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The Alchemist: Book 1
In his world, he was the last remaining alchemist, one of the few survivors living amidst the ruins of a once-great civilization. Refusing to give up on life, but seeing that nothing could save his home, he challenged himself to find a way out of such an inhospitable place.
After years of dedicated research, he devised a ritual to transport himself to another world. But the outcome was far from anticipated. Instead of mere displacement, he underwent a rebirth.
He ended up in a new body, a new world, surrounded by new threats lurking around every corner. And they primarily manifested themselves in the form of other people. Aristocrats of the ancient empire who fight for supremacy, demons capable of healing the most terrible wounds, and Walkers who have the ability to teleport anywhere they wished.
But a true master of alchemy does not allow himself to be perturbed. Edgar’s intelligence, skill, and alchemic knowledge are still with him, and the one who has once accomplished the impossible won’t go down without a fight, regardless of the circumstances.
After years of dedicated research, he devised a ritual to transport himself to another world. But the outcome was far from anticipated. Instead of mere displacement, he underwent a rebirth.
He ended up in a new body, a new world, surrounded by new threats lurking around every corner. And they primarily manifested themselves in the form of other people. Aristocrats of the ancient empire who fight for supremacy, demons capable of healing the most terrible wounds, and Walkers who have the ability to teleport anywhere they wished.
But a true master of alchemy does not allow himself to be perturbed. Edgar’s intelligence, skill, and alchemic knowledge are still with him, and the one who has once accomplished the impossible won’t go down without a fight, regardless of the circumstances.
312 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 26, 2024
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April 20, 2024
Drawn out.
This starts fast with a quick transition into the main story. That is where the issues start. It slows down to a crawl and barely involves any alchemy. Everything is drawn out and the pace is glacier. Things pick up near the end but it culminated in a very unsatisfying conclusion. To slow with no pay off, do not recommend.
This starts fast with a quick transition into the main story. That is where the issues start. It slows down to a crawl and barely involves any alchemy. Everything is drawn out and the pace is glacier. Things pick up near the end but it culminated in a very unsatisfying conclusion. To slow with no pay off, do not recommend.
June 2, 2024
Placing a lot of Historical references and personalities (families) from the last of the Russian Czars is "interesting" but "confusing" at the same time. This is an Urban/Rural Sci-Fi-Fantasy series that doesn't really have a time period because it jumps around 19th-20th-and before/and beyond periods of Earth with a lot of SuperNatural beings (Demons, Magic (healers, etc.) casters, and over-powered beings). The "confusing" the time periods, convolutes the story, the main theme and the action from the main characters.
It was entertaining and interesting to read. I feel it needs a lot more depth (in the descriptions, time periods, ages of characters, personalities, etc.). Author tries to create a system-like story but doesn't really commit to a system. Main character is Over-Powered, it is yet another "isekai" (body snatcher) book series. Author skips a lot of the time where the story progresses: for instance, main character spends about 1.5 years being used as a "laboratory specimen", but never really gets into what happens there, why the main character was chosen, etc. Author doesn't really describe the "family life" before the violent incidents either.
I would recommend a general edit of the entire story. To have the story be more focused and effective. Author prioritizes non-important events to actions that push the main theme and secondary story arcs along.
Main character was a "great alchemist" in his previous life (before the isekai/body snatcher event), but other than placing "magic seals" (that are really not related to alchemy (magical recipes to improve cultivation, heal, etc.) Main character spends more time smithing than real "alchemy". The other thing, mentioned on the summary of this urban/rural-fantasy novel series is they mention "portals", but this first book doesn't get into dimensional space, space portals or teleportation at all. "Body-snatching" (isekaing) into a body (main character) is usually considered "summoning" magic. If it really was "portal-magic" there would not have been any need for the main character to "body-snatch" anyone's existence in this "other world"/"other-reality".
It was entertaining and interesting to read. I feel it needs a lot more depth (in the descriptions, time periods, ages of characters, personalities, etc.). Author tries to create a system-like story but doesn't really commit to a system. Main character is Over-Powered, it is yet another "isekai" (body snatcher) book series. Author skips a lot of the time where the story progresses: for instance, main character spends about 1.5 years being used as a "laboratory specimen", but never really gets into what happens there, why the main character was chosen, etc. Author doesn't really describe the "family life" before the violent incidents either.
I would recommend a general edit of the entire story. To have the story be more focused and effective. Author prioritizes non-important events to actions that push the main theme and secondary story arcs along.
Main character was a "great alchemist" in his previous life (before the isekai/body snatcher event), but other than placing "magic seals" (that are really not related to alchemy (magical recipes to improve cultivation, heal, etc.) Main character spends more time smithing than real "alchemy". The other thing, mentioned on the summary of this urban/rural-fantasy novel series is they mention "portals", but this first book doesn't get into dimensional space, space portals or teleportation at all. "Body-snatching" (isekaing) into a body (main character) is usually considered "summoning" magic. If it really was "portal-magic" there would not have been any need for the main character to "body-snatch" anyone's existence in this "other world"/"other-reality".
May 23, 2024
Forced narrative...
Great concept, but a lot of the story was forced imo. Directly telling story elements rather than letting it be discovered. Almost everything with Roman was like being told what was happening in a table top by a GM. Not certain I will be back for book two.
Great concept, but a lot of the story was forced imo. Directly telling story elements rather than letting it be discovered. Almost everything with Roman was like being told what was happening in a table top by a GM. Not certain I will be back for book two.
March 25, 2025
“The Alchemist, Book 1,” written by Roman Romanovich and narrated by Nick Flesher, is a captivating entry into the portal progression fantasy genre, released as an audiobook in 2024. This 1st installment of a series introduces listeners to a richly imagined world through the journey of Edgar, a resilient alchemist thrust into an unexpected rebirth. Romanovich, a seasoned author with a background in psychology, crafts a narrative that blends intricate world-building with deep character exploration, while Flesher’s narration elevates the experience with a dynamic and immersive performance.
The story begins with Edgar as the last alchemist in a crumbling, dystopian world. Unwilling to succumb to despair, he devises a ritual to escape his doomed homeland, only to find himself reborn in a new body in an unfamiliar realm. This premise sets the stage for a tale of adaptation and survival, as Edgar navigates a vibrant yet perilous society populated by scheming aristocrats, teleporting Walkers, and demons with uncanny healing abilities. Romanovich’s psychological insight shines through in Edgar’s internal struggles - his determination to retain his identity and skills amidst chaos is both relatable and inspiring. The audiobook’s strength lies in its ability to balance this introspective depth with a fast-paced plot filled with intrigue and danger.
A key highlight is the unique take on alchemy, which feels less like traditional potion-brewing and more like a versatile, almost scientific craft tailored to Edgar’s intellect. This creative re-interpretation keeps the listener engaged, as Edgar’s problem-solving becomes a lens through which we explore the world’s rules and mysteries. The supporting cast, though painted in shades of gray, adds complexity - aristocrats jockey for power, and shadowy figures hint at larger forces at play. Romanovich avoids over-explaining, instead letting the world unfold organically, which builds anticipation for future installments.
Nick Flesher’s narration is a standout feature. His voice carries a gravitas that suits Edgar’s seasoned perspective, while his pacing keeps the tension alive during action sequences. Flesher deftly shifts tones to reflect the story’s emotional beats - whether it’s Edgar’s quiet resolve or the menace of a new threat - making the book feel brisk yet immersive. His performance enhances the audiobook’s cinematic quality, drawing listeners into the gritty streets and opulent halls of this strange new world.
Some may find the initial world-building dense, as Romanovich prioritizes atmosphere over immediate clarity, yet these contribute to the story’s distinct flavor, appealing to those who enjoy a slow-burn narrative with intellectual undertones.
“The Alchemist, Book 1” is a compelling blend of innovation and execution. It’s a promising start to a series that rewards patience and curiosity, leaving you eager to follow Edgar’s next steps without revealing where his path ultimately leads. For fans of portal fantasy and character-driven tales, this audiobook is a must-listen.
The story begins with Edgar as the last alchemist in a crumbling, dystopian world. Unwilling to succumb to despair, he devises a ritual to escape his doomed homeland, only to find himself reborn in a new body in an unfamiliar realm. This premise sets the stage for a tale of adaptation and survival, as Edgar navigates a vibrant yet perilous society populated by scheming aristocrats, teleporting Walkers, and demons with uncanny healing abilities. Romanovich’s psychological insight shines through in Edgar’s internal struggles - his determination to retain his identity and skills amidst chaos is both relatable and inspiring. The audiobook’s strength lies in its ability to balance this introspective depth with a fast-paced plot filled with intrigue and danger.
A key highlight is the unique take on alchemy, which feels less like traditional potion-brewing and more like a versatile, almost scientific craft tailored to Edgar’s intellect. This creative re-interpretation keeps the listener engaged, as Edgar’s problem-solving becomes a lens through which we explore the world’s rules and mysteries. The supporting cast, though painted in shades of gray, adds complexity - aristocrats jockey for power, and shadowy figures hint at larger forces at play. Romanovich avoids over-explaining, instead letting the world unfold organically, which builds anticipation for future installments.
Nick Flesher’s narration is a standout feature. His voice carries a gravitas that suits Edgar’s seasoned perspective, while his pacing keeps the tension alive during action sequences. Flesher deftly shifts tones to reflect the story’s emotional beats - whether it’s Edgar’s quiet resolve or the menace of a new threat - making the book feel brisk yet immersive. His performance enhances the audiobook’s cinematic quality, drawing listeners into the gritty streets and opulent halls of this strange new world.
Some may find the initial world-building dense, as Romanovich prioritizes atmosphere over immediate clarity, yet these contribute to the story’s distinct flavor, appealing to those who enjoy a slow-burn narrative with intellectual undertones.
“The Alchemist, Book 1” is a compelling blend of innovation and execution. It’s a promising start to a series that rewards patience and curiosity, leaving you eager to follow Edgar’s next steps without revealing where his path ultimately leads. For fans of portal fantasy and character-driven tales, this audiobook is a must-listen.
May 24, 2024
Could not force myself to finish this book
In total honesty I did not finish this book. I only got to about 48%. From the start in was an incoherent mess and I really tried but it just wasn't worth the suffering. Heres some bullet points.
- Basic explanation of how alchemy works came up at 45% of the way through when it should have been at the start. Even then the whole concept of alchemy is pretty much magical catch all so the MC can just do whatever whenever with no good reasoning.
- The pacing is horrible and keeping track of how much time has passed is very difficult.
- The writing quality is very poor and needs serious editing. It appears to be translated from another language with sentences everywhere that makes no sense
I honestly don't know how this has so many good reviews. There are a few genuine ones at the lower end but the rest must have read a different book completely...
In total honesty I did not finish this book. I only got to about 48%. From the start in was an incoherent mess and I really tried but it just wasn't worth the suffering. Heres some bullet points.
- Basic explanation of how alchemy works came up at 45% of the way through when it should have been at the start. Even then the whole concept of alchemy is pretty much magical catch all so the MC can just do whatever whenever with no good reasoning.
- The pacing is horrible and keeping track of how much time has passed is very difficult.
- The writing quality is very poor and needs serious editing. It appears to be translated from another language with sentences everywhere that makes no sense
I honestly don't know how this has so many good reviews. There are a few genuine ones at the lower end but the rest must have read a different book completely...
August 27, 2024
This is the stereotypical Russian novel, The Russians follow a template of writing, first they must always make the MC suffer, break them down and slowly very slowly build them up all at the same time making the reader/listener deal with the nonsense. This book is the same, the MC is not likeable, just some teenager doing teenage things at one point. Pretty pointless book.
Oh and there's no alchemy! It's a translation thing.
Oh and there's no alchemy! It's a translation thing.
January 18, 2025
The Alchemist by Roman Romanovich
Introduction
Author Background
Plot and Premise
Themes and Literary Elements
Strengths
Psychological Depth: Romanovich's background as a psychologist likely results in characters with complex motivations and realistic psychological profiles, adding depth to the narrative.
Unique Blend of Genres: The combination of portal fantasy, progression elements, and alchemical themes offers a fresh take on traditional fantasy tropes.
Author's Experience: With over seventy books under his belt, Romanovich brings a wealth of storytelling experience to this new series.
Series Potential: As the first book in a planned five-part series, "The Alchemist" has the opportunity to set up a rich, expansive world with long-term character arcs and plot developments.
Potential Weaknesses
Genre Conventions: While the psychological elements may set it apart, the book still operates within the conventions of portal fantasy and progression fantasy, which may feel familiar to seasoned readers of the genre.
Complexity: The blend of psychological depth and fantasy elements may be challenging for some readers, potentially requiring a higher level of engagement than typical genre fiction.
Series Dependency: As the first book in a series, it may leave some plot threads unresolved, which could be frustrating for readers seeking a more self-contained story.
Impact
Conclusion
Introduction
The Alchemist by Roman Romanovich is the first installment in the "A Portal Progression Fantasy Series," published on March 26, 2024. This novel marks a significant entry in the portal progression fantasy subgenre, blending elements of traditional fantasy with a unique focus on character development and psychological depth. As the inaugural book in a planned five-part series, "The Alchemist" sets the stage for an ambitious narrative that promises to captivate readers with its intricate world-building and complex character arcs.
Author Background
Roman Romanovich brings a unique perspective to the fantasy genre, drawing from his extensive background as both a prolific author and a practicing psychologist. With over seventy books to his name, Romanovich's journey as a writer is marked by a commitment to continuous learning and improvement. His experience as a psychologist significantly influences his writing, allowing him to create layered stories and complex characters that resonate with readers on a deeper level. This blend of literary creativity and psychological insight sets Romanovich apart in the crowded field of fantasy authors.
Plot and Premise
The novel likely follows the conventions of portal progression fantasy. One can expect a narrative that involves characters being transported to a fantastical world where they must navigate challenges and grow in power or skill. As the title suggests a focus on alchemy, which may play a central role in the protagonist's journey and the magic system of the world.
The book's length of 336 pages indicates a substantial narrative that allows for detailed world-building and character development. As the first in a series, "The Alchemist" likely sets up the foundational elements of the world, introduces key characters, and establishes the central conflicts that will drive the overarching story.
Themes and Literary Elements
Given Romanovich's background in psychology, "The Alchemist" likely explores themes related to personal growth, self-discovery, and the human psyche. The portal fantasy element provides a perfect backdrop for examining how characters adapt to new environments and challenges, potentially serving as a metaphor for real-world personal transformations.
The progression aspect of the story suggests themes of perseverance, skill acquisition, and the journey from novice to master. These themes are likely intertwined with the alchemical elements, possibly exploring the transformation of both matter and self.
Literary elements such as symbolism and motifs are probably employed to reinforce the thematic content. The alchemical process itself may serve as a central symbol for personal and spiritual transformation. The author's psychological background suggests a nuanced approach to character development, with internal conflicts and growth being as important as external challenges.
Strengths
Psychological Depth: Romanovich's background as a psychologist likely results in characters with complex motivations and realistic psychological profiles, adding depth to the narrative.
Unique Blend of Genres: The combination of portal fantasy, progression elements, and alchemical themes offers a fresh take on traditional fantasy tropes.
Author's Experience: With over seventy books under his belt, Romanovich brings a wealth of storytelling experience to this new series.
Series Potential: As the first book in a planned five-part series, "The Alchemist" has the opportunity to set up a rich, expansive world with long-term character arcs and plot developments.
Potential Weaknesses
Genre Conventions: While the psychological elements may set it apart, the book still operates within the conventions of portal fantasy and progression fantasy, which may feel familiar to seasoned readers of the genre.
Complexity: The blend of psychological depth and fantasy elements may be challenging for some readers, potentially requiring a higher level of engagement than typical genre fiction.
Series Dependency: As the first book in a series, it may leave some plot threads unresolved, which could be frustrating for readers seeking a more self-contained story.
Impact
The book's impact on the genre may be significant if it successfully integrates psychological depth with traditional fantasy elements. It has the potential to appeal to a broad audience, from fans of portal fantasy to readers interested in character-driven narratives with psychological underpinnings.
Conclusion
"The Alchemist" by Roman Romanovich represents an intriguing addition to the portal progression fantasy subgenre. By leveraging his background in psychology and extensive writing experience, Romanovich offers a potentially fresh perspective on familiar fantasy tropes. The novel's strengths lie in its promise of psychological depth, unique thematic blend, and the author's proven storytelling abilities.
While it remains to be seen how well "The Alchemist" balances its various elements, the book stands as a promising start to a new series that could push the boundaries of what readers expect from portal fantasy. Romanovich's psychological insights, combined with the allure of alchemical magic and character progression, create a compelling foundation for a series that may well leave a lasting impact on the genre.
For readers seeking a fantasy novel that offers more than just surface-level adventure, "The Alchemist" by Roman Romanovich appears to be a worthy contender. As the series progresses, it will be interesting to see how the author develops the world, characters, and themes introduced in this inaugural volume, potentially setting a new standard for psychologically nuanced fantasy literature.
June 29, 2024
I think the thing that interests me the most about this series so far is the setting. Its an extreme form of alternate history; with the story taking place on Earth and set in Russia. Time period wise its really hard to place. There are cars, landline phones, trains, planes, and helicopters; but there hasn't been any mention of radio, TV, or computers. Also, no mention of the USSR or a cold war. The problem with this is that its difficult for me to draw a good picture of what a place like Moscow looks like in this story. Is it lots of less than 10 story buildings or are there some skyscrapers? Is it a concrete jungle or no?
The magic system still hasn't been explored super well, but the MC's magic feels pretty soft-ish. A lot of different "Laws of Alchemy" get tossed around, but it feels pretty loose. I don't hate it but some aspects of the writing do leave me wondering what is actually happening in scenes some times. Like you'll often see mention of the MC using a seal or something, and sometimes its clear he actually physically carved it into something and other times I can only assume he's doing something more akin to like a character from Naruto drawing sigils in the air which feels like it runs counter to the "precise" nature of alchemy the MC goes on about 🤷♂️.
As far as the characters are concerned. I don't have any complaints but they also aren't quite that remarkable yet. I also can't tell if the cast is going to be entirely tossed after Book 1 or not either. At the very least, I can kind of sympathize with the MC, and can say he doesn't feel too weird considering his background.
If there are any real negatives with Book 1 its that the start (ie: first couple chapters) feels really fast; and as a result, I struggle to feel invested in what happened to the MC on Earth. The other main negative is that the grammar and wording of some sentences is just weird or plain wrong (requiring the reader to guess meaning). I'm going to either assume this is a translation issue or that its just a "English as a Second Language" type deal, because that is the only thing that makes sense to me. The errors are not super regular and you might only encounter them once every 2 chapters or so.
I'm checking out book 2 to see where this story heads.
The magic system still hasn't been explored super well, but the MC's magic feels pretty soft-ish. A lot of different "Laws of Alchemy" get tossed around, but it feels pretty loose. I don't hate it but some aspects of the writing do leave me wondering what is actually happening in scenes some times. Like you'll often see mention of the MC using a seal or something, and sometimes its clear he actually physically carved it into something and other times I can only assume he's doing something more akin to like a character from Naruto drawing sigils in the air which feels like it runs counter to the "precise" nature of alchemy the MC goes on about 🤷♂️.
As far as the characters are concerned. I don't have any complaints but they also aren't quite that remarkable yet. I also can't tell if the cast is going to be entirely tossed after Book 1 or not either. At the very least, I can kind of sympathize with the MC, and can say he doesn't feel too weird considering his background.
If there are any real negatives with Book 1 its that the start (ie: first couple chapters) feels really fast; and as a result, I struggle to feel invested in what happened to the MC on Earth. The other main negative is that the grammar and wording of some sentences is just weird or plain wrong (requiring the reader to guess meaning). I'm going to either assume this is a translation issue or that its just a "English as a Second Language" type deal, because that is the only thing that makes sense to me. The errors are not super regular and you might only encounter them once every 2 chapters or so.
I'm checking out book 2 to see where this story heads.
November 4, 2024
This is another volume in the string of Russian fantasy writers in the Progression or LitRPG genres (such as Alexey Osadchuk, Oleg Sapphire, Yuri Vinokuroff, and Alexey Kovtunov). Like this series, the plots tend to have main characters who are aristocrats but shun the trappings of the elite--at least their entitlements and arrogance. I find it strange that after over a hundred years of communism and post-communism, the distinction between aristocrat and commoner remains so central. Also, the main characters tend to come from other worlds with exceptional gifts so they are overpowered in the new one--albeit secretly. Gender roles are pretty traditional (though there are definitely strong women) with the men being both heroic and a bit hedonistic. Troubled by becoming too murderous, the heroes nevertheless find it necessary to kill regularly. The ALCHEMIST series reminds me of the books by Edgar Rice Burroughs I read when I was younger--not that deep psychologically with an emphasis on getting stronger, continuous action, going crisis to crisis, with multiple occurrences where the hero wins despite stronger opponents. Here the author spends a little too much time explaining the hero's thinking, which slows the action, and sometimes mistakes regular life as moving the plot along. Still, it is entertaining and fun to read in the context of a Russian perspective. (Within the Russian circle of writers, my favorite so far has been Alexey Osadchuk's LAST LIFE series.) To me three stars means that, despite flaws, the author accomplishes what he or she sets out to do--in this case, write an interesting progressive fantasy series that makes me want to read the next volume.
June 24, 2024
Not really alchemy, not like runes
The plot is okay. Not sure why they call the main character in alchemist he doesn't use any kind of potions he doesn't change the state of a solid to a liquid or a solid to another solid there's nothing about chemical compositions anything like that it's more like he creates seals which are just inscribed type runes on himself in the area around him and on things he creates but I wouldn't call that alchemy. I like his power, it's just weirdly labeled. The book is 250 pages which is really short but I guess the author is going for a serial type format which is kind of feels like a cop out to me. A lot happens in this book despite its length. Not sure why the author felt the need to place this adult man who's lived a bunch of lifetimes in a sexual relationship with a 15 year old but other than that it's okay. I read the next book and it's not very good. The POV switches in this novel are bearable in comparison to the next one. I think they also could have gone without romance or sexuality in this first book since the main character is in a Minor's body and there was so much other plot to get through that felt more rushed.
The plot is okay. Not sure why they call the main character in alchemist he doesn't use any kind of potions he doesn't change the state of a solid to a liquid or a solid to another solid there's nothing about chemical compositions anything like that it's more like he creates seals which are just inscribed type runes on himself in the area around him and on things he creates but I wouldn't call that alchemy. I like his power, it's just weirdly labeled. The book is 250 pages which is really short but I guess the author is going for a serial type format which is kind of feels like a cop out to me. A lot happens in this book despite its length. Not sure why the author felt the need to place this adult man who's lived a bunch of lifetimes in a sexual relationship with a 15 year old but other than that it's okay. I read the next book and it's not very good. The POV switches in this novel are bearable in comparison to the next one. I think they also could have gone without romance or sexuality in this first book since the main character is in a Minor's body and there was so much other plot to get through that felt more rushed.
June 27, 2024
Unfortunately underwhelming
The name of the book seems to be a translation error as the protagonist never shows any indication of being an alchemist in the traditional sense. He is more of an artificer and runologist.
The pacing:
I assume this is an early work of the author as the pacing is really bad. The part regarding the family is way too short and they get not introduced enough for to reader to care about them. The time at the research facility is super short as well despite supposedly lasting about 18 months. On the other hand the time in the forest and school felt too long. All in all not much happens at all throughout the book.
Fleeting or contraproductive characters:
Several characters get introduced only to disappear shortly after. I found the decision to show the perspectives of Roman and the Emperor rather contraproductive as it takes away from the mystery and does not give much in return.
Plot armor:
The way the protagonist got the super rare, super powerful meteor ore artificact that early on was highly unbelievable. Given the fact that the artififact is worth more than most of the province the persons possessing it would not act like cheap thugs.
The name of the book seems to be a translation error as the protagonist never shows any indication of being an alchemist in the traditional sense. He is more of an artificer and runologist.
The pacing:
I assume this is an early work of the author as the pacing is really bad. The part regarding the family is way too short and they get not introduced enough for to reader to care about them. The time at the research facility is super short as well despite supposedly lasting about 18 months. On the other hand the time in the forest and school felt too long. All in all not much happens at all throughout the book.
Fleeting or contraproductive characters:
Several characters get introduced only to disappear shortly after. I found the decision to show the perspectives of Roman and the Emperor rather contraproductive as it takes away from the mystery and does not give much in return.
Plot armor:
The way the protagonist got the super rare, super powerful meteor ore artificact that early on was highly unbelievable. Given the fact that the artififact is worth more than most of the province the persons possessing it would not act like cheap thugs.
May 23, 2024
Some of this is lost in translation. Unique world building, interesting main character.
Overall I like the book but it had its problems. The main character was interesting and move the story along. The parallel sub plots of the storyline where Pace killers and confusing information dumps. The story never really explained the world's power dynamics clearly, and although the actual explanations were clear, they never cohesively came together. I did not enjoy the subplots because they killed the pace of the story, and never once did the author make the reader vested in the side plots. I think some of the story may have been lost in translation, however I certainly have read worst stories and will probably try book 2.
Overall I like the book but it had its problems. The main character was interesting and move the story along. The parallel sub plots of the storyline where Pace killers and confusing information dumps. The story never really explained the world's power dynamics clearly, and although the actual explanations were clear, they never cohesively came together. I did not enjoy the subplots because they killed the pace of the story, and never once did the author make the reader vested in the side plots. I think some of the story may have been lost in translation, however I certainly have read worst stories and will probably try book 2.
October 17, 2024
Good story, somewhat disapointing protagonist
Honestly, it's a pretty good story. The writing is good and the protagonist is likeable. However, his past and magic system doesn't live up to expectations. Ed is a genius who was able to perform such advanced runework/alchemy that he transfered himself to another world. And by his pov, he's not unknowledgable. So how is it that he seems to be useless in his magic system? His efforts in protecting his 'family' is disapointing at best. Runework/alchemy is the magic of preparation and stored potential. And yet he seems to only put together half-hearted protections. He doesn't seem determined to protect anyone until there's a present threat.
Other than that, there's the whole underage s*x thing.
Honestly, it's a pretty good story. The writing is good and the protagonist is likeable. However, his past and magic system doesn't live up to expectations. Ed is a genius who was able to perform such advanced runework/alchemy that he transfered himself to another world. And by his pov, he's not unknowledgable. So how is it that he seems to be useless in his magic system? His efforts in protecting his 'family' is disapointing at best. Runework/alchemy is the magic of preparation and stored potential. And yet he seems to only put together half-hearted protections. He doesn't seem determined to protect anyone until there's a present threat.
Other than that, there's the whole underage s*x thing.
June 7, 2024
Great read and so enjoyable
It's just such a fun book , starts slowish and then just reads right on through to entertaining and so immersive , you can see everything he describes and its so smooth . Easy to read and a good story to boot , the characters are well thought out and great personalities you slowly learn about everybody and the main character isn't over powered , you see him use the other world knowledge and mix it with his new place , there's action and learning and growing up, also there's messed up life lessons he learns and applies the lessons from both worlds . You won't be disappointed in this book, all I can really say is enjoy.
It's just such a fun book , starts slowish and then just reads right on through to entertaining and so immersive , you can see everything he describes and its so smooth . Easy to read and a good story to boot , the characters are well thought out and great personalities you slowly learn about everybody and the main character isn't over powered , you see him use the other world knowledge and mix it with his new place , there's action and learning and growing up, also there's messed up life lessons he learns and applies the lessons from both worlds . You won't be disappointed in this book, all I can really say is enjoy.
December 14, 2024
So most Fantasy lately comes with settings in Europe and mostly in Western Europe. Yes, occasionally I get writers from other countries and this is a really good one. The story is based on a decimated Russian or similar country. Not only are there magicians but also demons. Pick your poison I guess. Our main character Edgar comes from another world were he was an Alchemist. Now he does mention that one law we all know from Full Metal Alchemist but the rest of them are a bit easier it seems. All in all I liked the book and feel that it would be great to read the rest of the series.
January 8, 2025
character development is horrible
There's no two way about it the main character (MC) is a brat without any empathy or emotional depth. He has no wisdom and is as mature as a teenager but he is living a second life... it's a disgrace! Just another MC trying to game a world to "win" with very few badly made connections/relationships to other people.
The side characters are absolutely flat! They have no depth, no life and no purpose but to support, hinder, or oppose the MC.
I definitely do not recommend to read this book!
There's no two way about it the main character (MC) is a brat without any empathy or emotional depth. He has no wisdom and is as mature as a teenager but he is living a second life... it's a disgrace! Just another MC trying to game a world to "win" with very few badly made connections/relationships to other people.
The side characters are absolutely flat! They have no depth, no life and no purpose but to support, hinder, or oppose the MC.
I definitely do not recommend to read this book!
June 15, 2024
Book one
For me this book seemed a bit short. I've gotten used to reading five hundred plus page books.
There wasn't enough world building or even character development. I felt like I knew more about the character from the interludes than I did for the MC.
Holy cow, I feel like this book was more interlude than anything else.
I'll post the mistakes I found on Goodreads.
5/10 I might come back to this series at a later date.
For me this book seemed a bit short. I've gotten used to reading five hundred plus page books.
There wasn't enough world building or even character development. I felt like I knew more about the character from the interludes than I did for the MC.
Holy cow, I feel like this book was more interlude than anything else.
I'll post the mistakes I found on Goodreads.
5/10 I might come back to this series at a later date.
July 5, 2024
Not what I expected but very good!
Alchemists, potions, pills and medicine are what I expected but in this story, alchemists are more like a thaumaturge. Magic symbols, the power of like affecting like, etc. It’s a story of survival, second chances, and appreciation of what’s really important. It’s also has realistic character growth. Really enjoyed it and I’m looking forward to the next novel.
Alchemists, potions, pills and medicine are what I expected but in this story, alchemists are more like a thaumaturge. Magic symbols, the power of like affecting like, etc. It’s a story of survival, second chances, and appreciation of what’s really important. It’s also has realistic character growth. Really enjoyed it and I’m looking forward to the next novel.
August 3, 2024
A Solid power progression saga, good Characters, solid plot. 🤭
These Russian guys - the Authors -consistently spin a good yarn. In this, a re-birth from a bleak, dystopian world, offers the character, Ed, a seemingly good stable new start as a child in a
happy family but chaos & danger occurs, causing him to hide out & re-learn his talents. Look forward to rest of the series
BB Vancouver
These Russian guys - the Authors -consistently spin a good yarn. In this, a re-birth from a bleak, dystopian world, offers the character, Ed, a seemingly good stable new start as a child in a
happy family but chaos & danger occurs, causing him to hide out & re-learn his talents. Look forward to rest of the series
BB Vancouver
August 22, 2024
it was the relationships that kept me reading
An isekai litrpg that is light, at least in the first book, on stats but rich in story telling that builds relationships around the protagonist. The world is a version of our own, only with powers and magic. What is special is the characterizations and how the author does it while keeping inner monologues interesting.
I plan to keep on reading and have followed the author.
An isekai litrpg that is light, at least in the first book, on stats but rich in story telling that builds relationships around the protagonist. The world is a version of our own, only with powers and magic. What is special is the characterizations and how the author does it while keeping inner monologues interesting.
I plan to keep on reading and have followed the author.
September 8, 2024
Lost 1 star for the pedo creepy aspect. This is one of the grey areas that I really cringe at when reading isekai when the mc is shoved into a younger body. I understand from a physical (RAGING HORMONES) pov, but an old guy in a teenager's body having a relationship with another teenager is cringe af, teetering into fucking pedo zone. This is why I love Legend of the Arch Magus by Michael Sisa, coz he just avoids intimate relationships.
November 11, 2024
Entertaining Read
Ed starts out on dying planet. All resources have been depleted. He is among the last to be alive. He has devised a way to transport to another world. He does so into the body of a dying boy. Good times, betrayal, experimentation, kind people, socialization, learning, and battle ensue. I like the action, humor, intrigue, romance, and viewing ideas from a different culture's point of view. I look forward to the next book.
Ed starts out on dying planet. All resources have been depleted. He is among the last to be alive. He has devised a way to transport to another world. He does so into the body of a dying boy. Good times, betrayal, experimentation, kind people, socialization, learning, and battle ensue. I like the action, humor, intrigue, romance, and viewing ideas from a different culture's point of view. I look forward to the next book.
October 5, 2025
I could not finish.
I tried. I got 1/3 through this book. It was sad and depressing. Very well written. The story is filled with death, both humans and planets. It has people that are struggling to live a life; living in terror and I’m absolutely no hope. Everyone hates everyone and he who lives, kills the weak first, wins. Definitely not my trading preference. I have no interest in books that detail the possible death of a planet.
I tried. I got 1/3 through this book. It was sad and depressing. Very well written. The story is filled with death, both humans and planets. It has people that are struggling to live a life; living in terror and I’m absolutely no hope. Everyone hates everyone and he who lives, kills the weak first, wins. Definitely not my trading preference. I have no interest in books that detail the possible death of a planet.
March 28, 2024
An entertaining portal fiction story
I think this book handles the progression and portal fiction genre well, and I enjoyed the Russian setting.
It does have some of the more typical Russian tropes, but that’s sort of what makes it interesting - it plays in that space but doesn’t have them dominate the entirety of the story telling.
I think this book handles the progression and portal fiction genre well, and I enjoyed the Russian setting.
It does have some of the more typical Russian tropes, but that’s sort of what makes it interesting - it plays in that space but doesn’t have them dominate the entirety of the story telling.
April 7, 2024
Great reading.
I read this book through Kindle Unlimited.
There is a balance of active violence verses nonviolence. The main character is strong at first but then his life changes again and again. He deals with things using his version of alchemy.
I enjoyed this book very much and I will be looking forward to the second book.
I read this book through Kindle Unlimited.
There is a balance of active violence verses nonviolence. The main character is strong at first but then his life changes again and again. He deals with things using his version of alchemy.
I enjoyed this book very much and I will be looking forward to the second book.
April 25, 2024
great start
I enjoyed this. Great set up as the MC transitions from one world to another. I loved the family set up he found and the relationships the MC built. It was refreshing, well done, and heart warming.
The world building has potential. So much is left unexplained about demons, walkers, and the gifted in general. I was intrigued and can’t wait to find out more!
I enjoyed this. Great set up as the MC transitions from one world to another. I loved the family set up he found and the relationships the MC built. It was refreshing, well done, and heart warming.
The world building has potential. So much is left unexplained about demons, walkers, and the gifted in general. I was intrigued and can’t wait to find out more!
May 15, 2024
Enjoyable
I quite liked this book with the exception of 'Roman'. Essentially an antagonist except the main character never meets them or even knows they exist. Roman gets a few chapters all to himself but after the first few I skipped them completely. Why do I care what a future enemy is doing?
I quite liked this book with the exception of 'Roman'. Essentially an antagonist except the main character never meets them or even knows they exist. Roman gets a few chapters all to himself but after the first few I skipped them completely. Why do I care what a future enemy is doing?
July 25, 2024
Google translated garbo
The book has obviously been run through a translation tool without any editing or localization. The writing wouldn't pass a basic middle school exam. The dialogue makes no sense half the time and when it does make sense, it's cringe. Books like this illustrate that most 5 star reviews are paid for.
The book has obviously been run through a translation tool without any editing or localization. The writing wouldn't pass a basic middle school exam. The dialogue makes no sense half the time and when it does make sense, it's cringe. Books like this illustrate that most 5 star reviews are paid for.
October 20, 2024
Absolutely ENTIRELY tell and not even a hint of show. And you are being told in brief and in a hurry. At least during the first half hour. Don't know if it gets any better because I have no interest in going further. Shame. Seems like the foundation of a good story. Feel the author would benefit from a co-writer that turned their good ideas into a story with some depth and atmosphere.
October 29, 2024
Twisted beginnings
A very interesting take on the "born into a new body" tale by a fascinating Russian author. The MC is a delight, the world just slightly off normal, and the problems are actually pretty mundane. But the author keeps it all exciting and thoughtful through out the book. Good start to a series.
A very interesting take on the "born into a new body" tale by a fascinating Russian author. The MC is a delight, the world just slightly off normal, and the problems are actually pretty mundane. But the author keeps it all exciting and thoughtful through out the book. Good start to a series.
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