Wanted to like it, but wow! Such a hot mess!
To begin with, there is no way this was edited. Incorrect words, spelling, punctuation, etc. It was very difficult to read. I thought perhaps it was translated from a different language, but nope. The story was also plagued with so many plot holes, inconsistent character descriptions, and timing that did NOT make sense.
The worst part though, was when the scenes were meant to be spicy / domineering, but were written so poorly that the scenes were just blatant SA. Not much gets to me, but some of the scenes were infuriating.
I didn’t select this story looking for high literature, but this was just insulting.