4.5 Surprised Stars
Does this need edited? Yes
Does it need to be around 100 chapters? No
But it is exactly what I was in the mood for and made me feel. Despite all it's flaws, it's getting a rare 5 stars.
My biggest complaint is for such a long book we only got descriptions for a few characters, and it wasn't diverse at all. Especially when the games and Alpha meetings are supposed to be held for packs around the entire world.
Also, the timeline was sad. I wish it would have been a few years max for the couple.
SPOILERS:
virgin h
h ends up with a different H/mate than the one who rejected her
H had some fun as a teen but not for a long time/no ow drama with him
First fated mate was such a disappointment, but he suffered then got his own HEA
h turns 18 but still doesn't have a wolf. Her pack assumes to mean she will be weak.
Her mate ends up her childhood friend and the Alpha's son.
He freaks and immediately rejects her in front of the entire pack. The alpha is upset but agrees with his son on h being weak.
Her dad and mom are the Beta family. h grew up calling the Alpha and Gamma her uncles. This was destroying relationships in the pack, so h ran away.
She lives in the human world for 4 years.
When she meets Finn, he takes her to meet his new pack. There she gets her wolf, and she is not weak! She is a rare and big red wolf. She joins the pack. I loved the friendships she made. When the beta died during the attack I sobbed.
Best part of this story is that she doesn't end up with her original mate who rejected her. Finn and her love each other for SIX years without talking about it or making a move. h is scared he will meet his true mate and she would lose him.
h becomes H's beta and they go to the games with a great team. First day she meets her brother again, and her mate. It seems that for a rejection to break a bond, the rejected party has to accept the rejection. No one knew this, so she is still technically mated to James. Accepting the rejection would disqualify them both from the games so she has to wait a month.
Finn kissed h before games but she stopped it, since he could meet his mate there. Turns out he did, at the end of the games she accepts James rejection and instantly mates to Finn, they're second chance mates.
Their bond is recognized by the counsel and they're told they have both a chosen and true mate bond, because SIX freaking years of friendship and love beforehand.
The games were fun and intense. I loved how Jake grew in this and proved his worth, becoming Beta when h becomes Luna. James was such a bad mate. He told h she betrayed him because of the H, she yelled I'm a virgin are you. Of course he had been sleeping around the whole time. He told her he was scared, he was young and she was so beautiful. The Pack and his family loved her, he knew they'd want her to be treated right. And of course, now that he knows he was wrong and has seen her beautiful strong wolf he wants to right his wrongs. When she says no he tries to make her jealous by making out with one of his old hookups, ICK!
She gets along with her brother and his mate. Meets Finn's mother and brother.
Finn was the second son, not raised to be an alpha. His aunt pretty much raised him, his parents focusing on older son. When their dad dies his brother became alpha, but he had a violent mean streak. Finn saw the destruction of the pack coming, his mom begged not to challenge his brother, so he went to counsel and formed his own pack, allowing anyone from the original pack to follow him. His pack is strong, but his brothers was focused on strength and warriors getting everything. When all the others left it didn't leave many people to do the actual daily work. The H's Blue Mountain pack ranks number 3 in the world and his brothers pack falls to 31.
They go home, celebrate their mating. Make new alliances with other packs. Find out horrid things H's brother is doing.
h gets pregnant but forces H to take her to annual Alpha meeting. They use their allies to get his brother's pack dismantled, brother no longer an alpha. h is of course kidnapped and H kills brother.
His mother needed slapped. She doesn't see how only choosing the brother because of her own parenting mistakes made H feel like crap. h encouraged H to tell her the truth but in the end they have a civil acquaintance relationship.
Luckily h's family is amazing and treats H like family.
James meets a wolf from H's old pack, chooses her, and they're kids are all friends.
Couple have a son then daughter and of course ends with the H getting her pregnant a third time, hopefully meaning she won't participate in the games, since it freaked him out the last time to have her in danger. Beautiful love story!