This was a terrible, terrible book. Pathetic, unrealistic, unbelievable, lacked any real skill and the characters were boring.
This is a teacher/counselor and student romance. I generally don't enjoy these types of books as they're never done well or realistically, however I read reviews that Sweet Dandelion was different; it was meant to be moving, emotional, and a genuine love story. I did not get any of that and I am honestly pissed that I wasted my time.
It starts off well, I'll give credit there. There is a slight hint of technique in regards to showcasing grief, however it lasted maybe two-three chapters, and then it all went south. After that, the author does not consistently portray grief well; the female lead was involved in a school shooting where her mother was killed and she suffered an injury that left her with a limp. It's almost a year after when we're first introduced to Dandelion and she does appear as though she is mentally and emotionally tuned out from the world. But as I said, it does not last long as the story starts to focus on the "connection" and "romance" between Dandelion and her school counselor, Lachlan. That is when all technique and believeability goes out the window. Dandelion and Lachlan don't actually talk about anything; there are no moving scenes between them from a counselor/student perspective. Lachlan comes across as bland and unintelligent and not at all professional. Dandelion stares at his ass when they first meet, so that gives you one insight into how this is all going to play out. They say a few sentences together during their "meetings", but nothing of substance. The author sometimes tried to be philosophical but it came across as forced and only made Dandelion sound, well, dumb. Early on Lachlan moves his entire office to somewhere else that has a window, all for Dandelion; unrealistic, as surely she is not his only client/student.
There are moments where Dandelion and Lachlan hug, or touch each other briefly, which is entirely unprofessional once again. That would not happen in real life unless it was a predator/grooming situation. At one point in one of their meetings Dandelion cries so much into his shirt it ends up wet, so he changes his shirt in front of her! I'm sorry, what!? It's also found out that Lachlan lives in the same building as Dandelion and her brother - big surprise there, never saw that coming (sarcasm). She goes over to his place and cries into his shirt a few more times, and he gives her books to read, hugs her, comforts her in every unprofessional way. They begin texting, forming a "connection", and then things become sexual and "romantic". Professionalism and realisim clearly aren't used in this book.
I was hoping for an emotional read; I wanted to be on a journey with a character that had gone through a traumatic event and the aftermath of it. I wanted to feel how the character would struggle and overcome mental and emotional battles. I wanted her to actually have a counselor that helped her, offered professional insight and support. I was hoping for depth, substance and meaning. If romance were to unfold, I was hoping it would be done in a way that made me believe that it was a genuine, real and profound undeniable connection between the characters that was not without its struggles. Instead I got a pathetic school girl fantasy story that was never believable.
This is something that would be written on a site like Wattpad; written by someone with a weird fantasy for student/teacher romances. Sweet Dandelion is not a deep story, it is not a gut-wrenching, soul-searching story. It is not an inspiring story or a romantic story. It's barely even a story at all, to be honest. I cannot comprehend how a book like this could be published and how people can actually enjoy it and believe it's worth more than 1 star. Mind-boggling, really.
Sweet Dandelion is not written remotely well. It is not worth your time, I do not recommend.