Thank you to Lost Island Press and Mel Torrefranca for providing me an ARC copy for free in exchange for an honest review.
I always like to start with what I enjoy and begin reviews on a positive note, so let's start there.
I loved the character of Blimmery. His way through the story and his responses were natural, and he was a fantastic lead to fill the protagonist's shoes. Another character that I really enjoyed was Cove. She is my favorite in the story, given that she is helping her cousin through his stress and personal problems. And on top of that she is the most colorful, and those characters usually end up being my favorite.
After reading Nightshade Academy, I was slightly frustrated with the intense world dumping of information. I was so happy to discover that this novella did not use the same tactics for sharing the world the characters live in. Mel Torrefranca could also write a wonderful group of words to paint you a picture; in some moments, it felt like a movie was playing in my mind.
With the smaller page count, the story is fast-paced and can take you through the years this story covers very well. I found that from the late middle to the end, I constantly wanted more, and by the conclusion, I was hooked.
Now, I will share what I didn't particularly enjoy, but I will also provide what I think could have been changed to make the story richer.
Some of the characters in my option fell flat, particularly Maelin. While I understand not being able to thoroughly explore everyone's backstory in the short time of the novella, the focus should have been her and not nearly as much as the others. Since she is the title character, I felt that even though her life was unjustly taken from her, I didn't have a connection with her to care greatly. She was the least involved compared to her male friends. One of the greatest examples of this is when they are trying to break her free from her cell the day before her execution. Blimmery is arguing and has intense conversations with Wick and Taig, while the mission’s focus is behind bars and silent for most of the scene, even though she is the one who is going to be killed the fallowing morning.
Another thing I would have loved to explore is Taig’s and Blimmery's relationship and how they disliked each other. I think it would have made a wonderful element to make something more than simply make it out to be that they don’t get along. In the end, he died without much progress made between them.
To empower the story, this would have been great as a full length novel, and for it to be told though Maelin's eyes. Then I would feel like you're reading her life and how she died trying to do what is right. Given the circumstances, I completely understand why it's told from Blimmery's POV, but when he says things like how it's his fault and how he dug her grave, I think it doesn't partially line up with the story because she just openly admitted to reading illegal literature. So she dug her own grave, not him. Because she could have not read it, helped Blimmery, or simply refused to get involved. But she wanted to know even though she knew her choices came with consequences. And if she did share her secret, It would make more sense for her to tell Taig. Even though he would probably disagree, he wouldn't tell on her because he cared for her so much. When she told basically a stranger and how she then was planned for execution, well, it was kind alike what did you expect?
I think this story would have been great if it was told from Maelin, and at at first she and Blimmery didn't get along because she already had such strong beliefs, and he disagreed only because he feared the truth, which would feed into the narrative of him thinking he's a coward. And by going on a longer journey together, they would understand more about their different values and find the book with Maelin leading the way. And through tragic circumstances, she died protecting Blimmery, which would make the elements of her passing the torch to him stronger, and now it is his turn to go out and spread the truth that Maelin tried so hard to tell. For him to finish what she started. Because she rather handled herself poorly, and there were much better ways to try to rebel than the one she chose. Her death fell flat because she completely had it coming and the fault was her own.
I hope this review doesn't scare any potential readers off because I am a huge fan of Mel Torrefranca, and she is by far one of my favorite authors. However, if I'm being honest, I think since the story was so short, many things couldn't be explained as much as I think they should have been. Because if it was, we would’ve had more time to get to know these characters that I wanted to know more about.
However, if you are a fan of the Belladonna series, then this extra story is one you should check out. Even though I read Nightshade Academy first, the story is written in a way that you don't need to read the main trilogy to understand these characters' world.
Finally, all these options are my own, and no review should ever dampen how much you enjoy a story. Happy reading!