Last Call

By Fang and Fury #1

by Grimm (AO3)

Teen Wolf Sterek
He doesn’t come to The Beacon to pick up people. It’s precisely the reason why he doesn’t go anywhere else. People in this neighborhood know him, know he’s not interested in being hit on, which allows him to have a drink in peace. Derek knows he’s good-looking, but the type of people it attracts disgust him. At least other werewolves can smell the unfriendliness on him and stay away, but that doesn’t stop everyone. He went to a gay bar with his coworker Isaac once and it was horrifying.
Words: 6,364 complete
[Fanart] Last Call by oldmanrenkas.

Genres: Fan Fiction, M M Romance, Shapeshifters, Short Stories, Paranormal, Fantasy, LGBT

19 pages, ebook

First published May 24, 2013

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[Exina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wonderfully written Sterek fanfiction.

I loved to be in Derek’s head, witnessing his first reactions to Stiles.

Derek leans, just enough to catch his scent, and it's - it's not like anything he's ever smelled before. The young man next to him smells like happiness and content and life. It's the most vibrant thing he's ever experienced, and leaves him reeling.

The significance of Derek’s dreams is impressively done. When they meet in the bar, Derek doesn’t know yet, but he is ready.



Stiles is cute, fun, open and perceptive. Simply amazing!

My only complaint is that their first kiss is not really shown. I love first kisses! I want detailed descriptions, dammit!

But overall Last Call is a great little story. Recommended.

[Rosa, really · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is supposed to be PWP but it's not entirely.

Basically, Derek visits his neighborhood bar, meets Stiles, then they go back to Derek's place and fuck.

So yes, we have sexy times but there's also romance and mourning and Derek's melancholic POV that I just love. Of course, the tone turns hopeful as soon as Stiles walks on page. Which is as it should be.

Also....Magic Stiles! Tattooed Stiles! Toppy Stiles! Yay!



And there's a sequel!

[* A Reader Obsessed * · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lonely, broody werewolf Derek (definitely with tragic past here) just wants to be left in peace to nurse his drink. Until this sits next to him.



Not convinced yet?

Well it's got very little relationship angst, the feel of destiny, and the idea of soul mates.

Throw in a confident, magic Stiles and what you get is a very sexy, emotional look at their love.


Don't forget to read the sequel Disconnect!

[Otila · Rating 4 out of 5]

Derek doesn't go to the bar to pick up people. He goes there to brood of course. That's until he meets Stiles and takes him home.

This is PWP but with feelz.

And just look at him. Of course Derek falls for him.

[Tara♥ · Rating 4 out of 5]

“Bite me.

Please, fuck, bite me.”



To be honest I don't think anything else needs be added to this review.

Oh apart from as usual when it comes to Derek POV and tattooed Stiles, this was too short. Packed a punch though!

[Jennifer☠Pher☠ · Rating 5 out of 5]

That was absolutely intoxicating.

I feel like I am in some sort of trance.

I’ve been spelled I think. I think I like it too.

I honestly don’t know. I think I thought I was gonna get a shot of porn first thing this morning. I was not expecting a magical and breathtaking love story.

Shit.

Breathless I am.

Tattooed, Magic Stiles is my absolute favorite. Broken Derek getting to smile? Yeah, this totally freaking just rocked my world.

Rosa, I am stealing your pic because you did the “safe for Goodreads” edit. Click on the AO3 link if you want to see the real pic that was done for this story, it is awesome.

[Sandra · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 stars This is supposed to be PWP (Porn Withou Plot) but I actually don't think it is at all. Based on the cover image I thought Stiles was gonna be all BAMF and kinda hard. But he's same adorable rambly self, just with sexy magical tattoos. They flirt and have pretty meaningful convo for hours in the bar before going back to have steamy yumtastic toppy!Stiles sex. And then it ends on a very light, very hopeful note. I'm giddy.

[⚣Michaelle⚣ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 Stars

There is NEVER enough Bottom!Derek fanfic.

[Trix · Rating 3 out of 5]

Interesting perspective! Quite enjoyed this lonesome Derek, hating the Alpha status and earning for companionship and having someone nearby. We can all relate to that last one.

And his and Stiles' banter seemed easy and in character. It was easy to feel Derek's pain and loneliness. Made me all the more happy to see him take Stiles home and be able to smile freely and try again for happiness.

Wonder what the next installment will be about?

2nd Read: 14th August 2016

[Meep · Rating 4 out of 5]

A quick PWP but there's enough build up to show the characters and feel like a story.

It's an older more mature (magic) Stiles in this fic, not necessarily a cannon feel though Derek is still the big broody wolf we all love. Also tattoos.

I liked it :

“You’ll stay for a while?”

Stiles laughs again. “I’ll stay forever if you want me to.”

[Arpi !!!getting high on books!!! · Rating 3 out of 5]

Not much to say about this book...It was OK for me...

Stiles was just not the same...and Derek was also not the same

I just did not feel the connection

But the Smexy times were good, so a 3 star for that alone

[BWT · Rating 3 out of 5]

It had a surprisingly deeper tone than I expected.

Also - Derek bottoms!

And the Fan Art? Wowza.

[Fanart] Last Call by oldmanrenkas
http://archiveofourown.org/works/818070

[Alice · Rating 3 out of 5]

It is a nice PWP, though mildly Sterek-esque - both of them are somewhat OOC, basically it is a nice PWP of a broody, lonely stockbroker in NYC and a magically twink. Still good though.

[The_Paperback_Peruser · Rating 3 out of 5]

Sweet!

[Skye Blue ☆*~ﾟლ(´ڡ`ლ)~*☆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Whoo.

I went in expecting porny goodness...but that's not all that I got.

This teetered on the edge of between porn and feels. It never really tips over to Fluffy sugary feels, but there is a hint.

Good smexy times, with toppy Stiles.

I would love to read more.

[Finnegan · Rating 4 out of 5]

There is a reason Grimm is one of my favourite Sterek writers. Her stories are well written and full of detail. In this one, Derek meets magic!Stiles in a bar, immediately clicked, and went home for some sweet sexytimes. Very good!

[Borderstar · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars

This is a sweet, sexy little story, but it is WAY too short. There is a short sequel too that I haven't read yet.

[Nepreading · Rating 4 out of 5]

Angsty, broody, lonely and mourning Derek, and from his POV, no less! Tattooed, magic, confident, heals-all-hurts Stiles. Having dreamed about the each other type of Kismet, with scenting and biting and a bottom!Derek submitting (*happy flail*) and asking (sort of) for what he needs, and Stiles simply knowing how to handle and take care of him.

[Pjm12 · Rating 4 out of 5]

More Sterek. (yummy Sterek, actually).

[Valerie ❈M/M Romance Junkie❈ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Read 11/17/2014
Reread 1/10/2017

[Stas · Rating 3 out of 5]

Warm

[Mj · Rating 5 out of 5]

First read Dec 2015 - This was so enjoyable and packed a surprising amount of feels for a short.