Unfortunately, I had to DNF this book officially: January 31st, 2026, 4:48 a.m.
I managed to make it to page 324 out of 648 pages, exactly halfway through and…sigh. I was hooked at the beginning, and the story held so much promise, but it simply didn’t give what it should have gave.
For one, it didn’t take me long to get SICK of Tessa saying “blurring with vampire speed” to describe how Josiah and other vamps moved in the world.
If you read this book, count how many times she uses this phrase. Tessa used it to the point where if I were to take a shot every time I read “blurring with vampire speed” or “blur” or anything referring to “vampire strength,” I would be DEAD from ALCOHOL POISONING! I was so annoyed! Like, she SERIOUSLY couldn’t think of ANY OTHER way to describe these vampire abilities?!
Another thing that bothered me was how much the characters sounded like NARRATORS instead of individual people with their own voices, feelings, textures, and layers. Does that make sense? I feel like she really shouldn’t have written these books from her character’s first-person point of view if she was still going to describe and explain things like a narrator. Limited third-person narrator voice would have been better.
The inconsistencies of the characters felt like they all were simply versions of each other instead being their own person. I think that flat, same narrative voice from the first-person point of view of each character throughout the story is what contributes to the way it reads. Also, even though I haven’t read any of the other books, within this one book, the characters don’t stay true to the traits and personalities that they’re giving readers the impression of having, if that makes sense. I say within this one book because of the fact that I didn’t read any of the other books to see if these characters are really like this by design or inconsistent writing, so I can stand to be corrected, if need be.
SPOILERS AHEAD, with notes from my Reading Journal that I wrote as I read:
Josiah being so freaky and overly sexual towards Layla (who he doesn’t know like that, by the way), rubs me the wrong way for quite a few reasons. It’s only been a few days since she moved to Wintermoon after being identified as his fated mate), then this adds to my discomfort ESPECIALLY since in the very beginning of this book, Josiah is a slave in Louisiana working the fields. The slave master calls Josiah to the house to work because he has to go away for some business or whatever, and so the MISTRESS Vivian (the slave master’s wife) would always sneak and rape Josiah. And then everything that happens with him, the slavemaster, and his newborn baby happened, I just—NO. So, sex has always been weaponized against him. He only knew trauma with sex. He even said so himself. He’s never been with any other woman, he never viewed sex as anything but a tool, so for this “mating bond” to suddenly awaken this insatiable, kinky side to him after all that trauma is crazy to me. A mating bond should NOT override very real traumas like that, in my honest opinion.
We don't really get a chance to get into Josiah's mind and see how he became this way. From Josiah’s chapters, and even the scene where Josiah and Layla are on that “deal dinner date,” things are kind of being explained clinically through Josiah, like a narrator instead of a character. He's explaining how he went mad. From 1823 to modern day now it’s like, what were you doing for 200 years? I, as the reader, don't really get to see that. It's just, all of a sudden, you find your mate, and then you just want to fxxx her, bite her, and keep her. Like, what the helly??
We also don’t get to really see Layla process any of her emotions and traumas either (at least, up to where I read, anyway).
I feel so BAD because I gave this book a good 10 days, even after putting it down, pausing, shaking my head, etc. I tried to get through it, because this is work by a fellow Black woman, a fellow Black author. I found her when an ad for this book on Instagram gathered me ALL THE WAY up because Josiah was fine as fxxx, you hear me?? FINE! Tessa even used AI to animate him and other characters, and I thought that was 🔥🔥🔥, but again, the writing overall just didn't live up to the expectations/online impressions.
See, I have a thing for vampires. I love vampires—BLACK ones specifically— so, this is very disappointing for me. Don’t get it twisted though! I really try to be easy and fair with my critiques because I'm a writer too, and I don't want to drag anybody’s work just because (unless I TRULY have a valid reason to do so), but these are some fair points I'm bringing up, real concerns. I wanted more from this book. I didn't get it.
Another thing that doesn't make sense here is the age difference. So I didn't realize at first that he was, so YOUNG. Sure, he's 200 years old as far as being a vampire, but realistically he's only 18 (I know the book says 19, but if he was born in 1805 and died/got turned in 1823, then that makes him 18). I was like, “You are a CHILD.” As soon as I realized how young he was, it was an INSTANT turn off. So Layla is 28, he's 18—because you know when someone gets bitten by a vampire, they die/stop aging/ they just stay the age that they are. That took me all the waaaaaay out of the story. I need grown folks, and Josiah is a child. Sorry.
I also didn’t like how the author would say the same thing over and over in a bunch of different ways. For example, when Josiah kept emphasizing how seeing King Amir bend to Queen Anora's will awakened envy and admiration in him, and how one day Layla would command him, too. Then he kept noting feelings being stirred up inside of him that he didn’t understand...but he literally had explained what he was feeling a page before that. Not to mention, his explanations about the mating bond throughout. 🤦🏾♀️
Something else that pulled me out of the story a bit was what I call the “pain and power logic.” How can Josiah be this powerful, 200-year-old vampire who basically feels next to NOTHING when mysterious MAGIC bullets coated in some weird blue substance shoot into his axx, but then he manages to fall all down when Layla, a weaker human woman, stabs him with a BUTTER KNIFE and kicks him in the balls?! I would think that it’d be something he’d laugh at unflinchingly and think it was adorable (he thinks this anyway, but the fact that he felt LAYLA’S physical attacks more than a SUPERNATURAL attack is wild to me). This ruined the suspension of disbelief for me in the worst way!
Next, the overall tone of the book was inconsistent/too jarring/doing too much. What do I mean? I read the disclaimers at the beginning of the book and that’s fine, but the way she crams trauma, darkness, eroticism, comedy all into one scene/beat?? It reads as messy and an attempt to jam as many tropes and moods into here as possible. I didn’t like that at all; it gave me repeated emotional whiplash while I was reading.
The truth is, the concept of Wintermoon, the mating bonds, and the storylines are CREATIVE, and that’s why I was willing to hold on and keep reading. I really wanted to read ALL the books in the Wintermoon universe, but I just couldn’t get past too many things that stuck out like sore thumbs.
But you know what? Outside of that, I can tell that this series has some great lore and fascinating layers. I guess it’s just a case of “Everything ain't for everybody…