Thank you to the author, Evelyn Flood, for adding me to their ARC team in exchange for honest reviews of their releases!📚
Genre/Themes: ☀️🌑⚔️🏰👨🏻❤️👨🏻👩🏼❤️👨🏻💭🏞️
Tropes: Light and Dark, War Between Kingdoms, Reverse Harem, Tortured Hero, Polyamory, Dark Romance, Enemies to Lovers, Bisexual, Grumpy, Insta Love, Nursed Back to Health, Jilted Lover, Corrupt Officials, Hired Assassin, Female Warriors, Grand Battles and Sieges, Rescue Mission, Home Invasion, Domestic Abuse, Stabbing, Murder, All Hope Lost, Supernatural Abilities, Betrayal
Positives: engaging writing style, strong fighting/battle scenes, fun use of multi-POV
Room for Improvement: weaker plot and pacing, world-building and characterisation including romance development
Rating: 🌕🌕🌗
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Full Review - RISK OF SPOILERS 🛑
Evelyn moved into serious romantasy last year with one of my all-time favourite novels in the genre - Stars Above the Never Sea, so I was super excited to read another world of hers. Unfortunately, this one didn’t work for me. Admittedly, I’ve never really read polyamory/reverse harem stories, but I was open to it, and just didn’t feel it was executed as well as it could have been. But Ms. Flood is still that girl, and I read this novel in a single day.
🧍♂️🧍♀️Characterisation:🧍♀️🧍♂️
Lyra Vaelion was the main character, and I’m not really sure how I felt about her. She was brave with a strong sense of vigilante justice, shown when her father’s soldiers slaughtered innocent people in Veilspire, and when his army tried to wipe out Umbraxis in the final battle. She could be quick witted and sarcastic, mostly when talking to Kaelan. She was compassionate and determined, such as when she tried to heal Sera. She was hardened and desensitised to pain and torture, from the years of abuse she endured, and Darian was right in that she seemed to think she only deserved happiness in exchange for her own suffering. Initially, this was to protect her sister, Reena. I think I struggled to connect with her because she didn’t feel very realistic. She had been indoctrinated for years to kill Kaelan and then take her own life, and said she had training and schemes on how to do so, yet she never once actually planned or tried to kill him. The poison was taken from her, ruining the end of the plan too, but she never tried to get it back. I think I’d have preferred to see her at least try to assassinate him, and then struggle with that internal battle, as opposed to her seemingly just deciding straight away she wasn’t going to bother. Things like her managing to adjust her memories, that Darian then read, to hide her truth were cool and I wish we’d had more of that kind of skill and plotting. Despite her trauma with men, including sexual, she seemed to fall in love with Eres and Darian almost instantly. I liked some of the subtle behaviours, like flinching at certain movements that the men made or her nightmares, but I wish there had been more emotional struggle. She just seemed to trust them straight away? Felt a ‘pull’ towards Eres even before the bond? I just found myself craving more nuance, more flaws. Her ‘running off to save the day without considering Eres and Kaelan’s fear for her’ wasn’t really a flaw.
Kaelan Duskbane was marketed as the main MMC, but ironically wasn’t the one Lyra fell for first. He was grumpy, swore a lot, and had a jealous streak. He could also be hurtful, especially when he felt betrayed or feared betrayal, after the actions of Darian’s father. He didn’t act like your typical prince, not afraid to get his hands dirty to help his people including washing dishes or cooking feasts. I liked that this was his response to his mother’s withdrawal following his father’s death. He was also very dominant in bed, so if you like that sort of thing, he’d be for you. My only gripe with him is that his personality sort of… switched very quickly as soon as he started to like Lyra. Too quickly, I felt. I was enjoying their jabs at each other, their spats. How they challenged each other. But that all suddenly stopped and he became soft spoken and romantic with her (outside of the bedroom, of course). His White Knighting also got a bit tiring, getting so angry and stubborn any time any of his lovers wanted to help the cause, if it would cause risk to them. Sometimes it was just illogical and felt more like a lack of trust than a protectiveness. Maybe some more context about his father and his life when he was alive would have explained this a bit more.
Eres was fine. He was warm and gentle and cared about others, and submissive to Kaelan which summed up their dynamic. That’s all I could really tell you. There was no real background to his life, his family, or how his relationship with Kaelan developed. His insta love for Lyra was confusing and really could have done with some development or some context as to what drew him to her. I didn’t understand his powers outside of healing, either, so when he was suddenly wielding a spear in the final battle - whether a ‘mortal’ weapon or a shadow one, I wasn’t sure - I was surprised. I didn’t even know he could fight.
Darian was the least developed character, and didn’t work for me at all as a love interest for Lyra. He only seemed to start to love her after accessing her nightmares and seeing her being tortured. Up to that point they’d barely had a conversation. By the time they did have one, with Darian showing Lyra the Kingdom’s children hidden below ground, Lyra already loved him. When did this happen? What else, other than seeing her trauma, caused him to fall for her? What was Darian’s personality other than his Bond with Kaelan straining against their distance? The issues between him and Kaelan were well done, and palpable, but same as Eres I had no real context to his life or his childhood with Kaelan. It was just thrown in towards the end that Kaelan had been in love with him ‘since they were 15 years old’, but I hadn’t even realised they’d grown up together. Kaelan also referred to him as his best friend, but throughout it seemed like they’d been lovers and broken up. Yes, you can be lovers and best friends, but when they made up Darian kept saying he ‘wished Kaelan had told him / shown him sooner’, so it seemed like they hadn’t been lovers before, but had Bonded as Eres and Lyra had? Several of the groups’ dynamics were unclear, to be honest. In the one year time jump, during sex, everybody seemed shocked that Eres and Darian kissed and dry humped, but I’d just assumed they were all mutually dating? Especially considering Eres had been so sympathetic to Darian, and protective of him, encouraging Kaelan to make up with him. Then at one point Lyra was in Kaelan’s bed, and Kaelan hid her from Darian at the door as if protecting her from him. Darian got upset that he might ‘keep her from him’, and that Kaelan had ‘skipped him’ to be with Lyra. Again, it wasn’t clear whether they’d ever been together that way. The whole love square felt like a bit of a hot mess.
Antagonists were Lyra’s father Commander Vaelion, his general Cindral and a Lightbringer soldier Iliria. Vaelion was only present briefly at the beginning of the novel, then appearing again in the final battle. Their final confrontation was very good, especially with Lyra using his own training against him and his realisation that he had written his own demise. I do wish he had been a bit more present as a villain, though. It made sense to a point, because Lyra had grown up essentially hidden from everybody, so wasn’t privy to his life in the Kingdom. But his only motive seemed to be endless power and hubris. It would have been more satisfying to know how he got to such a point. Cindral was a much more convincing villain. Using charisma to manipulate Lyra, making her believe that his version of love was the only one. He wanted her as a possession, not a partner, and Lyra briefly touched on his obsession with trying to please or match her father. I’d have liked this to have been explored further. I got the impression that Iliria was jealous of his fascination with Lyra, which made her hatred of her stronger. But the woman was addicted to the idea of hurting her, and I didn’t really know why.
Supporting characters included trainer Eldritch, soldiers Elspeth and Sera, other council members Valcor, Nythen and Neena, Queen Maelira and Lyra’s sister Reena. Eldritch was so underutilised. He seemed to be something of a mentor for Kaelan, and trained their young soldiers with his wisdom and patience. But he only appeared a couple of times, so I didn’t feel as much about his fate as I wanted. He was funny, too, being so blasé and resigned to everyone’s terrible decisions. Justice for Eldritch. Elspeth and Sera only really appeared for the healing storyline, but it would have been nice for Lyra to have more of a sense of sisterhood from them. Sera’s relationship with her father, Valcor, was briefly shown too. But I didn’t know enough about either character for that relationship to have context or development. Valcor was something of a non-committal council member, seemingly not truly siding with anybody. While he joined Nythen in sneaking to Lyra’s cell and torturing her, he found his methods too much. Whether it’s because he disagreed with the pain he was causing, or if it was out of fear of consequences from Kaelen, was difficult to gauge. Nythen was far more blatant with his xenophobia against Lightbringers, and showed a strange joy in painful torturing methods even though the rest of the council did not agree with them. It was unclear whether he tortured Lyra because he hated Lightbringers, because he hated Kaelen’s rule, because he was desperate to save Umbraxia, or that he just enjoyed inflicting pain. A history of the pair’s time in the council, especially when Kaelen’s parents were rulers, would have been useful. The same could be said for Neena, who only appeared briefly and predominantly when caring for the children, and Queen Maelira. Her depiction of grief could have been good, but as has been the trend for this novel, more background would have been useful. Memories, flashbacks, anything to flesh out the history of these characters and their Kingdom. Reena, Lyra’s sister, would have benefitted from more flashbacks of the times she snuck down to see her or tried to protect her. Or her own flashbacks of life with her father, as we knew very little about that due to the narrative being from Lyra’s perspective. She showed a similar level of stubbornness as Kaelen, but her more distant form of affection was reflective of how she was raised.
🗺️World-Building:🗺️
The world was set in the warring Kingdoms of Solvandyr - home of Lightbringers - and Umbraxis - home of Shadow Wielders. They had been at war for hundreds of years, separated only by the neutral mountainous region of Veilspire. Of the brief lore surrounding these magics, Lightbringers were said to be the product of the God Aedryn, while the Wielders were borne of Erevan. Aedryn had become obsessed with power, trying to eradicate the Wielders, before realising balance was necessary and surrendering, leaving the mortal plane. His children, though, had different ideas, and continued with their genocide. Some history as to why this happened, after the withdrawal of their God, would have been helpful. Or whether there were more Gods, how they were worshipped. The Lightbringers power, Luminth, and the Wielders power, Erevas, was somewhat unclear. The Wielders seemed to have slightly different variations of their power. Kaelen was able to wield the shadows like appendages, and summon silhouettes called Voids who could do his bidding. Eres could use his to heal, while Darian was able to Mindwalk. However, it was unclear what gave the Wielders their powers. For the Lightbringers, it was ‘royal blood’, dependant on lineage, but it was unclear if this applied to the Wielders - whether Eres and Darian were also royal. During the battle between the Lightbringers and the Wielders, soldiers appeared to have powers as well. Lyra was near-killed by a Luminth spear, but it was never confirmed who threw it. There was mention of ‘mortals’, but how many were there in comparison to Bringers or Wielders? Was the Bringer army full of those with access to Luminth? I also wasn’t sure if the Bringers had any power variation either, or if they just formed weapons out of it. If there wasn’t variation, was that why the Bringers felt so threatened by the Wielders? If the Wielders were technically more powerful, why were they the ones to develop the Dimmer quills? There was a lot of mention of glass in Solvandyr, which was seemingly used alongside their magic, but I didn’t really know why. To reflect it, exacerbate it, maybe? Generally, I found the Kingdoms to be lacking in development, too. While it was somewhat understandable in Solvandyr, what with Lyra being hidden away for most of her life, I felt it was missed in Umbraxis. What was life outside of the Royal dwellings like in either of these Kingdoms? What was life for ‘mortals’ like. How did the magic Wielders benefit the lives of their subjects outside of defence? Did their subjects like the Wielders, like being under their rule? What trade did they have, or culture? There were flashes of this, mainly in Umbraxis, with the Binding ceremonies and The Passing ceremonies. I actually loved those. There was mention of certain fantasy creatures, I think, The Gloam river and plant life like Iskrar leaves that could poison. I would have loved more of an idea of the nature and setting of the Kingdoms, especially since the surroundings were incapable of holding life. The cold versus warm climate was a good example, as was the harsh climate of Veilspire and the almost nomadic way of living there. There must have been an abundance of resources in the Kingdoms themselves for the people to survive. Generally, I felt the world-building took a back seat in this novel much more than Stars Above the Never Sea, with more heavy focus on the polyamorous romances.
📝Prose/Plot:📝
I generally love Evelyn’s prose, which is why I’m such a fan of her writing. The only issues I had in this one were ones that had appeared in her other romantasy. The use of the words ‘male’ or ‘female’ as opposed to ‘man’ and ‘woman’ - it’s really clunky and sometimes sounds incorrect, even if it isn’t - and certain smut sins such as the word ‘nub’ or confusing character placement/positioning. I would also say the dialogue was a little on the over-dramatic side in this one, often feeling like the characters were constantly giving dramatic speeches or arguments. What was written especially well were the battle or fight scenes, I only wish we’d seen more of them, even if just Lyra proving her skills as an assassin. The plot felt weaker in this novel, too, meaning a good chunk of the middle of the story felt like it wasn’t really going anywhere. Umbraxis had accepted the inevitable and were waiting for defeat, so it felt like a lot of waiting around and petty arguments as filler. Some of the approaches to sensitive topics, such as Lyra’s sexual abuse, were a little borderline. This poor girl, who had never had comfortable penetrative sex, felt totally up for double penetration in her first consensual sexual encounter. Now everybody is different, but this felt very unrealistic for me. I won’t lie though, certain aspects of the spice were hot as all hell, and as always Ms. Flood is out here representing the variety of real adult female bodies with pubic hair and brown areolas. However, after all the torture she had gone through, Kaelen also felt it appropriate to joke ‘I am this close to putting you over my knee’ when he was upset with her. A little tone-deaf, no? I really felt this slower portion of the novel could have been utilised better to develop her relationships with the three men, develop them as individuals, and immerse us better in the world.
Overall, this novel didn’t hit enough of the fantasy elements for me, feeling a little more porn-with-plot than her other novel did. But, I will still chomp at the bit for any of her future Romantasy releases because I know she’s capable, this one just wasn’t for me.
If you like dark romance with reverse harem, with Shadow and Bone-esque magic systems and magical bonds, then this could be for you.