If you have any fond memories of the Promise Falls trilogy then be prepared to leave them firmly at the door before turning the first page of Parting Shot, which is a woefully poor effort for an author of Barclay's calibre. Easily the weakest novel to capture life in the unfortunate conurbation in upstate New York, it might have been better for Barclay to move to pastures new, because this town is well and truly dead in the water and it pains me to say so.. As an admirer of this trilogy with a soap-opera cast of characters who left a distinctive impression over the course of three previous instalments, the lacklustre opening did not bode well and sadly Parting Shot never really captured the pizazz of a firecracker thriller. There is no role for David Harwood nor many of the much depleted cast that made it through to the end of The Twenty-Three, leaving Detective Barry Duckworth and private investigator, Cal Weaver, to run the show.
The two interlinking plots featuring Detective Duckworth of the Promise Falls Police and Cal Weaver, a private investigator, are both prosaic affairs which failed to capture my imagination in what is essentially a run of the mill vigilante crusade. It certainly didn't prove too taxing to latch onto the story Barclay was running with, and I felt one step ahead of a plot which limped along at a snail's pace. Nearly a year on from the dark days when the Promise Falls water supply was contaminated, the town still bears the scars. Locals might manage a day or two of going without mentioning the events, but the out-of-towners who flock to the 'retribution capital' for a photo opportunity beside the "Welcome to Promise Falls" sign won't go away. Career cop Barry Duckworth nearly lost his life in that debacle and his perspective has shifted along with some forty-pounds of excess weight but he now has a new label as the hero cop who saved the day. Ever approachable and sincere Duckworth is plagued by paperwork when he is presented with a clearly spooked man in his early-twenties by the name of Brian Gaffney. Whilst Gaffney is not the sharpest tool in the box, his tale of alien abduction and experimentation is not too far from the reality when Duckworth sees the crudely etched tattoo on his back. It doesn't take Duckworth too long to discover that Gaffney was the unintended victim of a malicious group of vigilantes advocating violent retribution and their own self-styled form of justice. Another of the victims of the group is emasculated predator, Craig Pierce, a man charged with assaulting a mentally handicapped girl, only to then be cleared and make his culpability known. Vengeful Pierce is eaten up with bitterness and makes clear to Duckworth that he believes the Just Deserts website and their social media entourage and behind the scars he now bears. But with the lawyers mired in a legislative battle to close the website down, Duckworth knows he has limited time to make a difference and intervene before it is too late. Along the way he finds no shortage of moralising citizens all set on capitalising on the towns renown and with their own axe to grind. His troubled relationship with son Trevor is also tested to the limit when a surveillance camera leaves Trevor and new girlfriend, Carol Beakman, with their own questions to answer about involvement in the investigation.. but not before the suspicious disappearance of Carol and some collateral damage in the form of a homicide.
Private investigator Cal Weaver's jobs are anything but easy money and sadly young Crystal who he grew so fond of in the trilogy finale is nowhere to be seen, having moved to live with her father in San Francisco after her mother's death. A call from the former publisher of the now out of print Promise Falls Standard, the local town newspaper sees Weaver introduced to Madeline Plimpton's niece, Gloria and her niece's son, Jeremy. Plimpton mentions a "traffic mishap" which has left Jeremy and his mother plagued by harassment, late night phone calls and threats to their safety in their Albany home, and sent them into hiding. Demanding to know the details, Weaver discovers that his charge is Jeremy Pilford, aka "The Big Baby" who killed a girl will driving under the influence. A bizarre defence strategy that saw his solicitor citing Pilford's inability to make decisions, understand the consequences of his actions after a life of mollycoddling and micro-managing by mother Gloria saw him avoid prison much to the wrath of the general public. Weaver has the toughest plot strand to make something out of and I am not sure that anyone could have made a plodding protection job anymore exciting, but after his exploits in the trilogy this is disappointing fare. Weaver's part in the story basically entails taking Jeremy Pilford on a road trip, where he learns quite plenty about the boy and comes to suspect that maybe Jeremy himself is covering someone else's backside. As the separate Weaver and Duckworth lines of inquiry collide, an underwhelming finale fails to save the say, despite some slightly suprise making for a into the close. In short, for readers who have not read the trilogy that commences with Broken Promise and climaxes with The Twenty-Three, there is no reason to read this novel and for fans of the series, Parting Shot will only taint the good memories. I believe that this is Linwood Barclay done with Promise Falls and for that I am thankful because I am well and truly outta here!
Note to fans: Crystal first gets a mention just shy of two-hundred pages, Mayor Randy Finley is also notable in his background role, instead we get more of Duckworth's son and two pretty unsympathetic characters who have done wrong and wallow in their new status as victims. It is hard to find any fondness for Jeremy, but his mother, Gloria, is completely devoid of common sense, attached to her mobile phone and vehemently engaged in his trial by social media. Likewise, Craig Pierce is an utterly loathsome character with zero redeeming features.