Ammar Zahrain: The Obsessive Husband

by Nssignature

Bunga terlarang yang tiba-tiba mencuri hatinya. Itu gambaran tepat tentang perasaan Ammar Zahrain terhadap Aisya. Dan kesempatan untuk tinggal di rumah keluarga wanita itu diambil sebaik mungkin.

Genres: Romance, Love, Romantic

624 pages, Paperback

First published November 1, 2023

Reviews

[Anonymous · Rating 1 out of 5]

Ni dah masuk novel kedua dari author tapi langsung tak ada perubahan drpd novel pertama. Teruk sangat2. Buku sampah. Tak ada moral value. Plot dan storyline pun hauk. Cerita tak masuk akal dan tak logik langsung cara author describe kekayaan ML. Dengan beza umur watak utama yang terlalu jauh. Irl kau geli ya dengan lelaki begini tambah lagi duda. Tapi biasalah author suka romanticizekan benda ni dalam wattpad lepastu pergi buat buku sbb ramai suka. Lagi satu aku cringe FL panggil ML dengan gelaran uncle. Give me the ick. ☠️

Bagi aku novel ni sgt childish dan tak matang daripada semua segi. Budak2 yalah kot suka sebab kuat berangan.

Overall not recommended. This is typical wattpad story yang sepatutnya kekal di wattpad. TAK LAYAK JADI NOVEL.

[llayll · Rating 1 out of 5]

tk baca pun saja je nk hate

[SS]

Not my cup of ☕️.
Noktah.
Sekian.

[astread · Rating 1 out of 5]

Koyak. Bakar. Buang abu dalam sungai.

[Wawa · Rating 1 out of 5]

Penulisan yang tak menyenangkan dan nonsense. 17 years age gap? gila.

[Mslvoe · Rating 1 out of 5]

Dah kenapa baca karya ini F sakit kepala sampai migraine 🤭🙈

Nanti free² F cuba lagi.. sebab F banyak skip..
Rasa cringe yang melampau² masa mula² tu

Nak masuk ending baru F rasa aaahh tenang sikit 😄

[Ahmad 'Atiq ♥️🐧 · Rating 1 out of 5]

Apa ni? Bangang ke?

[Emma · Rating 2 out of 5]

Just finished reading this book. But, I skip a lot of chapters….almost all the chapters. I’m sorry but everything is bad. From the characters ,the plot, the words written. It’s just so hard for me to love this book.

2 stars for this book. Not every story from wattpad can turn into a physical book. Not worth the money.

[Maila · Rating 2 out of 5]

Mula mula baca memang tak boleh nak go. I took almost 2 week to read the cringe part😅the age gap pun terlalu 🚨🚓

Mak bapak aisya ni macam takde brain. Dengan fathi semua ikhtilat lah nak kena jaga. Tapi dengan ammar kemain gelitis bagi anak dara keluar berdua bagai.

Kena paksa kahwin atas alasan yang sangat tak munasabah. “Ammar boleh jaga aisya” Fathi pon boleh??????!!! Dasar money privilledge😭

Bila part dah kahwin baru aku boleh terima cerita ni. Not the best book but still kena ada improvement.

[Mrs. Norfy]

DNF. Sayang, bakat menulis dah ada, tapi menulis cerita sampah.

[ellysa yahya · Rating 2 out of 5]

Honestly, I don’t know what I expected. When I first read this book at wattpad, it felt like I’m witnessing a preteen’s dream of marriage and relationship. I tried to read the physical book since i heard the author will change something and i was immensely disappointed. Here are a few problem i have with the book:

1. Aisy’s family is supposed to be religious. They forbade Aisy from having a boyfriend saying it’s haram, but they let Ammar have an intimate moment with aisy before marriage? The writing is not consistent.
2. I don’t like the idea that aisy, who sees Ammar as her own UNCLE, is forced to marry him. Their age gap is not really a problem since they are both adult, but it is the dynamic between them (uncle and nephew vibes) makes it weird.
3. Why is Ammar so weird? He is so… aggressive for no reason. I get that he is supposed to be obsessed with Aisy, but that scene of him yelling at her and physically put his hand on her because she had lunch with another guy? So weird. Let’s not romanticise this kind of behaviour.
4. MAFIA. Such an unnecessary plot. Why does he have to be a gangster?
5. So manyyyyyyy unnecessary plot. Her brother Zain going to the club just ended there? Might as well not include it.
6. The ‘having an affair after being drugged’ plot is so… cliche and horrible. Just say they are cheating.

Overall, this book should’ve stayed in wattpad.

[Eda Eda · Rating 1 out of 5]

Pembacaan awal buatkan rasa tak selesa, janggal, pelik dan sewaktu dengannya. Bila hero dan heroin dah kahwin pun masih tak ok sebab ada scene kekerasan/keganasan rumah tangga.

[Kai · Rating 1 out of 5]

Not my thing. Kinda regret buying it. Really weird bcs of the troupe. I feel like their relationship is kinda toxic, aisyah should've been w her bf instead of her step uncle. Also this book gives me pedophilia vibes and it makes me uncomfortable

[Wani]

Simple comment to summarize this novel. I WANT A REFUND. This is a great example of not all wattpad yg dapat bnyk clicks should be published into physical books. Everything's terrible; from the storyline, plot, characters. No wonder budak² sekolah je yg suka

[Paulinecpr · Rating 1 out of 5]

Geli xleh nak hadam
Rugi beli give back my money 🤑

[Esya · Rating 2 out of 5]

sampai sekarang xleh brain age gap dye

tkyh baca bazir masa dan duit je
1 boleh dpt stories cmni kat wattpad
2 bende ni age gap besar and that man is psycho lah

i give u two sbb i minat solero je

[fiena · Rating 1 out of 5]

pernah baca sikit kat wattpad pastu drop terus sebab tak suka , pastu keluar kat fyp , ha saja nak rate byee

[Athirah Subhi · Rating 1 out of 5]

I first read it on Wattpad and it was horrible. Then I found out that it got published. What on earth is happening to our literature? Where is accountability? Where is shame?

[Lavieenrra · Rating 1 out of 5]

Cerita ni tak layak jadi buku. Sepatutnya, kekal dalam wattpad.

[Perrahin Nur · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just nice..
Nak kata suka sgt pon x tpi xla bosan sgt
Even tho the storyline very cliche

And minus 1 start sbb xsuka cerita yg ada kaitn dgn mafia world etc nak2 bila watak ML tuu ‘terpaling perfect’ in that area

But 1 thing pelik is when Ammar trying to make Maleeka hates him by seducing her sister.. mmm
As husband u have the right to ceraikan ur wife with or without reason and in this case dia dh hilang rasa syg so cerai je laa daripd aniaya his wife but whatever laa

And ending for Maleeka & Mysara tuu mcm ha ha ha gitu je? Rain still ada dlm diri Ammar ? Don’t really fancy Rain entah laa redflag lelaki panas baran & chose violence over kindness nii (yes fhm dia mafia but still xsuka, ex-mafia kan) cuci tgn so be like one

Sekejap baku,skjp pasar…
Ok laa sometimes irritating jgk tpi at least I finished this book properly
Gaya penceritaan biasa2 je xde teknik yg menarik sgt
Very straightforward je at least x memeningkn kpla

Repeat? Myb no…thinking about Fathi Gabrielle novel?
Hmmm dunno yet sbb takde feel ‘i must know his story’

Overall,FL just ok ok laa.. xde perkembgn life dia except pregnant every yr hahaha naseb la jdi Datin muda
This story just evolves around Ammar Zahrain so not really menarik that makes me wanna repeat this novel

But great effort author,as young writer i can consider this is a good book. Thank you for the story

Oh one last thing yg menganggu saya is,
I have to mention fiancé is a guy engaged to a woman
While fiancée should be the correct title for Aisy

[KaNgah Writes · Rating 3 out of 5]

(DON'T LET MY OPINION RUIN YOURS)

Saya tak pasti nak ulas dari sudut mana tetapi sejujurnya, setiap karya pasti ada sisi baik dan buruknya, termasuk "Ammar Zahrain : The Obsessive Husband" karya Nssignature.

Saya akui ada beberapa perkara yang saya dapat belajar dari sudut agama. Namun, tak dapat dinafikan juga bahawa ada beberapa faktor yang mungkin kurang sesuai, apatah lagi untuk pembaca yang kurang sesuai seperti saya. (remaja)

Pertama, jarak umur 17 tahun antara Aisya dan Ammar sangatlah mengejutkan. Kalau di dunia nyata, mungkin dikutuk macam-macam. Namun, saya tetap bersangka baik memandangkan ini karya 'fiksyen'.

Kedua, Ammar seolah-olah menganggap batas halal dan haram itu perkara biasa, selalu sangat kena tangkap basah walaupun itu sekadar perangkap dan Aisya, alhamdulillah masih terima Ammar. Bagi saya, itu momen sweet antara mereka walaupun jika berlaku di dunia nyata, Ammar sudah lama ditinggalkan.😭

Ketiga, reaksi Ammar yang menakutkan Aisya masa Aisya kantoi selongkar satu stor kut tak silap saya. Bagi saya, it's a red flag but since he's changed, maybe 50-50. Ada lagi beberapa perkara yang saya nak ulas, tapi mungkin orang lain dah ulas.

Tapi ada satu yang saya suka. Gaya penulisan yang santai dan mudah untuk dibaca. Ini kali pertama saya baca karya penulis. insha'Allah mungkin boleh ditingkatkan lagi.

Semoga NSSIGNATURE terus maju jaya!!!
(⁠ʘ⁠ᴗ⁠ʘ⁠✿⁠)

[Introvert Insane · Rating 1 out of 5]

This book might be my 13th reason

Zero plot. Zero characterisation. Cringe af. Zero conflict. Also, was the "bonus endings" necessary? Bonus endings are supposed to be a reward when your characters ACTUALLY have personalities. Aisya and Ammar have nothing?

Ammar is supposed to be this 40 yr old mover and shaker but behaving like a hormonal teenager? Aisya is also childish it made their dynamic have this pedo feel to it. Ammar's actions doesn't make any sense at all like bruh is mad that she's not over her ex-bf when he's the one who sondol her. Also, have the evidence that the bf was cheating but was mad that she's not over the ex when all he had to do was show her the evidence. Like bfr.

Also, for someone who discovered her husband used to be a mafia she's pretty chill about it like gurl that is life-changing information! But it make sense since her personality is as interesting as a cardboard.

Whilst after reading this, I still can't see why it was banned. But trust me, this book won't be missed.

[shishi · Rating 1 out of 5]

17 years age gap but both are adults. Cuma agak turn off when she keep calling him uncle even when they're engaged. FL character agak kebudak-budakan, more like a teen rather than early 20s. Meanwhile ML is a possesive man. Ada juga red flag scene especially when he was jealous and found out the wife didn't obey his rule.

Background story Ammar pula tak digarap dengan baik. Makin mengarut bila adik kepada bekas isteri rupanya masih hidup. Should've ended when the ex wife sebab conflict lebih kurang.

Penulisan yang baik tapi jadi meleret sebab dialog terlalu cringe. The story consists of majority them being lovey dovey.

Found out the book actually was a hit on wattpad. It's time for wattpad story to stay as a wattpad instead of publishing it.

[BunnyTeethKookie · Rating 1 out of 5]

Age gap terlalu besar. Fl sangat immature, cringe, and stupid even. I tak tau lah kenape author suka sangat potray fl sebagai obedient character yang dunia revolve around ml. Ml handsome sikit terus jatuh cinta walaupun ml tiada personality melainkan jadi possessive and cold. I tak suka sebab fl jatuh cinta cepat sangat and drooling over ml’s handsomeness. Tiada chemistry or emotional connection between character. I drop waktu awal awal baca sebab I don’t like the characters and dynamics. So can’t say much about the character development and plot. Novel ni I would say level level wattpad. I taupun daripada tiktok sebab hype gila and bila baca sangat disappointed.

[Theplain · Rating 1 out of 5]

Adik, buku awk sbnrnya keluar kat IG feed sy. Tajuk mcm dh best, Fathi Gabrielle : a broken soul. Katanya sambungan novel ni. Jadi sy pun terhegeh2 cari kat Goodreads. Sy tak bc novel awk lagi, I prefer book. Not Wattpad version because I believe kat Wattpad tu mesti tak edit lagi. Jadi sy tak blh nk review sgt. Tapi kan blh tak di ruangan sinopsis cerita tu awk tulis pnjg skit. Buku fixi pun sinopsis blkg buku dia pendek tp kita blh fhm the premis of the story. Ini awk just ckp ML jatuh cinta dgn bungan larangan, duduk di rumah FL. Apo? Dah la zmn skrg ni mcm2 kes sumbang mahram, sexual abuse & etc, reader could take this story as a sumbang mahram or sth like that.

[Mou_fiey · Rating 1 out of 5]

so my friend asked me to read this book and she told me this book was good but uhhh no💕

1.Age gap perempuan tu and laki tu jauh nak mati, like 17 tahun age gap? yup no. taksilap I diorang jumpa masa perempuan tu 19 kan? (correct me if I'm wrong) and laki tu tua gila. like, ughhh, bro find people your age, man.

2. Perempuan tu still call si Zahrain "uncle" even after their marriage .like bro, you make my body berasa sangat geli ye and it just sound weird AF

3.cringe

4. tipikal wattpad. membazir je beli, baik baca je kat wattpad bruh sebab melambak je cite ceni haish

dah lah tu je sekian daripada review saya. Author kena improve writing and plot cuz wtfish was that?

[Errah Bonasera · Rating 1 out of 5]

A terrible plot. While reading, I'm unable to make any facial expressions. Did parents approve of a man staying in their home? Yes. They even agreed when they went groceries shopping together. Indeed, I have only read a few of Wattpad chapters, but wow, trust me I have run out of things to say. Adik-adik, bacalah buku yang berilmiah. Janganlah fetish dengan pak cik-pak cik. Pelik-pelik novel sekarang.

[Izzah Maisarah · Rating 2 out of 5]

😭sedihh part aisyah ngn bf dia putus tuu, pstu ammar tu takbagi langsung aisyah simpan hadiah yang fathi kasik kat dye, siap suruh bakar, like, hmmm tolong la berempati siket, kau dhla dah saketkan hati aisyah, sondol hak milik orang, sumpah tatahu ah cne nkckp psl si ammar ni, tpi bolehlah kot, nak baca gitu2 je, saya nanges ye time fathi ngn aisyah break tu.😭

[qayss · Rating 2 out of 5]

I tak beli buku ni but pernah baca kat wattpad sebelum terbit. I baca pun sebab video pasal cerita lalu fyp tiktok I.

Ada scene dalam cerita ni buat I rasa tak selesa, but i teruskan je sebab i nak tau ending.

Nak kata okay pun entahlah. Tapi, I kurang minat cerita age gap yang jauh.

[Naraes · Rating 1 out of 5]

Kasi jet satu kali pun takpek arh.
If this book has no haters then I'm dead.
I hate it. At all. This is a story of pedophilie. Dream of Ammar to be ur husbaby then I know how sick you are.
Takdek faedah takyah baca. Mengarut lebih.