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Flow, by Paula Sevenbergen
★★★★☆
128 Pages
I wasn't sure how this one would start – whether it would show you the entire summer camp events first, then jump ahead, but I actually really liked that it began in the present, where everyone was an adult, then trickled little flashbacks of the past when it became relevant. It was a really good way to find out all the facts about the past in a way that left space for lots of surprises and twists.
Girls being bullied or shamed for their periods – even by other girls – is a sad reality in the world, even now, but this story showed just how easily a 'prank' could get out of hand. In a group of bullies, there's always one person who enjoys humiliating and hurting others, who always takes it too far, and one person who knows it's wrong but is too afraid to stand up and speak up.
I feel like this was a solid story, but I;m a little disappointed in the ending. It was unrealistically forgiving – which I think is because this is billed as a YA horror – but it feels more like a “teaching” ending gears towards YA readers rather than something realistic. Most bullies tend to never change or regret what they did, but I can understand why they chose the ending they did for this comic.
I also have to question the absolute insistence of NO adults actually talking to Dara about what was happening to her. Knowing her mother had died when she was young, that she didn't have a female influence, just her father at home, you would hope – and expect – one of the females at the camp to step up and sit Dara down to tell her about periods, to help her understand what was happening to her body and protect her from the bullying. I know that would have eliminated the point for the book, but there were a lot of opportunities to speak to Dara about what was going on and none of the adults took that chance.
I do agree with some other reviewers that the blurb is misleading. The story is told by one of the bullies and her POV, all the way through. Never once do we get Dara's POV, which would have really changed this story into something far more emotional and meaningful, to see that ignorance and understand her thought processes when she allowed the girls to bully her. But we don't. We see the bully trying to rationalise and reason through everything they did.
I feel like there was A LOT of potential to the story, lots of other things they could have done to make this have more of an impact. However, I do see what they were trying to do with it and I think a lot of teenagers will see themselves in at least one character and may learn something good about how to treat people with more respect. I don't think the magic aspect was necessary, but that's just me.