February 2017 --
So, trying to prep myself to read the second in this series, I read this again. Yep. Read again. I really like this series. It has everything I love in an escapist read; great characters, interesting story, a length I can sink my teeth into, etc. I've read #3 and #4 too. The second book put me off a bit, but I decided to bite it and go in ... here I go!
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Overall Rating = 5 Stars
Book Cover / Book Blurb / Book Title = 5 / 4 / 4 = 4.5 Stars
Writer’s Voice = 5 Stars
Character / Secondary Character Development = 5 / 4 = 4.5 Stars
“Did I like” Hero / Heroine = 5 / 5 = 5 Stars
Story / Background Story Development = 5 / 4 = 4.5 Stars
“Did I like the Damned Thing” = 10 Stars
Ending = 4 Stars
Worth the Chili = 10 Stars -- [$0.99 on Amazon and Kindle Unlimited]
Smexy [HEAT] Rating = Mild to Steamy
362 pages
First sentence:
Once upon a time I lost everything.
Last sentence:
My fingers curled in Miller's firm grasp, and a billow of warm air bathed us both as we stepped outside.
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January 2017
I'm breaking my own rule. I'm going to adjust the original rating I gave this book in June 2014. I'm pretty proud of myself. I'm one of those people who makes a judgement and then rarely goes back on it. When I read this before, the flow was all off for me. Enough so that it interfered with anything good in character development and overall understanding. After reading reviews from several people I trust on this site, and their recommendations out to others, I thought I'd go back and see if I missed something.
All I can say is, the author edited again after release. My original read had this labeled as a "hot mess." Re-reading it .. I think this author is truly gifted. I'm modifying my original 2.5 Starred rating to 5 Stars. The story has everything you [I] want. There were great characters, intelligent plot, dimensions in the backstory, a cast of secondary characters that added rather than detracted from the main story. It was rich and robust. A really enjoyable read.
Don't discount this as a "another biker book from an author who can't put a legible paragraph together." This really is a rich story with interesting characters. She'll make you think South Dakota is an interesting place to experience. Please, give this one a shot. I don't think you'll be sorry.
Note: I've read books 3 and 4 now too. This is a favorite author and on my preorder and auto-buy list. I've found my first new author for 2017. Yay me!!
Top 3 things about this book:
1 -- The voice of the author. She writes an intelligent, interesting story with multi-dimensional characters.
2 -- The backdrop of the story has grit. These bikers are the real deal, but they aren't "in your face" about it, they just are. There isn't all the over the top drama and elements. I like that.
3 -- Destiny is a powerful thing. Some don't believe in it, but anyone who's lost someone they don't think they can live without and wonder why ... understand the role destiny plays in our lives. This author nails it.
Elements that could have been better for me:
1 -- The blurb and book cover really don't work for me. They don't do enough to pull a reader. Word of mouth pulls you and then the author grabs you with her talent. It sure isn't the routine marketing for this one.
2 -- This one was re-edited. I read it before the author revamped it. I wish I'd known that this had happened, I'd have been more inclined to give it another go.
3 -- Nothing really.
Happy Reading!
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Overall Rating = 5 Stars
Book Cover / Book Blurb / Book Title = 4 / 3 / 4 = 3.5 Stars
Writer’s Voice = 10 Stars
Character / Secondary Character Development = 5 / 5 = 5 Stars
“Did I like” Hero / Heroine = 5 / 4 = 4.5 Stars
Story / Background Story Development = 5 / 5 = 5 Stars
“Did I like the Damned Thing” = 10 Stars
Ending = 4 Stars
Worth the Chili = 5 Stars -- [$0.99 on Amazon]
Smexy [HEAT] Rating = Steamy
368 pages
First sentence: Once upon a time, I lost everything.
Last sentence: My fingers curled in Miller's firm grasp, and a billow of warm air bathed us both as we stepped outside.
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Old Review from June 2014:
06/28/2014 --
Overall Rating = 2.5 Stars
Book Cover / Book Blurb / Book Title = 3 / 3 / 4 = 3.5 Stars
Writer’s Voice = 2 Stars
Character Development = 3 Stars
Story Appreciation = 2 Stars
Ending =
Worth the Chili = 2 Stars -- [$2.99 on Amazon]
Smexy [HEAT] Rating = Moderate
384 pages
What a hot mess this one is. This is a debut book, so I forgave the over used of $10 adjectives noted in the first 15% of the book. I almost gave up, but thought it may turn out okay once the author settled down a bit. And it did for a little while. Then, she started throwing too much into the story.
We have bikers. We have a horrible accident that takes the life of our h's biker husband. We have a sick sister who used to be a a drugged out biker bitch until she took a fall for the MC and then turned her life around. Then we have the sexy, but broken H. We have two rival clubs battling over territory. The Russian mob. A tittie bar called the Tangle or was it Tinkle ...? Oh, well, this only takes us about 50% through the book and I was exhausted trying to keep up.
To top this off -- this is a debut book [mentioned before] and the author's skill pooped out about 30% in -- to this point, it was only 3 Stars and went downhill from there. I skimmed much of the last half to the end and it didn't get much better.
I gave a half point back because this is the authors first book. Saying this, I'm betting I won't read another.
Wish I had a BIG red stamp that said HOT MESS for this one. You may like this book just fine. Hope you do. Me? Not so much.
Happy Reading!