(1849) People need to know how friendly to the “general reader” early Melville can be, and what a treat these books are. The author dashed off Redburn in less than ten weeks, just to “buy some tobacco with.” Not softened by the positive reception it received, still bitter over the negative one for Mardi, he called it “trash.” But who wouldn’t want to read a trashy Melville novel? He called it a “little nursery tale.” In reality it’s a profound account of an interesting experience, a watery fish-out-of-water story, often wretched yet full of unexpected laughs, and a glimpse into the early life of a literary genius. And what nursery tale starts with a horrific suicide?
For the book is also a timeless portrayal of men in hard working conditions, focusing on the low man (or boy in this case) on the totem pole. That means merciless abuse, teasing that has long since stopped being funny, and bullying even by the bullied.
As usual, through it all, Melville retains his wry sense of humor, inquisitiveness, and resilient positivity. I think it’s safe to say that we are hearing him describe his own experiences, and himself as a boy. The novelist comes in as he subjects this younger self to those later trials as a 19-year-old at sea for the first time. Melville was, it would appear, a very good boy, pious, a member of the juvenile temperance league and anti-smoking society. Our adolescent hero venerates his mother, is gentlemanly, proud, and rather sheltered until recently plunged into gloom by his family’s sudden reversals. I liked the scene with his nurturing older brother, escorting him to his point of departure as far as ill health would allow (in fact his brother died not long after).
As he does in Omoo, Melville very methodically guides you from the beginning of the journey to the end, initiating you into a sailor’s life, and giving along the way a survey of the various characters peopling a merchant ship, from the captain to the cook to the passengers (that poor stutterer!). It’s uncanny how nothing’s changed. I once worked on the ferry to Nantucket and at a fish processing plant on the Cape and all these salty types still exist (they’re probably eternal): the psychopath whom everyone meekly pampers; the boss who flies out at you if you ask a question; Melville even accurately depicts those generally pleasant types from whom, nonetheless, no help can be expected. Everyone is simply too unhappy to be kind. Narratives are allowed to develop organically, but overall the author works off the simplest of coming-of-age plot arcs. *An innocent goes a-sailing.* Now watch him dilate on that for 365 pages.
Once we arrive in Liverpool, Melville’s voice strikes a plangent note, and he begins to channel Irving. The chapters are given to elegies and poetical lamentations, on the subject of time, of the dead, of the fleetingness of everything, and of one particularly prized guidebook from his childhood, whose outdatedness Melville turns into a seriocomic drama and defiant defense of nostalgia, which I found very relatable.
The experiences become perfectly tragic, then briefly melodramatic (in London), sentimental (Italian organ grinder), at which point you can indeed detect the cynicism with which Melville wrote the work. But he finishes with a volley of strong episodes. That bit about the sign warning of “man-traps and spring-guns” is comedy gold. The voyage is capped off as it began, with another freaky occurrence aboard (this time a rotting corpse is smuggled in among the drunken sailors, showing fantastical signs of spontaneous combustion). The pathetic behavior of the narrator’s friend Harry, as his haughty spirit is crushed by a fear of heights, is quite sad to behold. And Melville has a field day observing the 500 Irish emigrants who’d tagged along for the return trip to America. There’s one particularly heartwarming fight between a rude sailor, who tossed a lady’s bible overboard, and her many protective nephews.
“And still, beneath a gray, gloomy sky, the doomed craft beat on.”
The scenes of the cholera outbreak are harrowing.
What a beautiful book, worth rereading. Is it a tad conventional? Is the author on his best behavior? Maybe a little. But actually his voice is not that much different than in his first two books, except that the narrator is regulating his perceptions to that of a child. This is more so in the beginning, and rightly so, since Redburn is not quite the child he was by the end.
Up next: White-Jacket, then Billy Budd, the poetry, miscellany like Tartarus of Maids, and then perhaps (though it ruin all the wonderful memories) that Cerberus of novelistic infamy: Mardi, Pierre, and The Confidence Man.
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Points of interest:
*I think that laugh-out-loud funny part where the narrator gets his nickname must’ve been read by Thackeray, because there’s an anecdote by Henry James where the exact same joke is repeated by him 20 years later.
*Anyone looking for the real-life prototype of Ahab might want to look into the Jackson character: “…yet he was spontaneously an atheist and an infidel; and during the long night watches, would enter into arguments, to prove that there was nothing to be believed; nothing to be loved, and nothing worth living for; but every thing to be hated, in the wide world. He was a horrid desperado; and… seemed to run amuck at heaven and earth. He was a Cain afloat; branded on his yellow brow with some inscrutable curse; and going about corrupting and searing every heart that beat near him.”
*On encountering a wreck with corpses lashed to the railing: “So away we sailed, and left her; drifting, drifting on; a garden spot for barnacles, and a playhouse for the sharks.”
*”…my father had often spoken to gentlemen visiting our house in New York, of the unhappiness that the discussion of the abolition of this trade had occasioned in Liverpool; that the struggle between sordid interest and humanity had made sad havoc at the fire-sides of the merchants; estranged sons from sires; and even separated husband from wife.”
*”I trembled for the poor fellow, just as if I had seen him under the hands of a crazy barber…” The scene where the crazy Jackson is probing a man’s teeth with a jackknife is tense.
*As soon as the narrator so much as glimpses Ireland from afar, his ship gets swindled by a roguish Irishman in a boat, in a pretty funny trick.
*On the incognito author of his cherished guidebook: “He must have possessed the grandest and most elevated ideas of true fame, since he scorned to be perpetuated by a solitary initial. Could I find him out now, sleeping neglected in some churchyard, I would buy him a headstone, and record upon it naught but his title-page, deeming that his noblest epitaph.”
*“For I well knew that the law, which would let them perish of themselves without giving them one cup of water, would spend a thousand pounds, if necessary, in convicting him who should so much as offer to relieve them from their miserable existence.”
*Melville discusses the utter absence of black people in Liverpool and his surprise to see native white beggars, unknown to him in the US. He also says he saw one of the blacks from his ship walking arm-in-arm with a good-looking English woman: “In New York, such a couple would have been mobbed in three minutes; and the steward would have been lucky to escape with whole limbs.”
*”A man-trap! It must be so… And who put it there? The proprietor, probably. And what right had he to do so? Why, he owned the soil. And where are his title-deeds? In his strong-box, I suppose.” Melville does such a good job relaying his stupefied thought process during this scene.
*”Few landsmen can imagine the depressing and self-humiliating effects of finding one's self, for the first time, at the beck of illiterate sea-tyrants, with no opportunity of exhibiting any trait about you, but your ignorance of every thing connected with the sea-life that you lead, and the duties you are constantly called upon to perform… In more than one instance I have seen the truth of this; and Harry, poor Harry, proved no exception. And from the circumstances which exempted me from experiencing the bitterest of these evils, I only the more felt for one who, from a strange constitutional nervousness, before unknown even to himself, was become as a hunted hare to the merciless crew.”
*“…it was a still more miserable thing, to see these poor emigrants wrangling and fighting together for the want of the most ordinary accommodations. But thus it is, that the very hardships to which such beings are subjected instead of uniting them, only tends, by imbittering their tempers, to set them against each other; and thus they themselves drive the strongest rivet into the chain, by which their social superiors hold them subject.”
*It’s funny to watch the sailors who, taking advantage of the high duties in England, had greedily sold all their tobacco, now suffer without it on the voyage back, “like opium-smokers, suddenly cut off from their drug,” and desperately gamble for it, painstakingly divide scraps, smoke rope in substitution, all while the prudent Jackson lies in a cloud of tobacco smoke, hooting at them and, as the narrator says, exaggerating their sufferings… “No one dared to return his scurrilous animadversions, nor did any presume to ask him to relieve their necessities out of his fullness. On the contrary, as has been just related, they divided with him the nail-rods they found. The extraordinary dominion of this one miserable Jackson, over twelve or fourteen strong, healthy tars, is a riddle, whose solution must be left to the philosophers.”
*“On land, a pestilence is fearful enough; but there, many can flee from an infected city; whereas, in a ship, you are locked and bolted in the very hospital itself.”
*”He had served in the armed steamers during the Seminole War in Florida, and had a good deal to say about sailing up the rivers there, through the everglades, and popping off Indians on the banks. I remember his telling a story about a party being discovered at quite a distance from them; but one of the savages was made very conspicuous by a pewter plate, which he wore round his neck, and which glittered in the sun. This plate proved his death; for, according to Gun-Deck, he himself shot it through the middle, and the ball entered the wearer's heart. It was a rat-killing war, he said.”
*“And as for the ginger-pop, why, that ginger-pop was divine! I have reverenced ginger-pop ever since.”
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Marginalia:
*From the intro I learned that at 19, Melville was 5’8.5” tall. Over a year later another ship’s records added an inch.
*This isn’t in the book, but I found this funny observation from Melville’s father about his 7-year-old boy: “…he is very backward in speech and somewhat slow in comprehension, but you will find him as far as he understands men and things both solid and profound.”
*The reviewers who talk about homoeroticism in the book really need to read more old books, so they can see it in the context of a time period where there weren’t the same hangups we have today about such things (eg describing a boy’s beauty or girlish hands etc). You find more “gay” stuff like that in Dumas, and he was famously straight.
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Some references:
*As in Moby Dick, Melville mentions the “Norway maelstrom”—clearly he liked Poe’s 1841 short story A Descent into the Maelström as much as I.
*Interesting biblical reference when talking about how outdated his guidebook is: “I tell you it was written before the lost books of Livy, and is cousin-german to that irrecoverably departed volume, entitled, "The Wars of the Lord" quoted by Moses in the Pentateuch.”
*”They were such pictures as the high-priests, for a bribe, showed to Alexander in the innermost shrine of the white temple in the Libyan oasis.”
*Beethoven’s “Spirit Waltz.”
*”Lord Byron's Address to the Ocean, which I had often spouted on the stage at the High School at home.” Reference to the last stanzas of Childe Harold’s Pilgrimage.
*”I found myself a sort of Ishmael in the ship, without a single friend or companion.” Or “…for even in the worst of the calamities that befell patient Job, some one at least of his servants escaped to report it.”Likewise, even the (funny enough) slighting reference to whales feels very portentous, knowing what was soon coming from Melville.
*Melville says if you ever see the captain yelling at the helmsman you may as well write your will and seal it up in a bottle, like Columbus’ log.