The Hurricane Wars, buth with worse characters, a plot that doesn't have the same implications and a mostly unexplained power system or political and societal worldbuilding. All in favor of meaningless character interactions and a whole bunch of flashbacks that should, by all acounts, be the prologue.
Worldbuilding is bare bones: there's no sense of how big or small the world is, how's does geography look like and how it affects the poeple (yes, Blood Brotherhood lives in the jungle and Protectorate in cold islands, no it doesn't mean anything that they travel in a day or so from one to the other, they are implied to teleport in some way, the journey was too fast). The politics? Eh...no, the clan semi-war has potential, but is only used for The Selection style "hey an enemy" attacks at random, the fact that a "Council" is scary enough to keep them all in line yet refuses to show itself at any meaningful event (HELLO? Two of the most powerful clans ever are getting ALL of their youth married with each other, they will de facto fuse, can we get a Council envoy? A letter? Anything to show you actually exist?) is stupid. Socety is barely present, i mean they do...kinda see the normal folks, but they're more props than they are actual people, they act as a single entity (all running from the Serpent assassins, all looking at the Oracle ceremony, all cheering at the hunting ritual etc...) now i don't mean we should look at every citizen as a single person, it's obvious it's impossible and would be boring, but can we at least have some contrasting opinions form neutral parties? By that i mean it seems all the civilians hated FMC until they all loved her and the only people who defended her were her close friends. Lastly, the power system is mostly unexplained if not in passing remarks and the inability of the protagonist to tame her own magic in a normal way means there is no learning curve and no method, therefore no explanation is possible, while the MMC's magic is obtained off screen for god knows what reason, so...??? The other Clans' magics are barely mentioned.
Plot is absolutely dreadful, legit nothing happens if not a bunch of romantic scenes peppered by random action scenes which don't follow a throughline. There was a glimmer of hope for the research about the forgotten clan, but the only thing they got out of is probably that Clan's remnants are the bad guys...and they may raise the dead...sometime in the future. The romance had a couple of cute moments here and there, but she's so passive that it feels way too off balance (yes, i do realize they're in his kingdom and she can't do much, no, this doesn't mean she has to do nothing for him, it's the thought that counts; what if in her 16 years in the forest she learned woodwork? She could create some cute trinkets for him and he could start wearing them in his dragon thingy necklace, what if she cared for the gardens, with all of her experience in self sufficency? Is the 16 years in the mountains just a way to have her be a complete blak slate or do we acknowledge she might have actually lived those very formative years as a person?).
FMC is very bland: yeah she initially doesn't want to kill anyone and is disgusted at having temporarely blinded the two old dudes in the church, no this doesn't translate into any real moral stand because she kills when she needs to, without thinking much of it in the moment or after it, much the same way her caring for the citizens doens't really mean much where there is nothing she has to give up for it, it's easy to care for the less fortunate when it doesn't cost you anything (and we don't see her doing the rounds when she's under stress so...). It seemed like her guilt and desperate want to seek redemption for her responsability in her parent's deaths by protect other familiars could be used for something past accepting the first marriage, but nothing ever comes out of it. Her feelings for MMC are justified because he's an actual god, but it feels as real as interacting with an AI bot of your favourite character, yeah he's perfect, no she doesn't contribute to anything in building the relationship.
MMC is just Rhysand with less edge (past the opening scene) and blood bending instead of shadow bending, his dragon tatoo has more character than him and he likes the FMC because she....is his fated mate? Like seriously, WHY does he like her? Is it really just the bond? Would anyone actually like that? Being the love of someone's life because he's essentially forced to love you by the gods? It essentially means he doesn't like you because of you, but because of someone else. AT LEAST most of the other Fated Mates out there kind of have a reason why one could see an angle for it, but Zandyr just...likes her. His POVs are complete shit and don't add anything to the story. The curse thing is a cop out so he wouldn't seem as bad for marrying Kaya, it would actually be better if he made that choice consciously for a greater goal of some sort, but seriosly did this guy ever made an autonomous choice? Both his marriages were arranged, he was forced to go after his bethroted because of the council, he was forced to lie to her beacuse of the curse and he is forced to love her because of the Fated Mates thing
The two villains are litterally the two henchmen of the standard Disney villain (you know, the fat and short one and the tall and thin one), they're cartoonishly evil and nothing more. I guess i kind of liked how they didn't even bother with Evie's proposal of the carriage the day prior to the wedding, thought i can't rule out the author just forgot.
The friends of both Evie and Zandyr are one amalgamation of the same character so i don't even bother. Even those who try to stand out (Adara and Kaya) end up as non-entities who do nothing just letting the plot happen to them, seeming as ignorat of it as Evie (and the audience) is. For example Kaya simply sits in the background as she's being married to Zandyr while befriending FMC being all bubbly and carefree, despite obviously noticing where this behavior will lead regarding Evie, then we get probably one of the worst dialogues ever post wedding, as her and Zandyr aggressively tell the audience "each other" how much they only see the other as a friend and only feel bad for Evie and...zzz you did nothing to prevent this, the others are NOT bound by the curse and somehow all forgot to do anything about it.
If there was any point of praise, i would look to the parents of both MCs...in theory, not in practice. The idea of overbearing, helicopter parents, or self absorbed, still immature and gullible parents is a legitimate good one; having the protagonists talk about it and trying to learn from them ( "I won't be like that for my children" and all that, is repeated multiple times) but in practice both pairs are so over the top about it that it loses all meaning, one couple randomly turned form a wealthy and comfortable noble life into sixteen years in the mountains and didn't even think about what their daughter would do after their deaths (i mean, at this point just kill her yourself) and the other one is completely inept at ruling, to the point they caused a slaughter of their own subjects (and somehow nobody said anything about it. Again, the citizens aren't really people as much as they're props), so no real lesson can be learned from that, since how much one is willing to sacrifice for their loved ones is very subjective. I guess since Zandyr has learned from their mistakes and went through with the arranged marriage to safekeep the peace...Evie will learn to...accept arranged marriages for her baby? Jee i can see this going well.
Ah, another one is how easy it is to read, the writing style is very approachable so at least it flows well, therefore the reader shouldn't feel those 200 excess pages unless something specific irks them. The sentence structure, writing style and even chapter composition work like a mill to keep one's attention, so... props to the editor?