bestie that’s extra invested, you should give this a read.

[Javiera Tillería · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.25⭐️ Historias muy cortas pero sexys para pasar el rato. Los típicos clichés que uno ama.

No logro conectar con los personajes ya que son muy pocas paginas. Se supone que son trope best friends pero es tan corta la historia que no dimensiono su conexión y pasan a ser solo conocidos.

Destaco el final. Me gustó que fuera un poco más cerrado que el anterior.

[Crista · Rating 2 out of 5]

A very short story, two friends go into a sex store and find themselves a glory hole. One friends eggs the other one into getting his first BJ via it, it happens, he returns the favour, the friend helps then they hook up.

[Cara · Rating 1 out of 5]

I had no idea who Matt was. might have been useful to introduce your characters.
Same fake reading, dull characters.
Glory hole and no anal sex. Disappointing.
I dont recommend this one. It's boring as.

[Leo · Rating 3 out of 5]

3☆

ᔑᑭᏆᑕᗴ: 🔥🔥🔥
しᗩᑌᏀᕼᔑ: 🤣🤣
Ꭲᗴᗩᖇᔑ:🥲
ᗰᑕᔑ: Will, Ricky
ᑭᝪᐯ: 1st dual
Ꭲᖇᝪᑭᗴᔑ: College, Frieds to lovers, Roommates to lovers

[Crex · Rating 4 out of 5]

Don’t ask me why I gave this 4🌟

[My Dark Romance · Rating 3 out of 5]

Young and curious 🫣

[july · Rating 4 out of 5]

3,5

[Louisa Saunders · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy hotness and all things that are steamy!!! Two besties joking about a glory hole in a sex shop and end up totally overheated together, and absolutely entertaining read!

[Marian · Rating 3 out of 5]

That's a nice short. It's an open ending so it's easy to imagine what happens next :)