I started reading this series because I love Qui-Gon Jinn and couldn't get enough of him. I did not expect a young readers novel to be so insightful. With all due honesty, the author did a marvellous job capturing the emotional conflict of both a young apprentice and experienced mentor (and dare I say, she did better for the latter?) and it truly upsets me to see all the negative comments here about how unfairly Qui-Gon was treated in this book etc. because if that's all adult readers can think of after reading this story, I feel sorry for the young ones under their care.
Spoilers to follow.
In this book, we follow up from where the previous one left off with Obi-Wan making the decision to leave the Jedi Order. At the temple, Qui-Gon was berated by Tahl and Yoda about being too harsh on Obi-Wan. I have to admit that initially, I got really defensive, partly because Qui-Gon is my favourite SW character, but also because my initial mindset echoed that of other adults here: If the student wishes to quit, how can one make it the fault of the master? It's not like the master can lock him up in chains and drag him home. Obi-Wan made the decision to leave, so why is everyone blaming Qui-Gon?
It wasn't until I read what Yoda said later on that I finally understood. They weren't blaming Qui-Gon for Obi-Wan's choice — more like, they were blaming him for being too harsh. He literally backed a thirteen year old boy into the corner with only two options:
1. Follow Qui-Gon back to the temple, continue to be a Jedi but leave his friends to die
2. Stay on Melida/Daan to help his friends but leave the Order.
The problem with this is that the boy wants very much to be a Jedi because he wants to help others. When forced into a corner, his options looked thus to him:
1. Be a Jedi only in name but not in practice (hypocritic much?)
2. Fail as a Jedi but live as a commoner who upholds the Jedi values
If he was older, maybe he would have known to negotiate a third option. Say, his master left with Tahl while he stayed back momentarily to play peacekeeper and waited for his master to return (remember a one-way journey takes 3 days so going back with his master would mean leaving his friends to fend for themselves for 6 whole days and a lot can happen in 6 days in a war). As it was, he's still a child, and if you present him with A or B, he will only choose from the options presented.
And this is what Yoda is berating Qui-Gon for. He was trying to tell Qui-Gon that the reason Obi-Wan quitted was because Qui-Gon himself created the situation where Obi-Wan felt he had no choice but to quit. It wasn't that Obi-Wan wanted to leave the Order for the heck of it. He wanted to leave so that he could uphold the Jedi spirit and help his friends. Going by precedence, if Qui-Gon wasn't so caught up worrying about his friend Tahl, he himself would have stayed to help. He's not exactly a stickler for rules, so can he blame his apprentice for taking after him?
I'm not saying that Obi-Wan is without fault. Clearly he is, and the Council did not exactly forgive him easily for it either. Like Mace so aptly said, (and I paraphrase) "You are not a child anymore so why are you acting like one? Saying sorry doesn't make the wrong go away." But ultimately, he IS a kid. So he let his emotions get the better of him. So what? Adults are hardly free from that fault. He deserves reprimand, punishment and time for reflection. Exile is too harsh. If your thirteen-year-old child insists on staying on the street to save a stray from being killed, you don't say, follow me home now or never come home again. And even if you do and he chooses to stay, heaven forbid you actually bar your doors to him forever. Remember that the Jedi Order took him from his home when he was only a child and forbade him to keep in touch with his family. In other words, the Jedi is the only family he has. Being Jedi isn't like enrolling to be a soldier where if you fail, you can go home and pursue another occupation. When Qui-Gon took Obi-Wan on as his apprentice, it's our equivalent of a man adopting a child from an orphanage. If Qui-Gon refuses to take him back, it's like a man throwing a child back into the orphanage for his first major misconduct. If the Jedi Order doesn't take him back, it's an orphan being left on the street.
Can you see now why I'm so upset when readers complain only about how it's only Obi-Wan's fault and not Qui-Gon's? What sort of world do we live in that a 13 year old being disobedient by trying to save others becomes commonly accepted as a crime worthy of getting him thrown out of home?
Also, if it helps, Obi-Wan didn't exactly leave this incident without learning anything. If anything, Obi-Wan became such a stickler for rules later on that he became famous for it.