A secret baby story by Jeannie Moon, and it’s on sale?!?! Guess how quickly I hit that one-click purchase button?
However...
I usually love Ms. Moon’s books, but this time I didn’t really care for much of anything in this book. Not her baseball playing, playboy hero, not the self-important, independent heroine, and not the redundant, “too much pecs, not enough plot” writing.
Harper and Kevin had a brief, secret fling a year ago. It started at Kevin’s sister’s wedding, and ended a couple months later when Harper broke things off because...actually, I can’t remember now. But I do remember that when she discovered she was pregnant, she decided not to tell Kevin because he’d just been traded to a baseball team on the other side of the country, and she didn’t want to trap him into being a father.
But now Kevin has been traded back to New York and Harper knows she needs to come clean because they will be running into each other frequently (Harper works for Kevin’s brother-in-law). Of course, when Kevin finds out he has a three month old child, he’s ticked off - big time. Throws an ornament, breaks a vase, stomps out the door mad. (Did I mention he’s a 35 year old man? I use the term “man” loosely...)
When he finally comes around, many days later, they kiss and make up. Well, that’s not all they do, but you catch my drift. Their secret relationship is now out of the bag, and they are picking up right where they left off, both physically, and relationship-wise - that is, without really having a defined relationship.
Then both of them realize their feelings are getting stronger, but neither of them is willing to ACT LIKE AN ADULT and talk about it. When Kevin realizes Harper hasn’t been forthcoming about her childhood, he has another tantrum. At least he didn’t break anything this time, but he did stomp out and slam the door. But really, when was she supposed to have spilled her guts to him? They never actually talk since they’re too busy rolling around in bed.
Harper is sad she lost “the love of her life” and everyone is telling her to “give Kevin time,” and then Kevin realizes he can’t live without Harper so he makes a plan for his “grand gesture.” Then they live happily ever after.
I’m frankly not sure how I even managed to finish this book because of all the issues I had.
For starters, the hero who didn’t ever want a serious relationship. Had he been bereft and sullen since he’d left the heroine, I might have been okay with him. But nope. They had a hot and heavy fling, he went to the other coast to play ball, and only started thinking about the heroine again once she was back in his orbit. Even though he kept trying to call her for a couple months after she broke things off, he doesn’t get points in my book because he never told the heroine how he felt about her.
And the heroine. Sigh. I wanted to like her. But one, she didn’t really have any good reason for not telling the hero she was pregnant, and two, she seems to live her personal life driven by her hormones (and I ain’t talking about the ones she has from being postpartum). Use your head, sister! By all accounts you’re incredibly smart in your work life, be that way in your personal life as well. Harper kept calling Kevin “the perfect man.” Yet he kept getting mad at her, stomping away, and staying away for days or weeks at a time. That’s how a perfect man behaves?!?! (Just to be clear...it’s not the getting mad part I have issues with, since Harper deserved it.)
Also, the writing fell into my writing pet peeve...constantly talking about hot hawt the hero is, and how because he’s so hawt he can be forgiven for all sorts of less-than-desirable behavior. I’m so tired of reading books where a heroine is mad at the hero for behaving like an ass, but she’s willing to ignore it because he “looks like a Greek god.” (What the hell does that even mean, anyway?) My reading motto: less pecs, more plot.
How much I disliked this book really surprised me. I’ve read two other secret baby books by Jeannie Moon and REALLY liked them, so to barely be able to get through this one was majorly disappointing. This book was even rated highly by some other reviewers who I usually agree with, so my reaction to this story has been puzzling. The Secret Wedding was one of her earlier books, so I’m chalking this one up to “needed to grow as an author” and staying away from the rest of the series.