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Undoing
Seventeen-year-old Elizabeth Bennet had always hoped to marry for love - that is until she surrenders to her mother’s demands and marries the handsome Duke of Leeds. Thrust into a society disinclined to accept a country nobody who somehow entrapped one of their most prominent members, Elizabeth holds her head high, ignoring their whispers and stares and a husband whose indifferent behaviour confuses her. Her marriage of convenience is nothing like what she expected.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is a man torn. After meeting the Duchess of Leeds at a ball, he is fascinated by her intelligence and humour, but how does one maintain a respectable friendship with a lady - particularly when that lady is the wife of his cousin and godfather? His father and his sister both love Elizabeth, and he quickly realises he loves her as well, though not as one loves a cousin or even a sister. His feelings must stay hidden from everyone, particularly Elizabeth, but how is he to keep himself under such strict regulation when he is constantly thrown into her company? How does one prevent their own undoing?
Contains scenes with adult content.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is a man torn. After meeting the Duchess of Leeds at a ball, he is fascinated by her intelligence and humour, but how does one maintain a respectable friendship with a lady - particularly when that lady is the wife of his cousin and godfather? His father and his sister both love Elizabeth, and he quickly realises he loves her as well, though not as one loves a cousin or even a sister. His feelings must stay hidden from everyone, particularly Elizabeth, but how is he to keep himself under such strict regulation when he is constantly thrown into her company? How does one prevent their own undoing?
Contains scenes with adult content.
374 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 27, 2020
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L.L. Diamond
36 books183 followersAmazon best selling author L. L. Diamond is more commonly known as Leslie to her friends, and Mom to her three kids. A native of Louisiana, she has spent the majority of her life living within an hour of New Orleans until she followed her husband to the ends of the earth as a military wife. Louisiana, Mississippi, California, Texas, New Mexico, Nebraska, England, Missouri, and now Maryland have all been called home along the way.
Aside from mother and writer, Leslie considers herself a perpetual student. She has degrees in biology and studio art, but will devour any subject of interest simply for the knowledge. As an artist, her concentration is in graphic design, but watercolor is her medium of choice with one of her watercolors featured on the cover of her second book, A Matter of Chance. She is a member of the Jane Austen Society of North America. She also plays flute and piano, but much like Elizabeth Bennet, she is always in need of practice!
Aside from mother and writer, Leslie considers herself a perpetual student. She has degrees in biology and studio art, but will devour any subject of interest simply for the knowledge. As an artist, her concentration is in graphic design, but watercolor is her medium of choice with one of her watercolors featured on the cover of her second book, A Matter of Chance. She is a member of the Jane Austen Society of North America. She also plays flute and piano, but much like Elizabeth Bennet, she is always in need of practice!
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March 11, 2021
This is another long book, which also includes that angst I am so fond of.
Elizabeth, in this variation, acts to provide for her sisters' future...no, she doesn't marry Mr. Collins. However, she does NOT marry for love. Thomas Osborne, the Duke of Leeds has come to Hertfordshire to check on his property, Stoke. He meets and offers for Elizabeth. He finds her intelligence, wit, etc. perfect for the position of his wife and he needs an heir. He also explains that he will set up dowries and see the Mr. Bennet does what he should as far as taking his younger daughters out of society until they are old enough plus see to their education.
However, their wedding night when he comes to her it is, "I can't" and he leaves. So it is a marriage unconsummated.
We learn that this Duke is the Darcys' cousin...Mr. George Darcy still being alive and near in age to Thomas. And in the story it is cousin Nicholas Fitzwilliam, Viscount Carlisle, who is like a brother to our Fitzwilliam Darcy. Richard Fitzwilliam is on good terms with Thomas’s nephew and heir, James Osborne, whom we learn is a rake, a gambler and a wastrel who has been spending the inheritance he expects when Thomas dies...as Thomas has no heir.
I would spoil it if I relate how Thomas expects to gain an heir when "he can't" and further "why". He goes to great and shocking lengths and compromises more than one person in his scheme. And it is all kept a secret from society as well as most of his family and close acquaintances.
Yes, Darcy finds himself drawn to Elizabeth immediately and they soon form a friendship. Both admit to themselves that their feelings are more than just that of friends and both struggle to keep those feelings hidden, to not cross moral boundaries, even if some in society would look the other way.
Elizabeth and her husband spend a lot of time with the Darcys. Their estates are close to each other. But they also have friends in London's ton and are active there. Georgiana, who is in school, also becomes part of this circle of friends. However, it is Viscount Carlisle who meets and romances Jane Bennet.
As Thomas finds a way to thwart his nephew he also has now given that man a reason to want Elizabeth (and another) out of his way. So the protection of Elizabeth brings another danger and causes a circle to form around her.
I highly recommend this story. There is so much I have not revealed here. Know also that there are MA scenes.
9/18/2020: I am listening to this book on Audible. 10/14/2020: I finished listening to this on Audible.
3/11/2021: I am again listening to this on Audible while walking outside.
Elizabeth, in this variation, acts to provide for her sisters' future...no, she doesn't marry Mr. Collins. However, she does NOT marry for love. Thomas Osborne, the Duke of Leeds has come to Hertfordshire to check on his property, Stoke. He meets and offers for Elizabeth. He finds her intelligence, wit, etc. perfect for the position of his wife and he needs an heir. He also explains that he will set up dowries and see the Mr. Bennet does what he should as far as taking his younger daughters out of society until they are old enough plus see to their education.
However, their wedding night when he comes to her it is, "I can't" and he leaves. So it is a marriage unconsummated.
We learn that this Duke is the Darcys' cousin...Mr. George Darcy still being alive and near in age to Thomas. And in the story it is cousin Nicholas Fitzwilliam, Viscount Carlisle, who is like a brother to our Fitzwilliam Darcy. Richard Fitzwilliam is on good terms with Thomas’s nephew and heir, James Osborne, whom we learn is a rake, a gambler and a wastrel who has been spending the inheritance he expects when Thomas dies...as Thomas has no heir.
I would spoil it if I relate how Thomas expects to gain an heir when "he can't" and further "why". He goes to great and shocking lengths and compromises more than one person in his scheme. And it is all kept a secret from society as well as most of his family and close acquaintances.
Yes, Darcy finds himself drawn to Elizabeth immediately and they soon form a friendship. Both admit to themselves that their feelings are more than just that of friends and both struggle to keep those feelings hidden, to not cross moral boundaries, even if some in society would look the other way.
Elizabeth and her husband spend a lot of time with the Darcys. Their estates are close to each other. But they also have friends in London's ton and are active there. Georgiana, who is in school, also becomes part of this circle of friends. However, it is Viscount Carlisle who meets and romances Jane Bennet.
As Thomas finds a way to thwart his nephew he also has now given that man a reason to want Elizabeth (and another) out of his way. So the protection of Elizabeth brings another danger and causes a circle to form around her.
I highly recommend this story. There is so much I have not revealed here. Know also that there are MA scenes.
9/18/2020: I am listening to this book on Audible. 10/14/2020: I finished listening to this on Audible.
3/11/2021: I am again listening to this on Audible while walking outside.
November 13, 2021
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This is a beautifully written, angst-filled variation. It really pushes the boundaries of a Pride and Prejudice story. Most of the characters are consistent with Jane Austen's (with a notable exception), but their circumstances are dramatically changed and I feel their reactions are what we might reasonably expect under these conditions.
Things begin much earlier than in Austen's novel, when Elizabeth Bennet is only seventeen years old; ages of the other characters are similarly younger. She catches the eye of the considerably older Thomas Osborne, the Duke of Leeds, who, to her astonishment, proposes marriage very soon after they meet. His offer includes providing handsome dowries for each of her sisters when they reach the appropriate age and the small estate he owns in the Meryton area, which will be available for her mother and unmarried sisters when Mr. Bennet dies. After carefully considering his offer and her father's advice, Elizabeth becomes the Duchess of Leeds (even though she doesn't love him and he's made no such declaration to her) for the sake of her family. She's further confused about his reason for marrying her when he doesn't consummate their marriage.
London is agog at the duke's imprudent marriage, and everyone is eager to meet the young upstart from nowhere who somehow snared the perpetual bachelor. The duke's cousin, George Darcy (who's still alive), goes to a private ball along with his son that the newlyweds are also attending, and Thomas introduces them to Elizabeth. There's no pride or prejudice here - Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth feel an instant attraction to each other that both are determined to ignore.
In addition, the reader learns early on that Thomas has a deep secret he's only shared with George, and he makes an outrageous request of his cousin, who's also his closest friend. Elizabeth slowly becomes more discontented with her marriage and realizes she still doesn't know her husband well. Although Thomas treats her kindly and with respect, they develop a pattern of living separate lives within the same household except during social outings, which happen only infrequently once they move from the London townhouse to Worthstone, his estate in Derbyshire. Fortunately, there are frequent visits back and forth with the Darcys at Pemberley, and Elizabeth becomes close friends with Georgiana, Fitzwilliam and their father. The "forbidden fruit" aspect of Darcy's relationship with Elizabeth creates most of the angst-y tension.
Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam's character is the one that breaks the mold - he's the black sheep of the Fitzwilliam family. It's actually his older brother, Viscount Carlisle, who the Darcys are closest to. Another dark character is James Osborne, Thomas's nephew and heir.
Mr. Wickham does put in an appearance, but he is exposed and disappears fairly early in the story. Lady Catherine also gets just one scene (though it's memorable and quite satisfying). Caroline Bingley, as expected, is a nasty piece of work. Interestingly, Mr. Bingley only comes into the tale as her spineless brother; he never even gets a shot at Jane Bennet here.
There is a good bit of VERY Mature Content, with intimate scenes (four or five) that each go into more explicit sexual detail than I usually see in JAFF. I think there's more of it than necessary, but it's beautifully depicted and I know interest in such content is a matter of personal taste. This book also includes some controversial adult subjects, which it handles with sensitivity.
I don't think the storyline is for everyone, but it surely is an engrossing page-turner for the rest of us.
This is a beautifully written, angst-filled variation. It really pushes the boundaries of a Pride and Prejudice story. Most of the characters are consistent with Jane Austen's (with a notable exception), but their circumstances are dramatically changed and I feel their reactions are what we might reasonably expect under these conditions.
Things begin much earlier than in Austen's novel, when Elizabeth Bennet is only seventeen years old; ages of the other characters are similarly younger. She catches the eye of the considerably older Thomas Osborne, the Duke of Leeds, who, to her astonishment, proposes marriage very soon after they meet. His offer includes providing handsome dowries for each of her sisters when they reach the appropriate age and the small estate he owns in the Meryton area, which will be available for her mother and unmarried sisters when Mr. Bennet dies. After carefully considering his offer and her father's advice, Elizabeth becomes the Duchess of Leeds (even though she doesn't love him and he's made no such declaration to her) for the sake of her family. She's further confused about his reason for marrying her when he doesn't consummate their marriage.
London is agog at the duke's imprudent marriage, and everyone is eager to meet the young upstart from nowhere who somehow snared the perpetual bachelor. The duke's cousin, George Darcy (who's still alive), goes to a private ball along with his son that the newlyweds are also attending, and Thomas introduces them to Elizabeth. There's no pride or prejudice here - Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth feel an instant attraction to each other that both are determined to ignore.
In addition, the reader learns early on that Thomas has a deep secret he's only shared with George, and he makes an outrageous request of his cousin, who's also his closest friend. Elizabeth slowly becomes more discontented with her marriage and realizes she still doesn't know her husband well. Although Thomas treats her kindly and with respect, they develop a pattern of living separate lives within the same household except during social outings, which happen only infrequently once they move from the London townhouse to Worthstone, his estate in Derbyshire. Fortunately, there are frequent visits back and forth with the Darcys at Pemberley, and Elizabeth becomes close friends with Georgiana, Fitzwilliam and their father. The "forbidden fruit" aspect of Darcy's relationship with Elizabeth creates most of the angst-y tension.
Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam's character is the one that breaks the mold - he's the black sheep of the Fitzwilliam family. It's actually his older brother, Viscount Carlisle, who the Darcys are closest to. Another dark character is James Osborne, Thomas's nephew and heir.
Mr. Wickham does put in an appearance, but he is exposed and disappears fairly early in the story. Lady Catherine also gets just one scene (though it's memorable and quite satisfying). Caroline Bingley, as expected, is a nasty piece of work. Interestingly, Mr. Bingley only comes into the tale as her spineless brother; he never even gets a shot at Jane Bennet here.
There is a good bit of VERY Mature Content, with intimate scenes (four or five) that each go into more explicit sexual detail than I usually see in JAFF. I think there's more of it than necessary, but it's beautifully depicted and I know interest in such content is a matter of personal taste. This book also includes some controversial adult subjects, which it handles with sensitivity.
I don't think the storyline is for everyone, but it surely is an engrossing page-turner for the rest of us.
April 10, 2020
This is a P&P re-imagining that goes wildly off canon from the start. Now that doesn't bother me because I love re-imagining. But for the P&P purist who refuses to consider a world where Lizzy & Darcy don't marry first or Jane doesn't marry Bingley you should skip this one.
In this book 17 year old Lizzy Bennet meets the elderly Duke of Leeds in Meryton and the Duke is immediately taken with her. And soon Lizzy is a Duchess. And she meets her new cousins, Fitzwilliam & George Darcy (Sr) and they are quickly friends.
Lizzy's marriage is not what she expected and her husband desperately needs a heir to prevent his ne'er do well nephew James from inheriting the Dukedom. And the Duke has a plan.
This book is neither clean nor chaste with several detailed sex scenes. But that's no my reason for the low rating.
I have a pet peeve. That is when a author is brave enough to take a risk really turning P&P on it's ear and then uses details from canon as speculation from the characters. In this case there are; depending upon your perspective, 2 - 4 of these tidbits. None of them add anything to the story and 2 are full out ridiculous.
I was also disappointed with the use of the Bingleys in the story. There was really no point of it and Caroline was just ridiculous. She had no reason to be jealous of Lizzy and should have; based on her character, been super obsequious.
I was recently in a debate with another reader about Mr. Bennet's habits. Well this Mr. Bennet is pretty freaking loathsome and ridiculously lazy.
In this book 17 year old Lizzy Bennet meets the elderly Duke of Leeds in Meryton and the Duke is immediately taken with her. And soon Lizzy is a Duchess. And she meets her new cousins, Fitzwilliam & George Darcy (Sr) and they are quickly friends.
Lizzy's marriage is not what she expected and her husband desperately needs a heir to prevent his ne'er do well nephew James from inheriting the Dukedom. And the Duke has a plan.
This book is neither clean nor chaste with several detailed sex scenes. But that's no my reason for the low rating.
I have a pet peeve. That is when a author is brave enough to take a risk really turning P&P on it's ear and then uses details from canon as speculation from the characters. In this case there are; depending upon your perspective, 2 - 4 of these tidbits. None of them add anything to the story and 2 are full out ridiculous.
I was also disappointed with the use of the Bingleys in the story. There was really no point of it and Caroline was just ridiculous. She had no reason to be jealous of Lizzy and should have; based on her character, been super obsequious.
I was recently in a debate with another reader about Mr. Bennet's habits. Well this Mr. Bennet is pretty freaking loathsome and ridiculously lazy.
December 8, 2025
Didn’t see that coming!
When I read the prologue to Undoing several weeks ago on one of the blogs, there was a lot of speculation as to the identity of the Duke. Upon learning more about him, I found myself struggling. Struggling in the same manner as the author herself, who in her Acknowledgements says, “Thomas is a tricky character. His actions are despicable, but I wanted him to remain a sympathetic character, which I struggled with and probably why I shied away from finishing this five years ago. Despite Thomas’s trickery and deceit, I hope you still care for him.” I couldn’t agree more, and Leslie Diamond gets her hope fulfilled with this reader because I do find I cared for him. One thing I still struggle with however, is her portrayal of Colonel Fitzwilliam. That made me want to say, Nooooo! Sighhhh...
I loved the story of ODC, and that they eventually get their HEA. The epilogue will make you cry. In fact, there were many emotional moments in this book that made me weep. This story might not be everyone’s cup of tea, but it’s a well-written story that touches on a taboo subject in Regency era that some still refuse to acknowledge in our time.
Second Read —October 21, 2020 - read along with the audiobook. Excellent narration.
Third Read - November 11-12, 2021 Audiobook
I love this story more each time I read/listen to it. The Epilogue requires more than one tissue.
November 14-15, 2022 - Audiobook
This book never gets old. I just love it! I find it a bit ironic I was moved to listen again almost a year later to the day of the last time.
January 17, 2024 - Audiobook
So I started an 'annual' (as in annual read or listen) GR shelf and this book is definitely on it.
When I read the prologue to Undoing several weeks ago on one of the blogs, there was a lot of speculation as to the identity of the Duke. Upon learning more about him, I found myself struggling. Struggling in the same manner as the author herself, who in her Acknowledgements says, “Thomas is a tricky character. His actions are despicable, but I wanted him to remain a sympathetic character, which I struggled with and probably why I shied away from finishing this five years ago. Despite Thomas’s trickery and deceit, I hope you still care for him.” I couldn’t agree more, and Leslie Diamond gets her hope fulfilled with this reader because I do find I cared for him. One thing I still struggle with however, is her portrayal of Colonel Fitzwilliam. That made me want to say, Nooooo! Sighhhh...
I loved the story of ODC, and that they eventually get their HEA. The epilogue will make you cry. In fact, there were many emotional moments in this book that made me weep. This story might not be everyone’s cup of tea, but it’s a well-written story that touches on a taboo subject in Regency era that some still refuse to acknowledge in our time.
Second Read —October 21, 2020 - read along with the audiobook. Excellent narration.
Third Read - November 11-12, 2021 Audiobook
I love this story more each time I read/listen to it. The Epilogue requires more than one tissue.
November 14-15, 2022 - Audiobook
This book never gets old. I just love it! I find it a bit ironic I was moved to listen again almost a year later to the day of the last time.
January 17, 2024 - Audiobook
So I started an 'annual' (as in annual read or listen) GR shelf and this book is definitely on it.
April 1, 2020
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
I am undone...
As the book description states, Elizabeth, at seventeen marries the Duke of Leeds. What follows is a journey that takes our beloved characters through a torturous personal journey that is difficult, but at the same time, realistic. This is a 'what if' that will test Elizabeth and Darcy as never before. A test of their principles, their honour and their pride. Will it be their 'undoing'?
"It could be a blessing your feelings do not run deeper. You will not suffer for it. You would have a husband worthy of your respect instead of one you revile." (quote from the book)
Though Mr. Bennet tells Elizabeth that it is her decision, he knows his daughter too well and Mrs. Bennet's temperament even more so, to think she will not accept the Duke's marriage proposal. What he and others do not know, especially, Elizabeth, is why he chose her.
"He might not be pushing as Lady Catherine was, yet why did he not consider that his deceptions would be just as damaging." (quote from the book)
With this variation, Mr. George Darcy is still alive. So when the Darcy's first meet Elizabeth, they are completely charmed. When Darcy first espies Elizabeth, her 'fine eyes' capture him. It is here, where an invisible thread of energy immediately connects them. And that is just the beginning...
"How did one keep themselves under such strict regulation?" (quote from the book)
For some, this will not be an easy read. My reactions and emotions ran the gamut. But Ms. Diamond has had this book percolating for many years, as she explains at the end. It is one that is bold as well as brave. Yes, it is for mature audiences, but still tastefully done. Again, another variation that has taken a nugget from history and literally ran with it.
There was much that I loved...Elizabeth and Darcy most of all. Their love explodes off the pages. For the secondary characters, Jane is a favourite. Her goodness and ability to see the best in others is still there, but with more common sense and compassion. There are changes, or should I say variations, to certain characters. I did love Lord Matlock's heir very much.
"We are two lost souls - lost to each other." (quote from the book)
The villains were a piece of work. However, I was always waiting for the other shoe to drop. It was more of quiet step. This was a missed opportunity, in my opinion, but it was not the path Ms. Diamond chose to take. Lady Catherine has her share of the conversation and Wickham was a gnat that needed to be squashed. Regardless, I still loved this story and by the end I was a watering pot.
January 16, 2023
Reading the scenes when Thomas machinates the ultimate manipulation between ODC were difficult. I get why the author did it, but any man taking choice away from a woman about her own body does not sit well with me, especially considering today's current climate.
It was well written and a different variation for sure. At first, I promised myself I would never reread it. Now I have both a paperback and the audiobook.
It is an emotional story, following Elizabeth's journey and Darcy's confusion is just as difficult to witness. A good read though, if you brace yourself for emotional angst first.
It was well written and a different variation for sure. At first, I promised myself I would never reread it. Now I have both a paperback and the audiobook.
It is an emotional story, following Elizabeth's journey and Darcy's confusion is just as difficult to witness. A good read though, if you brace yourself for emotional angst first.
June 6, 2021
What If Mr. Darcy Fell in Love with his Cousin’s Wife?
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Review Copy from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation, Mature Audiences
TIME FRAME: Outside of Canon – begins with Elizabeth at the age of 17, Darcy at the age of 25
PREMISE: A younger Elizabeth gives up her dream of marrying for love and marries a duke to provide a better future for her family. And when her marriage turns into something she never expected it to be, she wonders what hope of happiness her future can hold for her…
WHAT I LOVED:
- So Audacious! So Inventive: L.L. Diamond is well-known for her daring premises and bold character deviations, and in this story she crafts together a most audacious and inventive premise – one I have never seen before! And I can’t really say any more about it because… spoilers! But I will say that there are desperate circumstances, scandalous schemes, and untenable situations. Readers should be prepared for some shocking and dramatic events!
- New Obstacles: There are a quite a few different obstacles for our characters to deal with other than their own prides and prejudices in this story. Elizabeth trapped in an unhappy marriage, Darcy in love with someone who is unavailable, detrimental secrets, and the quandary of morals when unprecedented situations are forced upon you. Exploring such unique conflicts with these characters was fascinating and unexpected to say the least!
- Mr. Darcy Senior: I love that Mr. Darcy senior was alive this variation and I absolutely adored and admired him as a character! He was everything I would want for Fitzwilliam and I immediately loved him for his loving support as a father and his compassionate understanding and wise council as cousin. And what he did for his tenants was so moving and memorable!
- Abiding Friendships: The tentative friendship that develops between Darcy and Elizabeth is simply beautiful and all kinds of heartwarming to witness. I loved how they cared for each other and the ways they would recognize each others’ feelings and needs. My heart glowed at all the quiet and subtextual moments where their actions revealed their hearts. In addition, I quite loved the other beautiful relationships displayed in this story – between Darcy and his cousin Lord Carlisle, Mr. Darcy Senior and the duke, Elizabeth and Georgiana, and Elizabeth and Jane.
- Lalande, Bishop, and Colin: I really enjoyed seeing these upper servants and the helpful roles they played in this story. Their relationships with their masters and mistresses was equally lovely and gratifying, especially between the duke and his valet, Colin.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Small Quibbles: While this story has ratcheted up the drama in many ways with its impossible situations and dangers, I did feel there were maybe some missed opportunities to create an even more spectacularly consuming tale. Such as Darcy and Elizabeth experiencing more turmoil and internal struggle with certain events before they yielded to acceptance and the villains coming onto the scene earlier and causing a bigger impact than they did.
NOTE: Some intimate and sensual scenes take place in this story, recommended for Mature Audiences.
CONCLUSION:
With Undoing, L.L. Diamond once again creates an impressively daring and imaginative Pride and Prejudice tale that will delight readers with its creativity, clever character alterations, and compelling romance. I highly recommend this variation to readers who enjoy outside-of-canon stories and love seeing these characters in surprising and dramatic situations!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Review Copy from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation, Mature Audiences
TIME FRAME: Outside of Canon – begins with Elizabeth at the age of 17, Darcy at the age of 25
PREMISE: A younger Elizabeth gives up her dream of marrying for love and marries a duke to provide a better future for her family. And when her marriage turns into something she never expected it to be, she wonders what hope of happiness her future can hold for her…
WHAT I LOVED:
- So Audacious! So Inventive: L.L. Diamond is well-known for her daring premises and bold character deviations, and in this story she crafts together a most audacious and inventive premise – one I have never seen before! And I can’t really say any more about it because… spoilers! But I will say that there are desperate circumstances, scandalous schemes, and untenable situations. Readers should be prepared for some shocking and dramatic events!
- New Obstacles: There are a quite a few different obstacles for our characters to deal with other than their own prides and prejudices in this story. Elizabeth trapped in an unhappy marriage, Darcy in love with someone who is unavailable, detrimental secrets, and the quandary of morals when unprecedented situations are forced upon you. Exploring such unique conflicts with these characters was fascinating and unexpected to say the least!
- Mr. Darcy Senior: I love that Mr. Darcy senior was alive this variation and I absolutely adored and admired him as a character! He was everything I would want for Fitzwilliam and I immediately loved him for his loving support as a father and his compassionate understanding and wise council as cousin. And what he did for his tenants was so moving and memorable!
- Abiding Friendships: The tentative friendship that develops between Darcy and Elizabeth is simply beautiful and all kinds of heartwarming to witness. I loved how they cared for each other and the ways they would recognize each others’ feelings and needs. My heart glowed at all the quiet and subtextual moments where their actions revealed their hearts. In addition, I quite loved the other beautiful relationships displayed in this story – between Darcy and his cousin Lord Carlisle, Mr. Darcy Senior and the duke, Elizabeth and Georgiana, and Elizabeth and Jane.
- Lalande, Bishop, and Colin: I really enjoyed seeing these upper servants and the helpful roles they played in this story. Their relationships with their masters and mistresses was equally lovely and gratifying, especially between the duke and his valet, Colin.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Small Quibbles: While this story has ratcheted up the drama in many ways with its impossible situations and dangers, I did feel there were maybe some missed opportunities to create an even more spectacularly consuming tale. Such as Darcy and Elizabeth experiencing more turmoil and internal struggle with certain events before they yielded to acceptance and the villains coming onto the scene earlier and causing a bigger impact than they did.
NOTE: Some intimate and sensual scenes take place in this story, recommended for Mature Audiences.
CONCLUSION:
With Undoing, L.L. Diamond once again creates an impressively daring and imaginative Pride and Prejudice tale that will delight readers with its creativity, clever character alterations, and compelling romance. I highly recommend this variation to readers who enjoy outside-of-canon stories and love seeing these characters in surprising and dramatic situations!
Austenesque Reviews
January 28, 2025
L.L. Diamond's writing continues to excel at bringing us beautiful stories that are unique and wonderfully well-written. She hasn't slowed down, she just gets better and better especially in her full length novels. Although HOW she continues to surpass herself after Rain and Retribution or Unwavering Trust, I don't know. All of her historical variations are favorite rereads and re-listens. But you should seek out her contemporaries too!
Undoing is a hard book to review without spoilers. Start with the blurb on Amazon, but don't read too many reviews. There are some above I always go to. But I'm not spoiling anything. The love story is quite warm so be warned if that is a problem. The difficulties that face our hero and heroine are heartbreaking. They are forced to admire each other from afar with no hope of ever sharing their love, keeping it to themselves and from each other at first. You will love Fitzwilliam Darcy's father George, who is alive in this version. I eventually felt the Duke's pain in this whole secret thing. Darcy's cousins switch places making Richard Fitzwilliams one of the bad guys and his older brother the Heir the good guy, and Darcy's backup man. I adored Jane in this story. This is one time her 'only seeing the good' came in really handy on Elizabeth's behalf. I had a lump in my throat at Lizzy's fear of Jane learning the 'secrets' going on in her life. Then again, Jane really showed a remarkable backbone here too. I wanted so badly to turn Lydia over my knee and disable her from sitting down for about a week! And Mrs. Bennet. She is really portrayed at her worst in this story.
Some people thought the ending was anticlimactic. I was glad that last 'action scene' was over in a hurry, because I am so tired of kidnappings (none here) tortuous threats to our heroine (inferred but not happening in reality) or one of our beloved characters getting gravely wounded. But, if I were to ask for anything else it would've been a longer HEA. The epilogue was a 3 hankie gem. Highly recommended.
Undoing is a hard book to review without spoilers. Start with the blurb on Amazon, but don't read too many reviews. There are some above I always go to. But I'm not spoiling anything. The love story is quite warm so be warned if that is a problem. The difficulties that face our hero and heroine are heartbreaking. They are forced to admire each other from afar with no hope of ever sharing their love, keeping it to themselves and from each other at first. You will love Fitzwilliam Darcy's father George, who is alive in this version. I eventually felt the Duke's pain in this whole secret thing. Darcy's cousins switch places making Richard Fitzwilliams one of the bad guys and his older brother the Heir the good guy, and Darcy's backup man. I adored Jane in this story. This is one time her 'only seeing the good' came in really handy on Elizabeth's behalf. I had a lump in my throat at Lizzy's fear of Jane learning the 'secrets' going on in her life. Then again, Jane really showed a remarkable backbone here too. I wanted so badly to turn Lydia over my knee and disable her from sitting down for about a week! And Mrs. Bennet. She is really portrayed at her worst in this story.
Some people thought the ending was anticlimactic. I was glad that last 'action scene' was over in a hurry, because I am so tired of kidnappings (none here) tortuous threats to our heroine (inferred but not happening in reality) or one of our beloved characters getting gravely wounded. But, if I were to ask for anything else it would've been a longer HEA. The epilogue was a 3 hankie gem. Highly recommended.
May 13, 2021
Lizzy marries a Duke
I enjoyed almost everything about the story. There were a few places though where Lizzy or Darcy didn’t act consistent with how they acted in most of the story. Through me out of the story.
But the story is so original and generally interesting to read so I recommend it.
I enjoyed almost everything about the story. There were a few places though where Lizzy or Darcy didn’t act consistent with how they acted in most of the story. Through me out of the story.
But the story is so original and generally interesting to read so I recommend it.
April 2, 2020
4.5 rounded up to 5
Review written on https://wp.me/p5WUy1-1fn
I do apologise but I need to start with one of my SPOILERS!
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Undoing has a happy ending 😉
However, even as I knew this, it was a bit of a stressing reading. Not really angsty but stressing. There was no way I could see how the HEA was going to happen because when it seemed that it was there, zas! another problem that just delayed the inevitable… happy Ever After.
Anyway, let me tell you my opinion about the book: it is a delightful read. However, I need to point out that there are scenes with adult content, I do not mind them but I know there are people who do not like them.
Now… where was I? Yes, a happy ending. How difficult is to get to that point? Very.
Elizabeth marries a man who does not love her and who she does not love either but at least he is not a mean husband but, he hides a huge secret from her. She does her role, she is a Duchess and she behaves properly among the ton but she does not have a husband-wife relationship. He is not able to get her pregnant and she is alone. However, his family has liked her very much, both sides of the family and especially the Darcy branch: Georgiana Darcy and the old Mr. Darcy and his son Fitzwilliam Darcy. However, Fitzwilliam Darcy is too attracted to her and he cannot avoid being near her even if it is not proper. Does she return her feelings? Who cares? Maybe but he cannot try anything. But what happens when somebody else takes the decision for you and forces situations against your will? Well, then you may be lost. However, eventually, with a lot of suffering and time it can be the best possible outcome.
I am aware that I have not told you much on that big paragraph but I cannot spoil the story.
However, if you want to fret about a happy ending, if you still want to read about a headstrong Elizabeth, about a passionate Darcy and a out-of-character Colonel Fitzwilliam (surprising but understandable when Leslie explains it), this is your book. You will like Jane and her husband… nope, no Bingley (oops sorry for the spoiler 😉 )
Review written on https://wp.me/p5WUy1-1fn
I do apologise but I need to start with one of my SPOILERS!
.
.
.
Undoing has a happy ending 😉
However, even as I knew this, it was a bit of a stressing reading. Not really angsty but stressing. There was no way I could see how the HEA was going to happen because when it seemed that it was there, zas! another problem that just delayed the inevitable… happy Ever After.
Anyway, let me tell you my opinion about the book: it is a delightful read. However, I need to point out that there are scenes with adult content, I do not mind them but I know there are people who do not like them.
Now… where was I? Yes, a happy ending. How difficult is to get to that point? Very.
Elizabeth marries a man who does not love her and who she does not love either but at least he is not a mean husband but, he hides a huge secret from her. She does her role, she is a Duchess and she behaves properly among the ton but she does not have a husband-wife relationship. He is not able to get her pregnant and she is alone. However, his family has liked her very much, both sides of the family and especially the Darcy branch: Georgiana Darcy and the old Mr. Darcy and his son Fitzwilliam Darcy. However, Fitzwilliam Darcy is too attracted to her and he cannot avoid being near her even if it is not proper. Does she return her feelings? Who cares? Maybe but he cannot try anything. But what happens when somebody else takes the decision for you and forces situations against your will? Well, then you may be lost. However, eventually, with a lot of suffering and time it can be the best possible outcome.
I am aware that I have not told you much on that big paragraph but I cannot spoil the story.
However, if you want to fret about a happy ending, if you still want to read about a headstrong Elizabeth, about a passionate Darcy and a out-of-character Colonel Fitzwilliam (surprising but understandable when Leslie explains it), this is your book. You will like Jane and her husband… nope, no Bingley (oops sorry for the spoiler 😉 )
May 9, 2021
Wow! You should only start this if you have 5 or 6 hours to read it in one go because it is not possible to put it down! It is so full of angst and drama but I just loved it.
Elizabeth narries the Duke of Leeds when she is 17, not realising that this us not hoping yo be a true marriage. The Duke needs an heir but is not able to gave a secual relationship with Elizabeth for reasons that are central to the plot so I won't spoil it!! So he looks for someone who will have an affair with Lizzy but his first choice is far too honourable to do such a thing... Fitzwilliam Darcy falls for Lizzy straight away and they become firm friends before realising they love each other... this is going to get messy!! It gets really messy, its agony... but its amazing. This is a tiny fraction of the plot. Its too give to give anything else away!
I didn't want this book to end. I really liked this Darcy and Elizabeth. The premise is so original. Miss Bingley is awful and the Colonel is a scoundrel. There are bad guys and girls aplenty but fortunately lots of good guts and girls too.
Not for those who like a good Colonel. Bingley doesn't feature much either. There is no Wickham/Lydia situation as everyone is much younger in this book. Its a great read!
Elizabeth narries the Duke of Leeds when she is 17, not realising that this us not hoping yo be a true marriage. The Duke needs an heir but is not able to gave a secual relationship with Elizabeth for reasons that are central to the plot so I won't spoil it!! So he looks for someone who will have an affair with Lizzy but his first choice is far too honourable to do such a thing... Fitzwilliam Darcy falls for Lizzy straight away and they become firm friends before realising they love each other... this is going to get messy!! It gets really messy, its agony... but its amazing. This is a tiny fraction of the plot. Its too give to give anything else away!
I didn't want this book to end. I really liked this Darcy and Elizabeth. The premise is so original. Miss Bingley is awful and the Colonel is a scoundrel. There are bad guys and girls aplenty but fortunately lots of good guts and girls too.
Not for those who like a good Colonel. Bingley doesn't feature much either. There is no Wickham/Lydia situation as everyone is much younger in this book. Its a great read!
January 27, 2021
This Pride and Prejudice variation contains all my favorite things - strong characters, lots of emotion, and a wonderful story line. There are so many twists, turns, discoveries, evil people, society expectations, etc. that I can't say much more without spoilers. The ending was amazing and required multiple tissues!
June 5, 2020
Solid story, executed well.
This review will contain spoilers.
I have shied away from this author, only because I thought she wrote for the sweet tea pearl clutchers. Reading the reviews before hand it was very easy to guess at the plot, so I won’t toy with it:
Lizzy enters a marriage of convenience with a duke who is gay and in a relationship with a man. The duke basically sets up Lizzy and Fitzwilliam to have an affair. And for this, reviewers think the story is practically a revolution and that the author is brave. While I think that assessment is overly dramatic, I am grateful it was written. To assume things like this did not happen would be naive at best, at worst a denial of the reality that so many lived. Of course this only gives us a window on what may have happened to the most privileged of all in Regency society, should they happen to be gay. Actually, I think the only plot point that may strain my suspension of disbelief is that a duke would marry a 17 year old Lizzy!
I recommend the book as a solid offering in the genre. Aside from my personal distaste for the word “unawares,” I wasn’t shocked any horrible grammar or spelling problems. There is heat between Darcy and Lizzy, but the quality of the erotic elements is pretty unimaginative and bland. The Duke’s relationship with his partner is only sketched vaguely, and we don’t know much about him at all, so homophobic people don’t have to worry this is some raucous gay romp through the Regency. No orgies or wild sex parties with ODC. This is an interesting story, but the angst level is never challenging. I will take a look at other books by this author.
This review will contain spoilers.
I have shied away from this author, only because I thought she wrote for the sweet tea pearl clutchers. Reading the reviews before hand it was very easy to guess at the plot, so I won’t toy with it:
Lizzy enters a marriage of convenience with a duke who is gay and in a relationship with a man. The duke basically sets up Lizzy and Fitzwilliam to have an affair. And for this, reviewers think the story is practically a revolution and that the author is brave. While I think that assessment is overly dramatic, I am grateful it was written. To assume things like this did not happen would be naive at best, at worst a denial of the reality that so many lived. Of course this only gives us a window on what may have happened to the most privileged of all in Regency society, should they happen to be gay. Actually, I think the only plot point that may strain my suspension of disbelief is that a duke would marry a 17 year old Lizzy!
I recommend the book as a solid offering in the genre. Aside from my personal distaste for the word “unawares,” I wasn’t shocked any horrible grammar or spelling problems. There is heat between Darcy and Lizzy, but the quality of the erotic elements is pretty unimaginative and bland. The Duke’s relationship with his partner is only sketched vaguely, and we don’t know much about him at all, so homophobic people don’t have to worry this is some raucous gay romp through the Regency. No orgies or wild sex parties with ODC. This is an interesting story, but the angst level is never challenging. I will take a look at other books by this author.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 3, 2020
I really did not enjoy this book. I have read others from this author that I did like, but this one was a struggle to even get through. Fortunately for the author, many people found this book much more appealing.
First of all, even though I don't consider myself to be a prude, I do have morality issues with this book. If someone drops you off at a liquor store where they are offering free booze, it doesn't remove your personal accountability or make them responsible if you get drunk and behave badly, which is the basis in this book for us to justify adulterous relationships and be okay with dishonorable behavior from characters that we are drawn to largely because of their integrity and honorable characters. This kind of behavior I expect from Lydia, Wickham or a number of other characters, and while it doesn't make it acceptable behavior, it fits their character and I don't bat an eye at reading it. I don't like to see my favorite literary characters robbed and stripped of the their respectability and the very things that make me love them in the first place.
Secondly- Elizabeth. Ugh, I did not like her in this book. She often came off high and mighty and seemed to have a very high opinion of herself. I didn't see her usual humor and personality that Austen created. She wasn't a character that I enjoyed or respected. Very disappointing.
First of all, even though I don't consider myself to be a prude, I do have morality issues with this book. If someone drops you off at a liquor store where they are offering free booze, it doesn't remove your personal accountability or make them responsible if you get drunk and behave badly, which is the basis in this book for us to justify adulterous relationships and be okay with dishonorable behavior from characters that we are drawn to largely because of their integrity and honorable characters. This kind of behavior I expect from Lydia, Wickham or a number of other characters, and while it doesn't make it acceptable behavior, it fits their character and I don't bat an eye at reading it. I don't like to see my favorite literary characters robbed and stripped of the their respectability and the very things that make me love them in the first place.
Secondly- Elizabeth. Ugh, I did not like her in this book. She often came off high and mighty and seemed to have a very high opinion of herself. I didn't see her usual humor and personality that Austen created. She wasn't a character that I enjoyed or respected. Very disappointing.
December 27, 2020
Unputdownable!
I was glued to the pages from start to finish. This was a highly engaging, unique, entertaining and steamy twist to Pride and Prejudice.
Entering a few years before canon, Elizabeth married a duke who, although likeable as a character, had a nefarious plot in mind that Elizabeth neither was informed about nor condoned. The duke did not shy away from schemes to reach his purpose, putting our dear couple in a precarious situation.
Loved the way both Darcy and Elizabeth were portrayed in this book and the epilogue brought tears to my eyes. Loved it!
I heartily recommend this book!
Rated: Mature audience due to sexual content.
Jolebokaflod 2020, JAFF20-279
I was glued to the pages from start to finish. This was a highly engaging, unique, entertaining and steamy twist to Pride and Prejudice.
Entering a few years before canon, Elizabeth married a duke who, although likeable as a character, had a nefarious plot in mind that Elizabeth neither was informed about nor condoned. The duke did not shy away from schemes to reach his purpose, putting our dear couple in a precarious situation.
Loved the way both Darcy and Elizabeth were portrayed in this book and the epilogue brought tears to my eyes. Loved it!
I heartily recommend this book!
Rated: Mature audience due to sexual content.
Jolebokaflod 2020, JAFF20-279
April 9, 2020
Avid Reader
An amazing book where Elizabeth married a Duke who was almost 60 and required an heir. Only duty to her sisters allowed Elizabeth to sacrifice her happiness. Cupid 's arrow struck and knocked them both off their feet! Unfortunately, Elizabeth 's husband was Darcy 's cousin! Their kg trials were many, but they had their HEA!
An amazing book where Elizabeth married a Duke who was almost 60 and required an heir. Only duty to her sisters allowed Elizabeth to sacrifice her happiness. Cupid 's arrow struck and knocked them both off their feet! Unfortunately, Elizabeth 's husband was Darcy 's cousin! Their kg trials were many, but they had their HEA!
April 11, 2020
This was such a great book. I will definitely be reading it again in the future.
June 6, 2020
I have mixed feelings about this book... the writing is good and I understand the plot. As a re-imagining it definitely moves away from cannon and is not for Austen purists.
Darcy and Elizabeth HEA (happy ever after) comes at the expense of my morals and something I truly believe they would never do even when they were tricked into it at the beginning thus my mixed feelings about the novel.
I understand why it happened but just can’t get over it. I’m disappointed in Colonel Fitzwilliam in this story. His existence really doesn’t play to much of an issue except at the beginning.
The Bingley were part of the story but did not have a major emphasis except for Caroline being annoying and Bingley without a spine to stand up to his sister.
I did love Colonel Fitzwilliam’s brother, Viscount Carlisle and Georgiana. I do like having Darcy senior around and him acknowledging Wickham for what he truly is.
Darcy and Elizabeth HEA (happy ever after) comes at the expense of my morals and something I truly believe they would never do even when they were tricked into it at the beginning thus my mixed feelings about the novel.
I understand why it happened but just can’t get over it. I’m disappointed in Colonel Fitzwilliam in this story. His existence really doesn’t play to much of an issue except at the beginning.
The Bingley were part of the story but did not have a major emphasis except for Caroline being annoying and Bingley without a spine to stand up to his sister.
I did love Colonel Fitzwilliam’s brother, Viscount Carlisle and Georgiana. I do like having Darcy senior around and him acknowledging Wickham for what he truly is.
March 20, 2021
Over the last few months I’ve been on a Jane Austen binge including Fan Fiction. Other than Austen’s original work this is the first 5 stars I’ve given out. It’s off cannon. The villains are familiar and also some surprises.
Darcy and Elizabeth are well fleshed out. The duke does some reprehensible things but you may find some sympathy for him. There is angst, tenderness and some comeuppance. It was also pretty well edited. I have found that a lot of the fan fiction seems to be slapped together as far spelling and grammar but this was well done. I enjoyed the read and in the end that is the most important consideration.
Darcy and Elizabeth are well fleshed out. The duke does some reprehensible things but you may find some sympathy for him. There is angst, tenderness and some comeuppance. It was also pretty well edited. I have found that a lot of the fan fiction seems to be slapped together as far spelling and grammar but this was well done. I enjoyed the read and in the end that is the most important consideration.
November 20, 2020
Enjoyed it. Interesting premiss. Don't read epilogue, it will have you crying in the club. Rule of thumb, always skip epilogues.
April 24, 2020
Undoing my tear ducts
I think over the past 3 months I’ve read about 40 variations of pride and prejudice and some run together and others stick out. I was fully entrenched in this one. This one actually had me teary eyed at several junctions and I adored the younger Elizabeth meeting a Darcy that still had his father. I also really liked Jane’s story in this. And any P&P variation that does not use Wickham and Lydia as major plot point always gets an A plus from me because frankly I’m just tired of both of them. I feel like I’ll be reading other P&P variations looking for some of the new characters that I fell in love with in this one. I felt the passage of time in this book and my heart was tightly wound to Elizabeth’s pain and Darcy’s pain. Beautifully done.
I think over the past 3 months I’ve read about 40 variations of pride and prejudice and some run together and others stick out. I was fully entrenched in this one. This one actually had me teary eyed at several junctions and I adored the younger Elizabeth meeting a Darcy that still had his father. I also really liked Jane’s story in this. And any P&P variation that does not use Wickham and Lydia as major plot point always gets an A plus from me because frankly I’m just tired of both of them. I feel like I’ll be reading other P&P variations looking for some of the new characters that I fell in love with in this one. I felt the passage of time in this book and my heart was tightly wound to Elizabeth’s pain and Darcy’s pain. Beautifully done.
January 13, 2022
Good story
Not something I could imagine Darcy and Elizabeth getting involved in, but an interesting concept, well written and enjoyable. Highly recommended!
Not something I could imagine Darcy and Elizabeth getting involved in, but an interesting concept, well written and enjoyable. Highly recommended!
January 11, 2022
Quite the rollercoaster ride
Another winner from L.L.Diamond. This is a very different variation with new villains as well as characters to love. This is a high angst and emotional read but definitely worth reading.
There are some beautiful relationships in this story. The relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy is there almost from the beginning although angst-filled. Another delightful relationship is that between Elizabeth and her personal maid. In an age when a woman’s life was restricted by the men around her I imagine this could have been a very important relationship and the author captures this perfectly.
There are some editing errors still remaining but it would be churlish to drop a star for them from such a beautiful book.
Another winner from L.L.Diamond. This is a very different variation with new villains as well as characters to love. This is a high angst and emotional read but definitely worth reading.
There are some beautiful relationships in this story. The relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy is there almost from the beginning although angst-filled. Another delightful relationship is that between Elizabeth and her personal maid. In an age when a woman’s life was restricted by the men around her I imagine this could have been a very important relationship and the author captures this perfectly.
There are some editing errors still remaining but it would be churlish to drop a star for them from such a beautiful book.
September 9, 2022
This was a very well written variation. I loved how it hit on a topic that isn't talked about from this time peroid (I don't want to give it away as it is a big part of the book). I loved Elizabeth and Darcy in this book and was intrigued by the Duke's actions.
This book had me sobbing during the epilogue, not that it was necessarily unhappy, but just a touch sad.
A must read if you like variations where things are quite different from the original.
This book had me sobbing during the epilogue, not that it was necessarily unhappy, but just a touch sad.
A must read if you like variations where things are quite different from the original.
April 10, 2020
Love love loved!
An original storyline, kept you interested throughout the story. I think the author did a good job of adding new characters so that you cannot predict where the story is headed since we normally make assumptions about the known characters based on Jane Austen’s P&P original story.
An original storyline, kept you interested throughout the story. I think the author did a good job of adding new characters so that you cannot predict where the story is headed since we normally make assumptions about the known characters based on Jane Austen’s P&P original story.
February 9, 2023
I loved this book. Surprising low on angst for all it’s subject matter, but an absolutely beautiful story! I was reluctant to read it based on the blurb, but now I could kick myself for having waited.
Oddly enough other reviewers described this book as being angst filled. So perhaps I should better explain. While there was plenty of anxiety to be had due to their affair- it mostly all worked out well & ended HEA. As opposed to other books I’ve read where everything that can & will go wrong does. We see pretty early on that this author has nothing truly nasty in store for ODC so I felt more relaxed reading it. I didn’t have to skim read to ensure myself of there general well being. What I’m trying to say is the biggest adversary they face is some distance & absence….. perhaps a few false scares. I fell like I’m not explaining this well, but at least it makes sense to me.
Oddly enough other reviewers described this book as being angst filled. So perhaps I should better explain. While there was plenty of anxiety to be had due to their affair- it mostly all worked out well & ended HEA. As opposed to other books I’ve read where everything that can & will go wrong does. We see pretty early on that this author has nothing truly nasty in store for ODC so I felt more relaxed reading it. I didn’t have to skim read to ensure myself of there general well being. What I’m trying to say is the biggest adversary they face is some distance & absence….. perhaps a few false scares. I fell like I’m not explaining this well, but at least it makes sense to me.
April 6, 2020
Soooooo so good! I'll admit, I'm not usually a fan of stories where E is married to someone else, I'm not sure why, they just never sit well with me, but this one is wonderful. The situation is so well orchestrated, that I really get why E married, and I get why her husband wanted her, and once all the cards are on the table it all makes so much sense. I love how this version makes D&E both so passionate and so noble at the same time. So deeply in love and so committed to their values. I re-read sections of this over and over again, and I'm sure I'll be back to re-read start to finish again as well.
April 29, 2020
This is my favorite novel written by Leslie Diamond. The plot holds the readers attention due to the depth of the writing and also the characters. In the beginning Elizabeth marries to help her sisters and not for the love she always wanted in a marriage. She eventually finds out why an older Duke wants to marry her and it breaks her heart.
With the help of the Duke and his sly ways, he plots for her happiness and she gets the love she always wanted. There are many twists and turns in the story, however, I won't spoil it for those who read my review. This story is full of love, compassion, a little mystery and a few secrets that kept my engrossed that I couldn't put the novel down.
My final thought for those of you who wish for a true love story, make sure you read, "Undoing." You won't regret it! I first read it on Kindle unlimited but then I couldn't go without having it, so I bought it today!
Thank you Leslie for a great read and look forward to another one from you as I have all of your novels mostly in Paperback but ran out of bookcases so now they are all on my Kindle.
With the help of the Duke and his sly ways, he plots for her happiness and she gets the love she always wanted. There are many twists and turns in the story, however, I won't spoil it for those who read my review. This story is full of love, compassion, a little mystery and a few secrets that kept my engrossed that I couldn't put the novel down.
My final thought for those of you who wish for a true love story, make sure you read, "Undoing." You won't regret it! I first read it on Kindle unlimited but then I couldn't go without having it, so I bought it today!
Thank you Leslie for a great read and look forward to another one from you as I have all of your novels mostly in Paperback but ran out of bookcases so now they are all on my Kindle.
April 3, 2020
What a story as Ll Diamond is one of my favourite authors I approached this story with high expectation. I am thrilled to say I was not disappointed. This is a very orginal take on ODC story which I thoroughly enjoyed. The worst bit about finishing a good is that it ends but on the up side I look forward to the next.
Do yourself a favour and read this one.
Do yourself a favour and read this one.
April 3, 2020
Wow!
I have always been a fan of this author. I expected this to be a good story, but I didn’t expect this. I loved it. It actually brought tears to my eyes. Will definitely be added to my read again pile !!
I have always been a fan of this author. I expected this to be a good story, but I didn’t expect this. I loved it. It actually brought tears to my eyes. Will definitely be added to my read again pile !!
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