Format Read: Kindle eBook
Spice Level: 🌶️
Lucien Burr is onto something with this one - but it's far from polished.
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Alaric is a wholly unlikable character who arrives just in time to ruin the dreams of Hal who had worked himself to the bone for years to achieve. I'm not a huge fan of Alaric, personally-- though his motivations are spelled out in the book for the reader, there is very little to him aside from "being the best without his name".
Hal, on the other hand, is my favorite genre of man - which is why I have such a hard time being negative about this book.
Hal is written so well! He's the type of character that's "lived in", his motivations are clear, he's worked incredibly hard to get where he is-- the common man sees him as a symbol that they don't have to settle on being oppressed by the ruling class. He's a big man, broad, body showing clear evidence of the battles he'd both won and lost. Then you see him with Perrin-- and while the feelings are unspoken, you get the feeling there is something *there* between them and it had the potential to be something very special.
Then Alaric, "I gotta prove myself", ruins everything.
One final complaint is the accuracy of the cover art. I know it's art, and that perhaps it speaks to things coming in later books in this series-- but as a whole it is misleading. The three protagonists are never in a situation that would prompt this cover art.
Over-all, in spite of my many complaints, I did enjoy this book! I enjoyed the author's writing style, their ability to describe a scene made it very easy to picture what they were envisioning, and the story was fairly enjoyable!
I do think that it could have used some polishing (perhaps a dozen more chapters), but at the end of the day it's still one more published book than I've written myself. Kudos to Lucien!