This series has deeply disappointed me for the last few years and I'm sorry to say this book is no different. There will be spoilers ahead.
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Luhcas dies in this book. Could someone please explain to me what the point was of bringing his character into this series? He has had absolutely no role in the plot whatsoever. He was brought in in Lover at Last, had a couple of scenes in The Shadows when he was feeling suicidal and then the last we saw of him, he was starting the recovery process. I am aware that people can relapse, but there was absolutely no character development, no indication of this in previous books, it's just completely out of the blue. I'd have expected a character arc, to actually see his pov, but it was absent. He dies off page about halfway through the book with no build-up. It just seems to me that Ward killed him off because she didn't know what to do with him, in which case why bring him in to the story at all? And why kill a character off in an optional Christmas special?
This was a real missed opportunity to write about a character living with a disability, something she has done well in the past. Such a shame. There are so many characters in this series that have suffered and undergone beautiful transformation, to be honest this felt like a cop out. I feel like Ward shies away from anything emotional or difficult in her writing lately leaving it feeling flat.
The whole book suffers from telling rather than showing, with many events and conversations being alluded to rather then shown. It results in a complete lack of emotion for me. Really I found the whole story very boring. There was a lot of filler and considering the entire plot revolved around Luhcas's death and Qhuinn and Blay getting mated and nothing else, I think it could have been handled in a short novella rather than a whole book. It just dragged on, with Ward spending pages rehashing the events of previous books to bulk it up. There was no real story.
If you thought The Chosen was the last of Qhuinn behaving like a lunatic, you're surely mistaken as he decides to beat Lassiter to a pulp in this book. That guy has some serious anger issues.
There are several chapters with the pov of a couple of new characters that I couldn't care less about. I hate it when Ward does this. There are so many characters we never see anymore, instead we get to read about people we don't care about.
There are various characters that pop-up in this book but they're a bit like furniture, always in the background, never having much of a substantial role. I miss the days when there was character development and intrigue in the other Brother's lives. A brief check-in and a bit of childish banter is all we get now from the Brothers. Ward seems out of ideas for where to take her characters. Z does have a pov in this story but only for the first half and it basically just goes over his past again, there's no new material. There's also a scene where he sings 'staying alive' at one point, yes really.
As usual all of the characters speak exactly the same, indistinguishable from each other, including the Bastards. Balthazar has dialogue in this book which is completely out of character; he's completely lost the Old Way of speaking. As I've said in other reviews, her characters have lost their originality and become like cardboard. The writing is at an all time-low. Here's an example: 'As Qhuinn zipped up a Mount Everest–worthy parka from his hips to his chinny-chin-chin, he felt like the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man.' Really?!
Then there's this little gem: 'A swimming pool you could stage Olympic trials in, a pool house that could shelter a family of six, and half a dozen modern sculptures the size of SUVs. All of which were the colors of Lassiter’s collection of zebra tights: Neon pink, acid yellow, kryptonite green.' And this: 'His eyes were glowing yellow, not black like when he was going to go off at someone.' From Qhuinn's pov no less. Apparently Ward has forgotten that Qhuinn is supposed to be colour blind. There are countless examples: 'He looked into Lyric’s beautiful pale green eyes' etc. Where's the continuity?
I'm pretty tired of hearing 'my love' as a term of endearment, it's used for every couple now, pick something else! Ward just can't write romance anymore, this book was just too cheesy at times. Ahem. Like this: "Did I say that out loud? For real? Oopsy. You want to spank me for being a naughty boy? Please? Commmmme onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn." So much of the dialogue felt like it was between two children not grown adults. It's like reading about a bunch of frat boys.
If I'm not mistaken, the entire prologue in this book is straight up copied from the beginning of Lover at Last, so you're paying to read the same material again.
Lastly but not least: The sex scenes are so terribly written, it actually made me cringe. Nothing sexy about it. No mention of lube either. That's gotta hurt.
To conclude: Don't bother. It has very little story and adds nothing to the BDB world save for the death of a side character that felt much like an afterthought. Cheesy dialogue, cringey sex scenes, ridiculous errors and both the first chapter and epilogue from the pov of characters we don't even know. This isn't the same Ward that wrote Lover Awakened that's for sure.