The story had potential, but the way it was written was disappointing. Short sentences, no depth, and important moments are glossed over as if they were uninteresting, when she could have explored them in depth.
At the beginning of the story, there are a few references to the reason why they hate each other, but as the story progresses, this is forgotten, making you think that it is no longer important or will not be explained further. And then suddenly, at the end, the whole story is explained, but again in a way that lacks depth.
They go from hating each other to being completely in love so suddenly that you wonder if you've missed some chapters. I found the writing style difficult to read; the short sentences sometimes make you wonder if you're inside the head of a Neanderthal.