Let me start by admitting to being a fan of B.J. Daniels, romantic suspense novels and anything at all about cowboys, so the blurb for this novel rang my chimes. Add in a couple of murders, a second chance at love, and I'm there. Sadly, this novel, while it was an okay read, wasnt't one of Ms. Daniels' best novels, and I can only give it a 3 start rating.
Mary Cardwell Savage is the heroine in this novel, although she really seems to be more of a victim than a heroine. Chase Steel, the hero, was the love of her life--they met and fell in love in high school at age 15, but at age 24, when Mary was expecting a proposal from Chase, he up and left town to "find himself," breaking Mary's heart and his own, but fulfilling his need to sow some wild oats, and become a man--yet a man who had no clue and was desperate to discover who his father was, and who he'd blamed his entire life for the fact that his mother worked herself to death to feed and keep a roof over his head, while his father abandoned his then 17-year-old pregnant mother and left her to fend for herself and her infant son. His mother's recent death, and the discovery of a carton containing some pages from her diary, are the catalyst that brings Chase, who was working as a carpenter in Arizona at the time, back home, to the girl he left behind, and a mission to find out who fathered him.
Unfortunately, a rather drunken Chase hooked up with a woman, Fiona Barkley, at a barbecue at the home of his boss, ended up sleeping with her, and had no idea that this woman was a deranged stalker, one who became instantly convinced Chase was her soulmate, and that they were destined to be together forever. Chase had told her at the outset that he was in love with another woman and that he planned to return home and marry her if he could get her to forgive him for leaving. But Fiona is very much like the heroine in the film, Fatal Attraction, undeterred by reality, and unashamed of repeatedly breaking into Chase's apartment, where she finds a letter from Mary in Chase's sock drawer, reads it, and starts plotting and planning to get rid of Mary, and make Chase pay for leaving her for another woman.
Mary, who is sick and tired of pining for Chase for years, finally starts dating one of her father's deputies, Dillon Ramsey, much to her sheriff father's dismay, since he doesn't entirely like or trust Dillon, only hiring him as a favor to a friend, and although Dylan seemed nice enough to Mary at the outset, he's got a dark past as well as prior convictions, and when Chase finally returns to Big Sky, Montana, Mary, who still loves Chase, continues to date Dylan, and no longer seems to know her own mind. It was at this point that I began to actively dislike her. From this point of the novel on, Mary can't make up her mind about whether or not to give Chase another chance, but her waffling made little sense to me, because for someone who claims to still want to be with the love of her life, she sure has a funny way of showing it. Yes, she had reason not to trust Chase out of fear of him leaving her again, but even after he flat out tells her he's been in love with her all along, and except for his drunken one-nighter with Fiona, who is now missing and presumed dead when she disappears from town and her car in found in the river, Chase has remained faithful to Mary all along. His delay in responding to Mary's letter is explained by Chase, who tells her that he wanted to see if Mary would forgive him and be willing to start over with him, a message he wanted to deliver in person. As he's packing his truck to leave, Fiona attempts to kill him, but after fending her off, and while Chase is gathering the last of his belongings inside, Fiona sabotages his truck, which now needs a new engine and delays him from returning home.
Meanwhile, Fiona, now calling herself Lucy, after faking her own death, has had plastic surgery, gotten colored contact lenses, dyes her hair and moves to Chase's home town, where she gets a job as a barista, after killing the current one in a late night hit and run, and then moves into the vacant apartment across the street from the coffee shop, in a building that Mary owns, works out of, and which she was planning to rent to the now dead barista who Fiona killed, and quickly insinuating herself into Mary's life, while planning to kill her too, to punish Chase for leaving her.
Fiona is clearly demented, and we're given some reasons for her insane behavior, but I had fewer problems accepting Fiona/Lucy as a deranged, vengeful and murderous stalker than I did in accepting wishy-washy Mary, who is treated like gossamer by everyone, and who seems to have virtually no emotional depth whatsoever, and who doesn't seem too eager to welcome back the the man she's claimed to be in love with for more than a decade. Perhaps it's me, but I've always felt that you either love someone or you don't, and if you don't love or trust them, why continue to keep them dangling on a string, which is exactly the way she treats poor Chase--the only sympathetic character in this novel, in this reader's opinion.
The are more nefarious goings on as well in Big Sky, cattle rustling being one of them, and more murder and mayhem to follow in this novel, but what didn't sit well with me was the fact that we got to see more of the workings of Fiona/Lucy's devious and warped mind and emotions than we did of Chase and Mary's, who are, after all, the hero and heroine of this novel. I'm also used to a little more heat in Ms. Daniels' novels than there was in this one, which was pretty much void of anything more than a couple of kisses, and Fiona/Lucy's insistence that she spent a meaningful and sex-filled night in Chases's bed--something he doubts ever actually happened later in the novel.
While this novel wasn't an entirely bad read, Ms. Daniels is a talented writer, it wasn't a really great or believable novel one either, and it was easy to see where it was headed from the outset. Having read many of Ms. Daniels' previous novels, I can say with confidence that this was not her best work by far. It lacked emotional depth, character development of the two main characters and a far less HEA abbreviated ending.
I voluntarily read an advance reader copy of this novel. The opinions expressed are my own.