A collection of eleven short stories
On the surface these stories glitter with astute observations of the natural world, male/female relationships and in particular the role of (reluctant) mother to two small boys.
Some I liked, some I disliked and several were so, so – that’s normal in a collection, but I also felt the editor(s) had slipped in stories which were not relevant to the title – Florida. Two of the stories are set in rural France and a third in Salvador, Brazil – the rest in various parts of the Orange Juice state – Florida.
I liked her focus on the Environment - the noise made by air conditioners; poor people make do with wide verandas and ceiling fans – something I can relate to. Information about sinkholes appearing – and her descriptions of snakes, bull gators, palmettos and chinaberry trees. The first story, Ghosts and Empties sets the scene and gives a vivid depiction of modern north Florida. A woman who tries to unwind from the pressures of childcare, jogs and walks through the night observing houses and the people who live in her neighbourhood:
Northern Florida is cold in January and I walk fast for warmth but also because, though the neighbourhood is antique – huge Victorian houses radiating outward into 1920s bungalows, then mid-century modern ranches at the edges it’s imperfectly safe. … We moved here ten years ago because our house was cheap and had virgin-lumber bones, and because I decided that if I had to live in the South, with its boiled peanuts and its Spanish moss dangling like armpit hair, at least I wouldn’t barricade myself with my whiteness in a gated community.
The next story At the Round Earth’s Imagined Corners moves forward through time, giving an overview of development in Florida and uses the particular story of one family to show how the state has moved from wilderness, and sparse settlement to large scale developments with towns, roads, and university sites permanently altering and changing, or destroying the natural environment. It follows one family and their history, moving from the World War II years into the late 20th century. The father is a herpetologist; a university researcher, collecting and studying snakes and other reptiles. He gradually sells his land to the expanding University but ultimately acknowledges that the habitat of the wild creatures he admires has been lost for ever.
A third story I quite liked, retains Groff’s theme of the natural world – focussing on a vivid description of being inside a hurricane – the narrator is protected only by the sturdy bones of an old house. Eyewall.
And then in the middle of the book – we move onto some dodgy ground. Try this for a change in style and topic:
Helena was in that viscous pool of years in her late thirties when she could feel her beauty slowly departing from her. She had been lovely at one time, which slid into pretty, which slid into attractive, and now, if she didn’t do something major to halt the slide, she’d end up at handsomely middle-aged, which was no place at all to be.
Really? I don’t personally know of any female, friend, relative or acquaintance of mine who in her Late Thirties would consider “her beauty slowly departing”! I suppose Groff is identifying a particular type of female?
Anyway, this story set in Salvador – entitled Salvador, is about an American woman who likes to spend her yearly holiday, away from her aging mother, in the company of men. She meets her comeuppance, however, in the form of a local shopkeeper, who rescues her from a vicious storm. She is dragged into the shelter of his shop and then preyed upon by his lascivious closeness – in the dark. So, Groff stages a clash: in types from different social and economic class. And, why not – you may ask? The foreign tourist indulges her whims – in a country where she feels free to disregard the local people - but it feels – overdone. Better writers have tackled this type of disparity between individuals from different backgrounds before Groff; Bessie Head, for example or Nadine Gordimer, Paul Theroux or the American icon – Paul Bowles; they all write without the overt moralising tone.
One set in France – I disliked intensely – For the God of Love, For the Love of God – hard to see the connection between the title and the story. And I suspect written for a Woman’s Mag - Glamour, Cosmopolitan etc. Why is it in this collection? There is a tenuous link in that two of the characters are from Florida; a third, Jennifer (Genevieve) spent time there before marrying her foreign husband. The bulk of the story, however, is German castles, champagne, baron Manfred who has had a manic episode and the three dissembling, Americans – all eager to switch partners. Grant who is about to dump his girlfriend Amanda suggests a threesome with Jennifer. Etc.
The Midnight Zone – is about a mother who stays with her two small boys in an abandoned hunting camp; she falls and is badly injured and the children have to wait until their father returns. How she copes with this situation and the children’s reactions – is riveting - a story I think based on a real incident.
Another story, Dogs Go Wolf is about two children abandoned on an island. It holds minute details of how indeed they might think or feel or react in such a situation – don’t worry the children find a holiday maker just before they are about to succumb to starvation.
One I partially liked: Above and Below, is about a graduate student, forced to live in her car. It also centres on different aspects of deprivation and poverty but then expands away from the students' situation to a much broader situation and - becomes unbelievable. The female narrator ends up in a camp of homeless women and children – but it lacked the visceral detail of the earlier parts of the story.
Overall I think Groff has moments of originality and insight – the last story Yport – which I noticed many reviewers didn’t like, was I thought one of the better ones. It is long and it wanders, but it does have a strong focus on the two children. The mother gradually gains insight into how her constant worries are affecting them - a sort of osmosis. So this one felt genuine, authentic; and although it is set in France with zero connection to Florida I liked it. The story of a mother writing truthfully about the demands of child-care and those sudden provoking insights into how we care about our children is both brave and true.
Hard to rate – some of the stories deserve less than one star, the last borders between 3/4 stars - a very mixed bunch.