Rating 3.75 so I rounded it to 4 .
Thank you to The Nerd Fam for this gifted E- ARC
This story pulled me in immediately with its intriguing premise—a cursed warrior forced to reconcile her past while embracing a new reality. Yes please 🙌🏾 Dunegray, the fierce and formidable commander of the Cursed legion, faces challenges both external and internal after the curse binding her to the undead is lifted.
Compelling as the plot was, I found that the pacing and shifts in the point of view (POV) often slowed the story down and made it difficult to stay fully engaged.
The world-building in the kingdom of Nahmval is rich, and Elwood’s depiction of Dunegray’s struggle with newfound mortality is intriguing. Her internal battle—learning how to live among the very people she once oppressed—adds depth to her character. There’s also an interesting dynamic between her and Zerael, a young sorcerer whose abilities release her from the curse, though their relationship felt underdeveloped at times due to the narrative’s shifts.
Strengths:
* Dunegray’s Character: As an FMC, Dunegray is everything you’d expect from a powerful warrior: strong, determined, and complex. She wrestles with her past as the leader of the Cursed army and the guilt of her role in terrorizing the kingdom. Her internal journey is just as engaging as the external one, and her resilience in the face of both enemies and her own haunted past makes her a standout character.
* The Concept: The idea of a cursed army learning to live among their former enemies was fascinating. It set the stage for moral dilemmas and interesting interactions between Dunegray and the people of Nahmval. The curse itself is an ever-looming threat, adding tension to the plot, particularly with the introduction of Silnus, a dark figure from Dunegray’s past.
Challenges:
* Pacing: Despite the high stakes, the action took too long to unfold. The buildup felt overly drawn out, which made it difficult for me to stay hooked. I expected the tension to rise faster, but the story lingered in setup for too long before diving into the meat of the conflict.
* POV Shifts: The sudden and often confusing shifts in POV detracted from the flow of the story. It felt disjointed at times, which made it harder to connect with the characters or stay immersed in the narrative. The constant shifting made it difficult to feel grounded in the world, and I found myself pulled out of the story more often than I would have liked.
* Underdeveloped Relationships: While there’s potential in the dynamic between Dunegray and Zerael, their bond didn’t quite reach its full potential. The focus on world-building and Dunegray'sn internal struggle overshadowed some of the character relationships , leaving me wanting more depth .