Can Clay stop Bella from falling apart completely, or will her pain destroy them both?
Bella
After being replaced bya younger woman, Bella is left utterly broken–homeless, heartsore, and stripped of everything.
Now, the mistress is playing mum to her two sons, and Bella has nowhere else to turn.
Standing on a bridge above the motorway, cold and alone, there’s only one way out for her, and she wants to take it.
Clay
As Vice President of the Broken Iron Demons MC, Clay has fought hard to bury the demons of his past. But nothing prepares him for Bella, the woman who crashes into his world and changes everything.
Determined to save her, Clay doesn’t expect that she might turn out to be the one to save him.
Haunted by the death of his brother, Clay swore he'd never deserve a happy ending, yet Bella is opening him up to the possibility of a second chance.
When loyalties are tested, will history repeat itself, or will Clay finally choose love over the club and his brothers?
This was just ok. There were so many plot holes and unanswered questions. Like why'd Brandy/Imogen the club whore target Bella the h getting her husband Liam to divorce her and take custody of her kids? Never answered. But why even did Liam all of a sudden start hating the h? Never answered. What on earth does Liam even do for a living to get his "goons" to fake Bella being a drug addict? Never answered. I would have liked more info on Clay's character. We just know he slept with his brother's girlfriend while all three were on deployment and the brother dies. That's about it. I also didn't care for Bella. For her age she was really immature. Also, for all the trouble the club whore caused she got zero comeuppance and is still apart of the club. Make it make sense. The prez of this club just keeps her around and everyone's ok with it. But I'm not surprised by Drifter the prez because he treats his ol' lady Rochelle like shit, and we know he cheats on her in his book. Not surprised. He disappeared when they were all at the strip club, so I think we all knows what he's been doing. His wife is going through IVF and is hormonal so I guess his way of coping is going to be him sticking his dick in someone else. Probably more than one as we know he has a wandering eye. 🙄
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DNF Listen some of this just didn’t make sense. We open with a suicidal fmc rescued by a biker. She’s suicidal because her husband is cheating and he somehow gets custody of her children. It’s constantly repeated that the cheaters are “playing happy families.”This whole plot doesn’t make sense and becomes even more silly when you read on. Supposedly the OW the Husband is cheating with convinced the husband that the fmc is unfit to mother her own child-WTH????The husband is not the H.Bella the fmc should have listened to Lizzy from the gitgo when she told her not to let some skank Ho take her kids from under her nose. Supposedly her husband said she was a drug user and got custody. How bout this ever hear of drug testing? This ain’t the dark ages! Well I guess the whole point of not having her children around was so Bella could become Bitchy biker babe Bella. Bella becomes so bitchy that I couldn’t buy that she would let the cheater husband get away with taking her kids and letting a literal club whore raise them. Yes you got that right the OW/Imogen/Brandy is also a clubwhore for the MCC. Is this a Charlotte McGinlay novel?? Anyways I knew I was finished when Clay the H said something about he didn’t do Clubwhores because they had fannies as big as a Tesco bag. Say what? There are so many things wrong with that thought process I can’t even. I think the writing style is just not for me. I need to stop reading biker books by UK authors. Y’all I know Charlie played a biker to perfection but this just ain’t working.
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It’s left me with a lot of questions like why did Brandy do what she did? She clearly held something against the h to keep doing what she did but you never find out why. And as always the ow just kind of goes poof after it all happens. The H is pretty devoted from first sight which is cute.
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The story was good. I liked the OW drama and the interaction with the boys... But Bella was so annoying how she got angry at Clay for almost everything but was a pushover with others, it took away from me enjoying the story.
I’d read rocks redemption (book 1), and despite not being a fan, I am nothing if not committed to a series. Plus, I’d spotted some TikTok reviews that confirmed book 2 was vastly improved, which I agree with.
Overall: Clays story was marginally better than Rocks, but the writing style still wasn’t my favourite, not by a country mile. I get it, MC books are meant to be way out there, but this felt way too bizarre to even be enjoyable. Here’s why:
🙄 the way the president was desperate to keep the stripper who was literally sabotaging his best friends girlfriend. Excuse me? In most other MC books, they’d have committed murder. 🙄 the MC ‘brothers’ don’t seem to actually like each other. 🙄 if shein sold insta love, this would be it. 🙄 As a Brit, I just don’t understand why we’re setting MC books in our world. Come on now.
As with the previous book, the pacing was wild, and I question if this was proofread considering the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.
Don’t think I’ll be picking up any more in the series.
It was a blah read. There was no real depth to it and moved way too fast. Insta love, that was so unbelievable. The back story was abysmal . The thing that killed me though, was the president letting the club whore stay. There is no way any sane person would let the very problem stay in their midst. Something or someone threatened their club, they get rid of it. They don’t keep them around because they make them money at the strip club. That’s not brotherhood. Wherever the author got their info on clubs was way off. I definitely would NOT recommend this book.
This is a 3.5 for me but I rounded up for the author. This was good book about a woman that has lost everything. As her husband left her for another younger woman and then took her children away from her. Bella is feeling lost and almost tries to take herself from the world.
BUT clay sees her and makes it his mission to save her and make sure she’s okay. As he was in the marines and lost his brother, but blames himself and wants to save bella now. But he also quickly falls for her and decided she’s his.
Bella’s ex husbands hoe won’t leave her alone showing up to flaunt having taking her life from her. But when the ex husband takes it too far clay as the Vice president to the MC, he bring her under his wing to the club house. This really set off the drama.
As in the first half it was bella trying to become more confident in herself, the second half is slam packed with drama.
I liked the book and I love some good drama and ow drama but some of this drama sort of felt unfinished to me. Like Spoiler we find out who the ow actually is to the club and the president dick (oh I mean drift) won’t take do anything about it. Like that honestly made me mad at the club but mainly drift. So clay was cornered into making bella his old lady and dick wouldn’t even let him talk to bella first. So she was blind sided and doesn’t even know what clay feels for her. She was rightfully pissed but doesn’t even let him explain. That made me a little annoyed at her. Then after confronting the ow, bella just magically forgive clay without him ever explaining.
Then after some other drama involving a wedding and finally getting visitation of her children. The ow literally assaults clay and the president dick acts like it’s no big deal. He literally tells his friend and brother that he’s not his watcher. But they do use her to have the ex husband taken care of but I wish they did more. then they ban the ow from the club but she’s still working for them and in the last chapter the ow literally walked into the bar. Like What is she still doing here?
Overall, the beginning was good with bella and clay coming together but the last half had me with the drama.
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The characters really touched my heart and I had so many emotions running around I’ve took a few days to write my review So here goes First off I’m so glad I stumbles across this new to me author because I’m now obsessed with these books
Bella man I really felt for her from literally hitting rock bottom and not seeing the light at the end of her nightmare I can relate to that. She was absolutely put through it all and I wanted to stand by her fictional side and have her back Sometimes the kindness of a stranger is all you need To see her grow and stand for what she wanted and not take any shite was so good to read and I was rooting for her all the way
Clay facing his own demons of his past Is absolutely a knight on and shining Harley This character is an absolute force to be reckoned with and I love how he puts all he has into making things better for the one who might of just saved him right back. He’s loyal to his brothers the family he has around him they’re not blood but they’re family and like a true biker they do anything for their brothers But love clouds their minds and priorities may shift It was nice to read about the other characters in the story and from rocks book
I’ve never Ever wanted to jump inside a book so much everrr that I did with this book and the absolute rotten scrat of so called human Imogen The way she was beyond evil was a fun gripping read but I wanted to bat her myself lol What a horror she is Don’t even get me started on Liam he should of been swallowed that one It’s fictional it’s fictional haha but man what a bastard he is
This was such a great read and I can’t wait for drifters book
I’ve tried to do this without spoilers but honestly I’ve found it hard to write without giving stuff away My Amazon review will haha to be a micro version of this for it won’t go live haha
Go give these a read I can’t wait for the next
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Clay’s Salvation was an okay, fairly enjoyable read, but it ultimately left me with more questions than answers.
The premise is strong and emotional right from the start, and the story clearly aims for depth, pain, and healing. However, as the book progressed, I kept running into unanswered questions and noticeable plot holes. By the time I reached the end, the main thought stuck in my head was simply: why? Why certain things happened, why some conflicts were introduced but never fully explored, and why certain character decisions were left without real explanation. I really wanted those answers, and unfortunately, they never came.
I also struggled to connect with the FMC. While her situation is undeniably heartbreaking, some of her reactions toward the MMC felt exaggerated or inconsistent, and at times they didn’t fully make sense to me emotionally. That disconnect made it harder to become invested in the relationship and root for them as a couple.
That said, the book isn’t bad. It has emotional moments, MC atmosphere, and a solid foundation, but the execution felt uneven. With more clarity in the plot and deeper character development, this story could have been much stronger.
Overall, Clay’s Salvation was a decent read, just not as impactful or emotionally satisfying as I hoped it would be. This is purely my personal opinion, and I can see how it might work better for other readers.
Oooh this book put me through it! I was honestly gripped from chapter 1. It was powerful and impactful. I have definitely felt some of those feelings as a mother so to see something that is not often spoken about reflected in a book was amazing!
Belle/Bella was a woman on the ledge (literally) when she felt like all hope was lost the perfect person to help guild her and heal old wounds showed up.... hot and hunky with his motorcycle. I loved her character development throughout the book we went from a scared beaten down woman with no options and grew into a strong badass.
Clay swore he would never love again, until he met the beauty to his beast. I loved that he was able to show her his softer side. It was so refreshing to read an MC romance with the MMC having a softer side (don't get me wrong he throws down when he needs too 😜) but I really enjoyed it.
I loved the relationship between the ol ladies too they were so funny and reminded me of me with some of my friends.
I would highly recommend this book its short and packed with lot of drama, spice and a swoony love story.
I really didn’t like Belle. We are supposed to feel sorry for her but she did nothing to help herself. Then when Clay literally saves her life and continues to stand by her, she fights him every step of the way. She came across as a loser yet also quite unpleasant. Not a good combo.
Also, the dynamics of this MC were off. The old ladies were really disrespectful to the brothers and the CW/stripper who ruined the h’s life, was basically given a pass by Drifter (MC prez) because she was the highest earner at the strip club. Really?
Lots of questions left unanswered - like how does a drug dealer with a stripper/whore girlfriend get custody of h’s sons??
Overall, the characters and their actions in this book don’t ring true. It’s hard to connect when their emotions and reactions are all over the place. The brotherhood seems weak as well. Noticing that the next book has Drifter stepping out on Rochelle, confirms this.
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OMG! what a book!! I absolutely loved Rocks Judgment but Clays Salvation? oh my its on another level!!
this book follows Clay & Bella. Bella has an extremely tough time the past 6 months, she hit a really low point and thought she no longer needed to be on this earth. Clay the knight in shining armour of course saves our Bella!
this book is all about healing & learning that you do deserve love! This couple had me absolutely swooning!! Clay is such a sweetheart, the way he cares for Bella as waits for her to be ready is amazing, i can not put this book down!
Bella meets Clay when she is at the lowest point of her life, she is about to jump from the bridge when arms grab her. Clay feels he was supposed to save her and keep her safe. Bella is barely surviving, her ex kicked her out and took her babies away from her. Clay and the club is just what she needs to pull herself up and learn to fight back.
This is an emotional, slow burn story. Clay is all in from the beginning but he waits for her to be in same space. Looking forward to more from the author.
Started good, but then fell flat. It reads like a typical american biker book, but is supposed to be set in the UK. It gives nothing to suggest that. No details on where, just a random reference to Tesco. It's odd. The UK doesn't have that type of biker gang. 2nd the plot holes are everywhere and there's no proper back story. Why was she kicked out, why did the ex hate her, why did the new gf have it in for her, why would a quickie marriage to a biker that runs a strip club help get her kids back. It's all just too over the top
Clay, VP of the Broken Iron Demons MC, is out on a nights ride and comes across ‘someone’ that needs help…….
Bella, goes out to do something that will end her nightmare of a life……..but an encounter with a ‘knight who has a shiny steed’ intervenes…….
This is a pull on her heartstrings read, that will have you routing for this AMAZING couple to find their HEA and to see a ‘certain’ club who#e get her just deserves
Clay's salvation has it all. Heartbreak, humiliation, revenge and everything in between.
I loved Clay's character, and he wasn't your typical biker. Tall, strong, sexy, but with a softer side (except in the bedroom). He was there for Bella when she needed him most and they entered each others lives at the perfect time.
It's a hell of an MC romance with a lot of drama, twists and turns and I loved it.
The MMC saves the FMC from jumping off a bridge… she is desperately in need of help to survive and get her kids back. The OW is a club whore but she can’t be exposed to what she is?! There are a lot of inconsistencies in this story that it made this storyline hard to follow or get into. I’m not sure I like Drifters that much! I want to keep reading about this MC especially about Rochelle and Drifters.
This is the second book in this series. I'm becoming obsessed with this author. Clay and Bella's story broke my heart at the beginning. Bella goes through so much. Clay is in the right place at the right time. Check the triggers because there is a scene which could be traumatic. The OW drama is spot on. As much as I disliked the OW it was a perfect addition of drama for the book. Great book! Now I have to wait for book 3 to be released!
Bella was ready to end it all after her husband cheats and moves his mistress in to play happy family with her 2 sons, shes about to jump when Clay comes across her. As VP the club came first even at the cost of his own brothers life, but in saving Bella will she in turn be the one to save him? Well written the story draws you in with desires, high emotions, trauma twists and more!
Everything was so convenient (Imogen was easy to find and threaten, Bella had barely any issues integrating to an MC, Mason needed a single conversation to realize the situation as a child and come to terms with it). The characters really didn't have to work for anything or struggle for their happy ending the way the first chapter implied.
im shocked by a few of the other reviews. im a huge MC reader and this book was brilliant, similar to bink cummings books think thats why I loved it so much, if you read MC you understand there dark, twisted, morally grey and most always have a dark background, Bella is a very good character as is clay, loved the story can't wait from more with this author.
I loved this story. Clay and Bella make such a good couple. If you love a book where they both save each other in different ways you will love this story. You've got a hot, possessive MMC and a sweet, yet she feels broken MFC, and between both this story is on fire!!
When Bella decides to end it all she never counts on Clay, the VP, to rescue her. Or did they save each other? This is such a heartwarming story that has all the feels with suspense, twist, turns, emotions off the charts..
I think the writer has really grown since her last book. I could feel Bella's heartache on page and I loved Clay. Bella had everything stacked against her but I was so excited when she got her hea. Highly recommend this indie author!
Wow, this story - A few triggers here so be careful make sure to check them out before starting this story. But this is emotional and intense and the way Clay cares for Bella is so beautiful. This was exactly the story I needed right now. Loved it.
Absolutely loved this book!! Clay and bella's story will keep you on the edge of your seats. Bella thinks her life is over until clay finds her on a bridge and then everything changes. Will they both get a happy ending?
2 broken souls finally become whole. This is such a beautiful journey that these two have travelled to become whole. To be so lost and feel like you have nothing left to give, but fate has given you a chance.
I was enjoying this as it’s rife with over-the-top melodramatics. However a colloquial term that’s rooted in colonial oppression. was used right at the end of this story, and it left a rather bitter taste in my mouth.
Absolutely loved this clays salvation sure brings out the excitement of a MC novel and can't wait for more ! The writing style the fact it was UK set how the characters blended and the hatred I as a reader felt !! Loved it 5 stars