2 stars:
In a few words, this book is a total train wreck. If you want some further explanation take a gander...
2 stars because the ideas in this book were still interesting and I did finish it. Even if I hated every minute of it.
First off, I don’t enjoy leaving bad reviews. I probably even try to avoid it. But alas when a book really pisses me off, I feel an obligation to the other readers out there.
This is such a disappointing moment for me because at one point I honestly would have said I thought I’d found my new favorite author in Amelia Hutchins. The books starting out these “connected” series I just Loved and absolutely devoured (basically books 1-3 of both The Fae Chronicles and The Monster Series). I’ve never left her anything but a 5 star review until now.
Now things have started to get Real sloppy for me. And I’m at a point where I’m not even sure if the writing has always been like this, and I just didn’t notice at first, or if it’s just slowly been degrading over the course of these series.
Let me just say I LOVE a good dark romance. That is not the problem here. In fact they may be my favourite. I’m pretty much always looking for those enemies to lover and antihero books. So suffice to say I had high hopes for this book. The overall story and creativity had so much potential and as much as I hated this book, I’m still dying to know how the story ends. However, here are my issues, some of which, are becoming an increasing trend in a lot of Amelia Hutchins books I’ve been reading as of late:
*****Shit ton of spoilers ahead*********
1.
A chunk of this book was a previous book I bought and read, unbeknownst to me. It wouldn’t have been the end of the world if it had just been easy to skip over, but it was intermingled with new parts of the story. This was super super irritating.
2.
The tales behind the characters, in terms of how everything fits together and the lore, has become excessively sloppy.
We started off with one goddess Danu (in reality we started with Fae, now it seems to be a god show), then all of a sudden she has this evil husband Bile, now all of a sudden there were actually 3 gods involved in the creation of Faery and it’s creatures, in enters The Morrigan. Who, in one of the last books we are told created the dragons or some shit in Faery. Wait.... but now The Morrigan is actually 3 goddess sisters, 1 of which is responsible for all this war and Irish lore in the human world....
.....The thing is, it feels like this is so badly explained with respect to how it all fits together. It’s starting to feel like there wasn’t an over arching plan or idea for bringing these series to completion or with respect to how they were supposed to intermingle. And now other random lore is being pulled in to try and stuff into a different series and the puzzle pieces don’t fit nicely.
Generally I’m not a fan of books that don’t give you clues and allow for some foresight into the over arching story. Because then bam out of no where there’s this made up explanation for why everything is the way it is, that you would not have been able to begin to predict in a million years because it just doesn’t make a lot of sense. Nothing feels so unsatisfying and messy then when I read a book like this. Sadly, that’s exactly what I feel like is happening here.
In addition to this, if your going to base your books off of real lore, that’s awesome, but I don’t want to have to go look up that mythology myself to be able to understand your book. And this particular one got so confusing with druids and paladins and, No Wait, now they are actually Knight Templar’s, and then, oh Wait again, now they are actually Formorians. And NOW her lover is two Formorian kings joined into one body, and they hold these beasts... etc. etc.... Like wait what? I’m so lost by this point. Too Much!
3.
It seems that the only way we learn anything in these books are by the characters having these extremely long, drawn out, very repetitive dialogues, where they are literally explaining everything to one another like five different times. This gets pretty boring, and doesn’t feel like a creative way of story telling. I’ve been noticing this a lot in her more recent books.
4.
Enough with the excessively overzealous monologues from everyone. It’s starting to feel like every single conversation is someone just giving this “heroic” speech where they also repeat themselves over and over and over. WE GET IT, YOUR PASSIONATE, NOW LETS MOVE ON.
5.
There’s a lot of stuff that happens in the book that didn’t need to happen, that didn’t add to the story whatsoever and felt forced. Like Erie’s little trip to Faery, where she then turns around and leaves with dudes after they followed her there... like what did it accomplish going to Faery? You faked some preggo test and stole some of Zs blades? You are the goddess of war, pretty sure you could have accomplished that in the human realm.
This felt like a forced scene just to get other characters from other series some page time. Erie also has some uncharacteristic behaviours during this part where she try’s to make a gf with the winter court chick upon spotting her for the first time ever. THIS IS ERIE WERE TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE. The girl who spends the entire book talking about how she has no friends, trusts no one, and doesn’t want to be touched not even so much as a hug...? Like who are you all of a sudden.. oh but shout out to Icelyn don’t forget to check out that other book I wrote.
Super annoying.
6.
There’s just so so so much shit in this book that makes ZERO sense. I’m half tempted to release my highlights and notes, but honestly I tore this book apart and was getting super irritated towards the end. So my comments may be a little harsh. I wanted to like this book so bad, and it had so much potential, but I felt so let down and that made me emotional... in a bad way.
For example, One moment your dudes telling her shes not listening to him when he says she’s not evil just lost and broken, then the very next page he’s telling her she’s the evilest monster out there...? Like wait what? Can you say MIND FUCK.
Or how about: when your dudes are waiting for their goddess, love of their life, and soulmate to be reborn, KNOWING that she’s coming back and actively trying to wake her, they decide to take a wife. But not just take a wife, oh no, they decide to make their wife immortal using the very power the goddess gave to them to be immortal so they could be with their goddess... And THEN when their goddess finally does return to them, they get mad at her for disrupting their marriage and new family and tell her she has to be their side piece because now they have a wife that they made immortal and can’t leave, because what... duty? LIKE WHAT???!!!
Fast forward 1000 years and it’s no big deal, they have no problem leaving their wife now. Even though the book continues to go on about how their duties must always come first, which is why Erie was left to be abused.
LIKE WTF.
OR there was that time when your dudes built a castle and protected your infant sleeping form for a 1000+ years but then the second you woke they had to peace out for the most important 20 years of your life while they literally watched you continuously be abused but somehow had zero other option then to leave you (their soulmate, goddess and love of their life) there knowing exactly what terrible shit was happening to you. Not to mention all the while, they are afraid you will become evil and use your powers to start a war, at the same times as needing you to have a child to save their race that your being abused by... wtf did you think was gonna happen boys?
I can’t even keep count of the number of contradictions in this book it’s so overwhelming. In fact, this entire book is just a walking contradiction.
SIDE NOTE:
Erie is supposed to be this antihero. But like she’s not even bad at all. She’s literally just been abused over and over, and the things she’s done that are “bad” has been well earned and has actually been the fault of all the other characters, the very ones who sit there and abuse her and call her a monster. It’s all super fucked up.
Alas, I could literally go on forever, but to wrap this shit show up before my rage comes back from just thinking about this book:
IF you eat up stories and just listen to what the author tells you when they tell it, and you don’t call bullshit on a story when it doesn’t make sense with respect to what was previously written and explained... you will probably like this book.
Alternatively, if your like me, and you read a lot and have been spoiled by some very amazing authors, your going to want to burn this book and likely have pulled out all your hair by the time you finish reading it.... if you even make it that far.
Happy reading folks.