The story's pace was brisk, making it engaging; however, I felt that certain scenes would have benefited from deeper emotional descriptions. This lack of detail sometimes made it difficult to fully connect with the characters' experiences. While the ending offered some level of satisfaction, I couldn't help but feel that it was only partially fulfilling. Additionally, certain characters deserved more time to develop on the page, which could have enriched the overall narrative.
Despite these critiques, it remains a good and light-hearted read that provides entertainment without being overly heavy.
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“Jogiyo ke jog Kabhi Khatam Nahi hote. Albatta Rog lag Jaye to saari Zindagi Saath nibhate Hai!”
jis ko ziada scenes deny chahiay thay un ko nahi diyay or jahan zaroort nahi thee wahan over describe kar dia ha. khizar and hinave, shahwaiz and his girl( i forgot the name tho) should be given more scenes. Aman malik deserved the ending. Anyway it is a good read but needs more room for improvement.
It was like a soap opera that you know is shit and yet you can not stop devouring the shit.😭🤚🏼 (Too many characters with too many relationships , with zero spark, not well enough cooked dynamics and plot and very one dimensional Villain which make this even more less appealing to read😭🙏🏼 )
One thing I like about this novel is the stories and character development of side characters. In typical novels we get very less side characters and their story is least explained but Hinave is different. Despite of Aman Malik and Hinave Rana we get story of Minhal and Shavez, Namal and Arham, Bakht and Hudaa. 4 stars ⭐
The story had me hooked in the beginning and then somewhere in the middle it felt kind of dragged mtlb kuch ho nhi raha tha?! Aman Malik apne alag maast malang Bana phir raha tha, aur Hinave bas mein tumhe choron gi nhi yeh karogi woh karogi ho usse kuch nhi raha tha. Initially I really appreciated Khan's character but what he did with Husna was heinous. Khizar was a sweetheart but usko itne scenes hi nhi diya, balke Rana family ke saare hi boys were good apart from Shahwaiz ka ghussa, these type of men are really needed Jo kahin bhi apne ghr ki larkiyon ka naam nhi aane dete, brain use karke situations handle karte h. Arham aur Namal ki shadi ko itna side kardiya I was really hoping for some intense kind reaction from the family when Namal marries Arham but kuch khas nhi howa bas writer ne yeh bataya ke usse ghr wale naraz h, funny thing is keh she keeps telling Zulekha phuppho ke meinne apko Rana family se wapis milane ke liye shadi ki h but 5 yrs ke baad bhi jab Qudsia Begum himmat karke phone karti h aur Khayam Rana se kehti h keh she wants her daughter Zulekha back tab hi kuch hota. Kinda hoped Namal would have been more directly involved in the patch up. Ab Aman Malik ka mein kya hi kahon, aur uski woh lawyer cousin Zalay was a very unwanted character along with that Alisha who was simping over Shahwaiz (jo keh shadi shuda h) ajeeb yar faltu mein drag. Seerat ko bhi bas aik do scene diye jabke uski aur Haider ki story mein kaafi potential tha. Aur Semab ko bhi itne time baad scene mila when Zayan sees her exercising and doesn't recognize her, itna diff ata h kya weight lose Karne se? is pe i can't really comment. Khair all in all Acha novel tha I don't dislike it or anything but I saw more potential in a lot of places. Like Hinave and Khizer ki story and Hinave ka lawyer banna just for the sake of punishing Aman was a bit off, aur phir ironically Owais tu mara hi nhi tha tu uske murder ka case hi close hogaya bechari Hinave ki 5yrs ki mehnat pe paani dal diya. Ending was good warna I would have been kaafi disappointed. Noor is a great writer no doubt and she has undoubtedly proved that in Sulphite. Can't wait to read Maseel now!
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کزنز کی شوخی و شرارت سے بھرپور ہونے کی وجہ سے تقریباً نصف تک ناول کافی دلچسپ ہے جسکے یہ تین⭐⭐⭐ ۔ لیکن جنگل والے سین سے آگے کہانی کی execution کافی stupid سی لگنے لگتی ہے۔ حناوے جو ابھی تک بچگانہ شرارتی سی تھی وہ احمق اور ہٹ دھرم ہو جاتی ہے ... اور یہ خضر کو کیا کرتے دکھایا گیا ہے بھلا ایک خطرناک مجرم کی گرفتاری کرتے ہوئے کوئی پولیس آفیسر اپنے گھر کی جوان عورت کو ساتھ لیکر جاتا ہے ؟ شروع میں کچھ کریکٹرز جیسے حیدر اور نمل وغیره کی کہانیوں کی اچھی بنیاد بچھائی جارہی تھی لیکن بعد میں ان کہانیوں کو بس لپیٹ ہی دیا گیا ... 🙄😒🙄