Sometimes the most important lessons are learnt at lunchtime
Parks State High is a melting pot of misfits. There is Oliver Fish, the teen philosopher hiding a secret relationship; Dev Desai, hopelessly in love with the brilliant Maryam Fadel; and a staffroom thick with gossip, camaraderie and burnt-out teachers. At the centre of it all is well-loved teacher Paul Bush. But when a disgruntled student makes a devastating move – one lunchtime is all it takes for Bushie’s life to change forever.
With a cast of unforgettable characters, In a Common Hour is a smart, funny and wise novel that shows us all the ways we are connected.
PRAISE FOR IN A COMMON HOUR‘In a Common Hour is a hope-filled masterpiece about contemporary high school classrooms and the people that inhabit them.’ – Gabbie Stroud, author of Teacher and The Things that Matter Most‘I read this in a gulp. In a Common Hour marks the arrival of a major new talent. Sita Walker makes me fall in love with reading all over again.’ – Nikki Gemmell, author of Wing‘Walker’s novel is unputdownable. I was charmed, moved, and so sorry to close the covers.’ – Sharlene Allsopp, author of The Great Undoing‘The full emotional force of Walker’s well-plotted tale arrives in the final chapter, offering an ending that is empathetic to both students and teachers, and ultimately optimistic.’ – Books+Publishing
This short novel is easily one of the best books I've read this year. It takes place over one hour, during lunchtime, at a large fictional high school in Queensland. There is a broad cast of characters whose stories all intersect, but it mostly revolves around 55yo English teacher Paul Bush. Paul lives with his very controlling wife, Ramona, but is in love with Parks' principal, Freedom Cook.
In his year 12 class are friends Oliver, Dev, Santo and Turtleneck, as well as Oliver's bogan neighbour Zoe. Dev is in love with Maryam, daughter of Afghan refugees. Also in their class is entitled shithead Cameron Ashby, whose only 'friend' is the huge, slow and very sweet bird-loving Solomon.
Over the course of an hour, these characters will converge in new and drastic ways as Cameron unleashes a secret about his teacher onto the school-wide chat, and delusions come crashing down.
First off, this is excellent writing. It flows so well, constructs a setting that you can see, smell, and hear, and sweeps you along to an impressive ending. Sita Walker uses birds to ehance the sense of place, and I'm sure there's deeper meaning there but my head is still in the plot and the characters - I need to discuss tgus with my colleagues! (Yes I did totally take this photo in my classroom; like Sita I'm an English teacher and I'm in awe of her skill.)
The characters all ring true, their dialogue feels natural, and these glimpses provide ample information that works to create solid people. Several flashbacks throughout the story fill in the gaps, and made me care deeply for these people. Ugh, even Cameron, I actually felt sorry for.
I can't praise this enough, and my words are certainly not doing it justice. Read it!
Its construction (centred on a single lunch hour in a high school) is inventive and perfectly executed. The story grips you from the very beginning and carries its momentum right through to the end.
The writing is vivid and assured, bringing the Brisbane landscape to life while quietly weaving together nature, place, and human connection.
Like a Mondrian painting, each chapter offers a different shape and colour (warm or cold, bright or dark) yet the steady line of the plot connects them all with ease and balance.
There is so much to admire beyond the novel’s structure! The voice is intimate and generous, and the humanity in the writing comes through with clarity and depth.
This is a deeply lived-in, caring book that will stay with me long after the final page.
3 and a half. I really wanted to like this book. Was it too ambitious? So many characters, so many flashbacks, so many side stories yet so many connections. I actually had to go back and scan the beginning after I finished to put it together. A clever idea, so much potential but maybe not executed so well?? Feeling conflicted with this one.
In a Common Hour isn’t the kind of book I would usually pick up, but I’m glad I stepped into it.
The writing style is distinctive, layered. What stood out most to me was the vivid imagery of the forest and its surrounding landscape. I tend to sink into descriptive writing, building the world carefully in my mind and walking through it alongside the characters, and Sita makes that an easy accomplishment. The natural setting isn’t just background; it feels woven into the emotional architecture of the story.
The narrative itself is complex and, at times, confounding. While I was generally able to follow the progression, particularly the quiet emergence of mental health themes before they were openly named, there were moments where I struggled with what the author was ultimately trying to say. The way Sita demonstrated the maturation of the student characters was compelling. I appreciated how the story traced the subtle cause and effect of lived experience, how one moment can ripple outward, shaping identity, behaviour, and consequence. Those “sliding doors” instances, decisions or events that alter the course of a life.
Near the end, however, I found myself losing clarity. Solomon’s experiences with the black kite, for example, left me questioning their symbolism and purpose. Were they metaphorical? Psychological? Spiritual? I suspect there’s depth there that I haven’t fully unpacked, and this may well be a book that rewards a second reading.
Ultimately, I enjoyed the journey more than I felt I mastered it. It’s a reflective, atmospheric novel that asks the reader to sit with ambiguity and implication rather than offering neat resolution. And it’s a quiet reminder that an extraordinary amount can unfold in a single hour, enough to alter the trajectory of life.
Rate: 3.75
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Sita Walker has done it again. I couldn’t put this one down. She has captured the voice of more than one generation with characters that will stay with you long after you finish the last page.
A recommendation for anyone, but especially Mums of teenage boys and State High School teachers. We’ve all been in that staffroom!
Reviewing In a Common Hour by Sita Walker feels a bit like marking a student’s essay where you’ve written, “Excellent concept- thoughtful and original!” at the top… and then, a few paragraphs later, gently added, “Execution needs development.”
I liked this book in almost equal measure to how much I didn’t, which, honestly, is an impressive balancing act. So instead of pretending I’ve landed neatly on one side of the fence, I’m going to lay out the highs and lows and let you decide whether you want to read the book.
Things I liked:
The concept. Genuinely original and ambitious. The the kind that makes you think, ooh, this could be something special.
The school setting. As someone who works in education, I could tell immediately the author had lived it. The atmosphere of an Australian school felt authentic; the staffroom politics, the subtle hierarchies, the speed at which whispers become full-blown narratives.
The Australian-isms. The eucalyptus trees. The birds. The tone. The roll-ups and Iced VoVos. It felt unapologetically, quintessentially Aussie in a way I really appreciated.
The symbolism. At times, the writing felt cleverly worded.
The blurring of professional and personal life and how quickly that can unravel in a school setting. That part? Very well observed.
Things I didn’t like:
The execution didn’t quite match the ambition of the concept. The narrative jumped around so much that I struggled to connect deeply with any one character.
The pacing felt off. Yes, a lot can happen in an hour at school (believe me, I know), but some of those ten-minute blocks stretched believability.
There were too many side characters. Everyone got a moment, but no one got enough depth to fully anchor the story. The ending, and particularly the storyline between Paul and Freedom — tipped into territory that felt unrealistic and slightly inaccessible for me as a reader.
I closed the book and felt… oddly neutral. No emotional hangover. No lingering ache. Just a quiet “okay then.”
So ultimately?
Three mediocre stars ⭐⭐⭐ Strong concept. Solid effort. Execution could use refinement.
I respect the intention (although the dedication does spoil the tone) to write something about teachers, by a teacher; we don’t have many serious examples of this. It’s just a little too close for me to be objective, and I think that rings true for Walker as well. Initially, the premise and plot and characters were so precise that I thought there was no way an actual teacher wrote this. But then little details emerge and in-jokes (deleting a glib email about breathing techniques from the head of wellbeing is too accurate) that no one else would understand appear, and I realised that this couldn’t have been written by anyone else other than someone who had lived it. It’s all too curated and pinpoint in its accuracy, and that ends up being its shortcoming.
Everyone needs a poignant backstory, every voice needs to be misunderstood; even childhoods rife with poverty and abuse end up being ornate character-building experiences – tragedy with a capital T. Walker cares too much for each of these perfectly imperfect characters. She wraps everything in this flowery, carefully constructed prose that is reminiscent of all the creative writing tricks that she and I teach the teenagers of our classes: parallel syntax, anaphora, thematic paradox, a nature motif of some sort, sentences saturated with metaphors (they may have missed the lesson on ‘show, don’t tell’). Freedom and Paul’s first fateful meeting alone functions as a cosmic meet cute, already described as “Fellow travellers in a numberless, formless eternity.”
Paul is the ostensible heart of the novel. His English literature classes begin by unpacking each of his students’ fears, and he twists these into mini life lessons: on the importance of creating art, of learning from the past’s mistakes. Fair enough, until he has his Robin Williams, Hollywood turn and transforms a disgruntled student not doing their work into a rhapsody about T. S. Eliot’s ‘The Hollow Men’, or a fear of heights into a cautionary tale akin to Icarus. The latter is especially egregious because it reflects how Walker sees him (and therefore how she sees herself), ennobling the humble teacher and Period 1, Monday into something deeper. The moment is more about the figure standing by the blackboard than the student himself.
That Paul is clearly struggling with something darker himself doesn’t justify any of this, because Walker doesn’t have the nuance to dig that deep. Her framing of his mental health never rises above the same clumsy, metaphorical level that the rest of the writing is pitched at. Just consider how Ramona is described and embodied as some mythological creature who “spits venom” and lashes out like a “water demon”, constantly taunting him over the years. His final encounter with her in the forest plays out like a video game cutscene, emphasising, above all, the sheer physicality of escaping the siren’s call. Ramona is finally vanquished, and they stand hand in hand, the sun smiling overhead. But that’s just not how healing from trauma works. If only mental illness were so easy to overcome, something to be conquered in one triumphant hour.
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Racing to read this book before the author event I’d booked a ticket for, I was mildly annoyed I’d picked the twist and ending.
After hearing the author speak of being raised Baháʼí and the story of ‘The seven valleys’, I realised what I had misjudged (riffing off Shakespeare’s A Midsummer Night's Dream).
This Easter break I’ve finally made the time to sit down and read the book carefully. It’s a beautiful book. From the short, multi-character, non-linear segments, the elegance of the descriptions of the nature and the tenderly crafted characters.
The dialogue about 1990s music made me laugh aloud also.
A modern school yard story that would make an excellent stage 5 text in any Australian high school English program.
Authentic in that I experienced the same anxiety reading this book as I do on a full moon Friday at school.
Impressive efforts to develop a winding and interconnected plot, attentive to the ubiquity of tragedy, trauma, poverty and welfare concerns you see in public schools, but the breadth of scope somehow made it feel trite?
So much in this book I really could have loved, the Australian bush imagery, cheeky adolescents and sensitivity to personal histories but the performance of prose stumbled in its pace.
Spoiler ahead: 🐌 🐌 🐌 I really hope everyone experiencing psychosis can go off their meds, look in a pond and be healed <3 /s
In a Common Hour by Sita Walker is a must-read that had me hooked from the very first-page. As a reader, it was so refreshing to see such an original concept - having the events of the novel play out across a single lunch hour. It’s hard not to fall in love with a novel written as beautifully as this one. In a Common Hour is everything you want from a book and more - from the relatability of a high school environment to truly immersive imagery that transports you to the lives of each character. I absolutely loved this book and would recommend it to all.
I highly recommend this book. Be sure to set aside some quiet time to let Sita Walker guide you through the lunch 'hour' at an Australian high school. The inciting incident draws in the reader into a web of characters' inner lives, cleverly weaving in their back stories. Pay attention to the interplay of students with students and teachers with teachers. Very relatable. And look out for a couple of twists.
The setting cleverly reflects the story mood, adding atmosphere that supports the plot.
I’m not sure that any review I write will do justice to this book. It’s not often that a book comes along that’s particularly outstanding but this is one of them. It’s a book based on an inspired idea and something definitely outside the square. The characters are interesting, the story is great but the writing is exceptional.
3.5⭐️ Set in a fictitious Qld high school, this is a relatively short story, only 6.5hrs audio which explores the teachers and students, the over achievers, the misfits, relationships, heartache etc. There are some great themes. You are definitely cheering for the underdog in some storylines, and some lovely examples of helping out your fellow human! As others have said in their reviews, I wanted these storylines to be more explored and the book could easily have been a few hours/200 pages longer. I felt some characters we’d only scratched the surface learning about them. It was generally a good story though.
The author is a teacher and it shows (in a good way!). The Australian high school setting was authentic, with recognisable depictions of staff, students and behaviour. The main plot takes place during a school lunch break, with the narrative expanded to look back on characters' lives to help explain their motivations.
4.5-4.75 ⭐️ This is a book that I let sit for a few days before I finished the last 50 pages or so. I liked that I had no idea where this was going and wanted to read it but didn’t want to finish it. My friend Samantha tells me it’ has A Midsummer nights dream vibes, which I cannot attest to as I have not read any Shakespeare other than the 2 I was made to read in school. Despite her insistence that I must have read AMND, I am quite sure the only Midsomer I have any clue about is the one where murders happen in a small English village every other day… absolutely no similarity to this book. I would actually have enjoyed it with another 50 pages to give us a little more, but then I also liked that parts of their story were indicated rather than explicit.
Set over one hour (with flashbacks) in a school's lunchtime, this deals with a student prank and how it affects a group of students whose lives intertwine, and a few teachers, one in particular, Paul Bush. The central premise - that the most important things that happen to students at school, happen at break times, rings true in this case. There is humour, there is sadness, but throughout, I got the impression that the author has as much liking and sympathy for teachers as for students. Fabulous read, if a bit on the scary side for this ex-teacher!
I absolutely loved this book. Such a beautiful story with so many intertwined characters. Deep insights to high school playgrounds and teenagers. I'd love to see this adapted to a movie. The narrative is meticulously crafted. I think I could easily reread this book.
The most puke-in-your-mouth sappy ending ever. Had me for 3/4 hooked and keen to see how like 7 character’s stories could be tied up in that time. Spoiler!!! They’re tied up in the most uncreative and unsatisfying way ever…everyone gets what they want ❤️❤️❤️ fml !!!! Genuine waste of time reading this
Sometimes the most important lessons are learned at lunchtime.
Set within the familiar chaos of a school, In a Common Hour introduces a cast of students, teachers, and families whose lives intersect in unexpected ways. At its heart is Paul Bush, a much-loved teacher carrying a painful past. When a disgruntled teenager sets out to tear down his reputation, the community around him is forced to confront questions of truth, loyalty, and forgiveness.
This was an incredibly emotional read - at times heartbreaking, yet ultimately hopeful. Told through multiple perspectives and timelines, the story could have felt overwhelming, but Walker handles it beautifully, making each voice distinct and easy to follow.
What stayed with me most were the students. As a teacher, I loved seeing young people portrayed with all their complexity: capable of making mistakes, but also capable of immense kindness, courage, and doing the right thing when it matters most.
A moving reminder that schools are so much more than places of learning - they're communities, and sometimes they're exactly where healing begins.
3.5 rounded up There is a lot of interest in this novel, which boasts the fact that it is set over one lunch hour in a high school in Australia. A clever structure. In fact the book has a number of flashbacks to earlier and more recent events which have had significant impact on the key characters and their relationships. These add to and help to explain the events and the resolution. There is a lot to like here and if you are a teacher, know any teachers, there is a lot to relate to. It was an easy and enjoyable read but I wonder if there was too much going on, meaning there was perhaps a superficiality to the discussion of very significant social issues. Well worth a read.
4.5. Really enjoyed this. The whole book takes place over one hour, one lunch hour at an Aussie high school. You get points of view from both students and teachers, and how they all connect. It was insightful and real and interesting. Bravo
It was beautiful and written so well, but in the end he need actual psychological help and I feel like while everyone was there for him, no one really helped him.