I loved the idea of these new Hollows books. As happy and sweet as the dream epilogue of Book 13 was, it was kinda silly that the Elves and Demons would get over a 5k year war so easily or that the undead would sit back and take the new power dynamic without a fight, or that society would just accept Demons so easily, or that the Demons wouldn't have culture shock and difficultly adapting.
So there is a lot of great ideas and story areas to explore, but the execution has been painfully disappointing. I'm sorry, but this has been one of the hardest books to finish reading outside of school reading lists.
Rachel is now utterly incompetent & needs Trent & his money to save her every other Chapter, and for no good reason other than Kim refuses to let Rachel evolve or grow beyond the aesthetic of Book 1's "sassy tough girl runner with a pain amulet and a splat gun", which ceased to be useful after book 3 when she came across any remotely competent Ley Line practitioner who just pops the sleep potion balls right in her face, which she repeatedly acknowledges in her inner monologues and routinely tosses the air pistol immediately when a fight starts, yet still puts more effort and text time reloading & preparing, than something useful,.. like learning & preparing the Stun Curse, or Healing Curses?!!?!
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I get that Kim wants to keep Rachel "grounded" & "vulnerable" for tension in storytelling, but the execution is just obvious Dais Ex-Machina contrivances that don't make sense after 13books of character growth. Especially when her foes are scaling up, but her competence is degrading, for no rational reason. It's not 'more exciting',. It's frustrating.
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The narrative excuse keeping Rachel from being able to teleport (Ley Line Jump) like the rest of the demons, made sense at the beginning of American Demon when the only demon who knew how to shift aura shells was gone (Newt). But once Hodin showed her how (as a valid tool to fight the Baku), why didn't she immediately suggest they use that exact same spell on Bis. Just shift his outer shells to match Rachels, problem solved.
No one explains why this isn't an option or won't work on a Gargoyle, she doesn't even think of this as an option in her inner monologue to even ask the question?!!
And if for some silly contrived reason it's wouldn't work, then go bond to another Gargoyle. Bis is a good friend and would understand. Rachel's entire career is a combat specialized 'runner', aka Bounty Hunter, who is actively endangering herself by not being able to travel or have a familiar so she can still use magic (her only viable weapon) anytime she walks into a basement or on a foot bridge over running water.
On that note: She made a very specific comment several books ago to point out that the main thing that makes Demon's so powerful and dangerous is not their physical power like vamps or were's, it's their vast repertoire of premade, prepared spells "curses", stored in their magic Curse Cloud that can be invoked in an instant with a thought (such as a Healing Curse, that Al showed several books ago). Which is an awesome concept! One that Rachel baffling refuses to utilize in favor of remaking pain amulets and useless sleepy time potions to revisit Book 1 aesthetics. This is negative character growth.
(I already mentioned the lack of preparing Healing Curses. She's in a combat profession. Literally should have been the first thing she demanded Al teach her, and the first thing she premade a dozen of in her Curse Cloud. And her foes are scaling up, where one-shot instant kills are normal, so a Healing Curses isn't even OP. They just replace "pain amulets" narratively. You can even make Healing Curses expensive, so there is an incentive to use them sparingly. "I only have one left"... etc)
Pike: The Daius Ex-Machina. Previous book, and for the first third of this book, is walking around Cincy, ALONE, confident and sure of his safety and power, for months before Constance arrives. And then suddenly, AFTER his big powerful undead benefactor is literally in town and taking control, is then suddenly attacked by assassins, who then spend the rest of the book literally around every corner, and on call on the other side of the country, able to field undercover assassins within a couple hours notice. (The only way they would even have known this was a window of opportunity, is if vamps in Constance's inner circle are betrayers. Pike only called Constance's camerilla, who didn't previously use the many months he was alone, away from his benefactor to strike?)
And now Pike can't go 10feet away from Rachel and is wholly dependent on HER protection. The big tough demon who nearly died on the bridge from a random knife thrown by the magic stealth assassin. Who also has no familiar, and can't walk into a basement without being utterly useless.... Uh huh.
And none of this is necessary to keep Rachel "grounded" and "vulnerable". Just have the Elves pull up a 5thousand year old spell that locally neutralizes Ley Line transitions of matter. The Elves can't ley line jump and were able fighting off the Demons, to the point of almost winning. Someone figured out how to neutralize demon teleportation, otherwise the Elves would have lost over a weekend.
Just have Landon give that spell to everyone, and now the IS has installed these 'dampening fields' enchantments in their facility. Neutralizes the power spike of Rachel getting teleportation in a way that makes perfect sense, gives Landon a reason to still be a political adversary with legitimate clout, even provides society a minor defense against all Demons, without cheap "but Bisssss" "reasons".
You can even go a step further. The suppressing field doesn't stop incoming line jumps, but it prevents leaving via that method. Meaning it can be used as a trap, adding danger and vulnerability to Rachel's endeavors, while keeping her evolution and character growth intact.