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768 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 30, 2025
This was a good story, but it is written more as a soap opera and less as a novel, which makes sense since it was originally serialized. That does lead to a few things that dropped it a star: scenes that were unnecessary, etc. The entire book was at least twice as long as needed to be. It took place over 20 years (which is generally considered a no-no for most fiction.)
The characters were well developed, with full backstories (because, yes, the book was way too long...), and the story was good. I liked how strong the FMC was, and that her alpha male had no issues with it.
I'm not sure if it's a language barrier, or just bad editing, but words were often mixed up. For example, the author used "weary" instead of "wary", and "palatable" instead of "palpable."
Overall, it was a solid, decent read, but I believe the author has more talent than this book shows. With revisions, it could be an excellent book, not just a good one.
Would I read another from the author? Maybe, if I know it's not just a serialized web story put into book format. I did get this through KU, which I found interesting, since it is available online elsewhere in ebook format, which is against all KU policies.