This series had some potential, but it’s solidly mid for me at this point. 2.5 stars for the series. I have essentially the same issues with this book as every other with a few extra so it’s a 1.5 stars for me, rounding to 2.
First, there’s the constant context errors, making jokes based on the English language and contemporary uses of those words. Example: making a joke about a bone helmet and boners… Yeah… Then there’s the fourth wall breaks. I DESPISE these with a passion. These are meant by authors that abuse them (like Noobtown for instance) to be funny. But all they do is sacrifice immersion for some one-liner. Like a Titanic movie reference really? Is that joke worth it? NO. It isn’t.
My next issue is with the constant gassing up of Max (MC) about what a great and amazing guy he is and how special that makes him. Literally EVERYONE gasses himself up like this! It is so annoying and unrealistic. Let the readers glean his personality and character through his actions, not side characters laying it out over and over and over and over again in unrealistic conversations. It’s exhausting! We get it, he’s a good guy and that’s important for the plot. I wonder what percentage of this entire series is dedicated to this favorite pastime of the author? It’s probably a surprisingly large amount.
The side characters are really underutilized, even his elf fiancé. They hardly ever play a role in their victories. If they are mentioned at all, it’s more like the author trying to throw them a bone. It makes the whole teamwork thing seem pointless. And I don’t know why these characters would continue to risk their lives, even if the rewards are great, if they have gone from contributing to being liabilities. The author did attempt to rectify this with some training side quest, but it doesn’t work if he then doesn’t utilize them in the fights.
Plus the fights need it. Despite the variety of environments and opponents, they still follow the same path in almost every instance.
I don’t understand the whole other planet thing. I don’t know why he cares what happens over there. He makes this big speech about no one should dare to defy him after taking out a challenger (the cover character) and then just forfeits to the next dude to challenge him. And these logical inconsistencies continue. Often these play out as conversations with other characters where Max is convinced by “knowing they’re right”. That’s often used phrase in these convos the author uses to explain some decision. But the annoying part isn’t the repetitive use of this method, it’s that the explanations sometimes don’t make any sense, but the MC “knows they’re right.” And it is right, because the author wrote it that way. I hate writing like that.
Oh and let’s not forget ANOTHER cliffhanger. Dude, we don’t do cliffhangers in progression fantasy. We do mini-cliffs, some small issue can be teased. But big issues left hanging? That robs of payoffs? Payoffs are why we read progression fantasy. It’s escapism! We don’t want to feel bad or miffed or annoyed when we finish a book, we want to feel elated and triumphant. It’s about that feeling, that’s why we read this genre! We have that feeling carry us over to buy an author’s next installment, not a need to know how the cliffhanger plays out. That’s soap opera garbage. I can forgive the author for doing this once, but not twice.
My biggest complaint though is how the larger plot is shaping up. We’ve got ourselves a “one” who must struggle to prevail in a reality where his actions will determine the fate of them all… yawn. Such a trope. So much of that in this genre, but this is like the highest degree of that so super lame.
All in all, a tropish plot with flat characters with little to no growth, repetitive fights, context errors and fourth wall breaks, cliffhangers, and logical inconsistencies, making this series a solid mid for me. 2.5 stars.