All That This Entails: A Pride & Prejudice Variation

by Noell Chesney

I am the daughter of a Duke!

ELIZABETH BENNET COULD SCARCELY CREDIT THE NEWS when a letter sent to her father, from relations she did not know existed, informed them that untimely and unfortunate events would result in Mr Bennet inheriting the dukedom of Everard. In the blink of an eye, the Bennets' lives are transformed— Elizabeth and her four sisters are wealthy, titled, and the talk of the ton.

AT PEMBERLEY, FITZWILLIAM DARCY is still stinging from Elizabeth Bennet’s rejection of him at Hunsford when he learns the extraordinary news. Elizabeth Bennet—now Lady Elizabeth—has been elevated in an extraordinary fashion and is soon to become the most sought-after lady of the season.

But Darcy’s heart still belongs to her, as much as it ever did, and he sets off for London determined to win her hand. But can he prove to her that he has changed, particularly when her entire life has just altered?

This Pride & Prejudice variation is a novel-length tale using the characters of Jane Austen in a story of the author's imagining.

Genres: Regency, Romance, Historical, Historical Romance, Fiction, Clean Romance, Audiobook

390 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 14, 2020

Reviews

[Debbie · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 rounded up to 4 stars

I had read this story when it was online, recognized the raw quality and wonderful potential, and eagerly anticipated the published version.

First of all, Ms. Chesney writes beautifully, and she starts out with an inspired storyline. I love the premise here - it's always fun when Elizabeth's social status gets elevated above Mr. Darcy, and in this case it's the entire Bennet family. Sadly, this is due to a devastating shipwreck that wiped out two families and multiple heirs who would have inherited the title of "Duke of Everard" before Mr. Bennet. (This is a different branch of the family than the one that produced Mr. Collins so, thankfully, he's not the next one in line.) Mr. Bennet makes the announcement to his family after Elizabeth has returned from Kent, so she has already turned down Mr. Darcy's marriage proposal and read the letter he'd handed her the following morning.

Not only is Mr. Bennet a duke, but he's a very wealthy one with several estates as well as a lovely town home in London. So, the Clampetts -- er, the Bennets are now part of the upper ton. They hitch up their wagon...um, carriage and head to their new home, a lovely estate called Grancourt.

Lady Agatha, widow of the recently deceased duke, is delighted to have a family surrounding her again and is unfailingly patient with Mrs. Bennet, Lady Kitty, and Lady Lydia. She recognizes that the two eldest daughters are the only ones likely to fit into high society anytime soon. Lydia and Kitty are allowed to continue with their delusions of being the belles at London balls even as plans are in motion to separate them and send them to finishing schools. Mary will have music masters. Mrs. Bennet, now an actual duchess, is enough in awe of Lady Agatha that she tries to mimic the lady's behavior. To Mr. Bennet's dismay, being a duke comes with certain responsibilities, and he must bestir himself to do more than hide in his library. Great stuff!

Lady Jane and Lady Elizabeth now have obscenely large dowries. Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy have both an advantage and a disadvantage over their competition - they already know the ladies quite well; however, as we're all aware, Mr. B left Miss Bennet behind after the Netherfield ball, and Mr. D insulted Miss Elizabeth's family in the course of his decidedly unromantic marriage proposal. Reading these romances play out as the sisters enjoy making a splash during the London Season is thoroughly entertaining. Caroline Bingley's comeuppance is certainly satisfying.

There's a lot to like here, most particularly the excellence of the writing itself and the basic premise.

However, I was disappointed at the number of irrelevant scenes that I'd hoped would be deleted that don't push the plot forward. Instead, we read meaningless details about various shopping trips, teas, dinners, and balls, slowing the pace to a crawl at times. There's an episodic quality to the story rather than everything being interwoven with an underlying central focus and associated building tension. It was easy to put down and forget about; I didn't feel an urgency to know what would happen next.

While the original Pride and Prejudice characters are nicely three-dimensional and consistent with JA's creations, the villains added here (Wickham and Lady Catherine aren't factors) are comparative cardboard cutouts, obviously having malicious intentions from the moment they're introduced. There's no surprise when they cause trouble. And Lady Agatha, delightful though she might be, doesn't strike me as credible - she just doesn't act like someone who's lost everyone dear to her only a few months ago. It's one thing to have a stiff upper lip, but aside from the narration telling us that she's sorrowful, her behavior seems to indicate the opposite. She embraces the Longbourn Bennets with open arms, never appearing to resent either their lack of suitability or the absence of her loved ones.

For me, this still reads like a book with great potential that lacks polish.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[wosedwew · Rating 5 out of 5]

There are people who have money and people who are rich. ~ Coco Chanel

Several very good JAFF stories begin with an improvement in the Bennet family’s circumstances. “All That This Entails” is one of those stories which had been available online for several years. “Quills and Quartos” has taken the story in hand. It has been edited, proofread, and now beckons to us from a fetching cover.

The story opens directly after the rejected proposal at Hunsford. A letter arrives for Mr. Bennet. Several deaths in his extended family have left the Bennet father to inherit a dukedom. The new Duke and Duchess (yes, Mrs. Bennet is now Her Grace!) and the five elevated daughters, Lady Jane, Lady Elizabeth, Lady Mary, Lady Catherine (yup, another Lady C), and Lady Lydia, travel to their new home to meet the Dowager Duchess.

Lady Agatha proves to be a wise and kind woman who befriends the new Duchess and influences improved behaviors from the entire Bennet family.

There are a handful of people whom money won't spoil, and we count ourselves among them. ~ Mignon McLaughlin

Quote from the book: To meet the Dowager Duchess of Everard would certainly require the finest lace!

The older Bennet daughters move gracefully into their new lives. The youngest daughters must learn that an increase in their pocket money is not the only change about to happen.

The identity of the new Duke of Everard is kept secret for several months. When the news hits the London press, the Bingleys and Darcys are shocked along with society’s gossips.

The Darcy family has always been friendly with Lady Agatha. How long will it take for the Dowager to discover Darcy’s feelings for Lady Elizabeth? How will Caroline Bingley cope with her rival’s prominence? How will Charles Bingley adjust to the change in Jane Bennet?

I recommend this to anyone who enjoys JAFF. I loved the story!

I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review.

The real measure of your wealth is how much you'd be worth if you lost all your money. ~ Author Unknown

[Sheila Majczan · Rating 5 out of 5]

I read this as an unpublished story back in 2016 and now received an ARC. I copied and pasted my review from that version.

Elizabeth is soon to journey with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner with plans now to only travel to Derbyshire but this delightful story varies as Elizabeth is informed by her father of a great change in the family’s circumstances. (Echoes of Downton Abbey here.) His father has just received news…“His Grace the Duke of Everard, has died in a ship accident while escorting his brother and brother's family back from the Indies. Which means that there are no surviving descendents of Alexander Bennet…... And this is exactly what Mr. Spencer has written to inform me. I am now considered His Grace The Duke of Everard."

Now the shoe is on the other foot, so to speak. Not only do the Bennet sisters all have titles but they also are in possession of bountiful dowries. “The Lady Agatha Bennet, as she will now be known when she reverts to her previous title as the daughter of an earl would like for my entire family to travel to Staffordshire to take up residence at Grancourt.” Elizabeth is told. Her trip with the Gardiners is cancelled.

Lady Agatha proves to be not only generous but also wise and insightful and she quickly assesses the personalities and behaviors of the five heiresses…and their parents. Read of the amendments put in place by outright edicts or by sly persuasions to bring the family up to snuff before their presentation to the Queen and partaking of the Season in town.

And the irony of it all is that Lady Agatha has a very close connection and friendship with the Darcys of Derbyshire, the neighboring county.

Meanwhile, the Bingleys are on their way with Georgiana and Darcy to Pemberley when Darcy travels ahead the day before they are to arrive. As he nears the house he sees two visitors and, determined to change his aloof behavior after Elizabeth’s reproofs, greets them & introduces himself. While conversing and walking with them Mr. Gardiner remarks how Elizabeth would love the sights. Darcy is alerted to the name and further inquiries reveal that they are, indeed, the aunt and uncle of whom she has so fondly spoken. (The Gardiners are aware of the fact that Elizabeth and Darcy are acquainted.) Darcy now puts into action more proof of his taking to heart her reproofs. The Gardiners visit, Georgiana goes shopping with Mrs. Gardiner, the men fish together and a friendship is formed with promises on both Mrs. G.’s and Georgiana’s part to correspond and to visit when the parties return to London. The Gardiners leave BUT before their departure Darcy shares with Bingley his guilt in helping to separate Bingley from Jane AND reveals his feelings for Elizabeth to his friend. The Gardiners relate that their nieces will be in London mid-September. (They are under instructions not to share the other news with anyone.)

A week later the newspapers announce “Mr. Thomas Bennet, of Longbourn, Hertfordshire, cousin to the late His Grace The Duke of Everard, will succeed to the title. His Grace will bring with him his wife, Her Grace The Duchess of Everard and five daughters, Ladies Jane, Elizabeth, Mary, Catherine and Lydia Bennet”. To say those at Pemberley are shocked is an understatement. So does Darcy, or even Bingley, stand a chance as the rich and beautiful ladies enter society? And just why does Lady Catherine show up with her infamous speech about “you can be at no loss to understand the reason of my journey hither”? Oh that little event turns around and bites someone!

Darcy and friends return to London in early September and reestablish their friendship with the Gardiners. And although the Bennets and Aunt Agatha are not accepting visitors when they arrive to update and add to wardrobes befitting the rise in status, the close relationship plus recently gained information that the Bennets of Derbyshire have an acquaintance with the Darcys of Derbyshire allows some visiting and/or entertainment arrangements between the parties.

But despite Aunt Gardiner’s and Aunt Agatha’s intuition leading them to promote Darcy to Elizabeth and to bring them into company together, there is the matter of His Grace, The Duke of Everard’s opinion about that man’s treatment of his favorite daughter….plus when the Season begins it is open season for other men to dance with, admire and contemplate wooing the lovely Bennet sisters. Elizabeth catches the eye of not one, but two eligible men. As we read we are delighted as to how Darcy handles first the one and then watch in dismay as Darcy…well, I have related enough already.

In this story we are warmed to Darcy even more as we read of his earnest attempts to address all the faults identified by Elizabeth at the time of the Hunsford proposal. And we are rooting for him as we also read of how Elizabeth looks at her own part in that acrimonious event and as she observes him in society. (I was a little curious as to how a kiss on the cheek, the ear or even the neck during a waltz was not considered a compromise, but was no one taking notice?)

The story is not without its villains. But several who are new add great disruption to the course of love. Of particular interest was the information about entailments and inheritances given by the author.

I found this unpublished (NOW published in 2020) novel to be a page turner. I loved the changes the Everard Bennets undertook to make in their behaviors and loved reading the development in the love story as Darcy renews his addresses to Lady Elizabeth. Aunt Agatha was a favorite but then Aunt Gardiner’s quick and silent communication work in concert with that Lady was of particular delight. Do find time to read this.

[J. W. Garrett · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Duke is dead, long live the Duke:

Rating: PG13: some violence, and smarmy, sleazy, suggestive comments from villains, and an abductor. Makes you want to take a bath when the villains peruse the females in the story. 35-chapters plus an epilogue. [4.5 stars]

Thomas Bennet of Longbourn received an express informing him that the Duke of Everard had died at sea. How was this shipwreck important to him? The Duke was a distant relative and when he died, his heirs were with him and perished as well. That meant that Thomas Bennet of Longbourn was now His Grace, The Duke of Everard, and Mrs. Bennet, his Duchess. Oh, dear.

This was a story of how the Bennet family, a gentleman farmer/landowner/minor gentry, ascended to the peerage. What would they have to go through? What changes would they endure? How would the ton react to the girls’ dowry of an unimaginable amount? And would His Grace be able to keep that exact amount from public knowledge and especially from Her Grace? The entire family traveled to Grancourt in Staffordshire to be introduced to Lady Agatha, the widowed Duchess. It did not take her long to size up the younger girls, as well as the new Duchess. She had her work cut out for her.

Meanwhile, at Pemberley, Darcy met the Gardiners [minus Lizzy] on their northern trip when they toured his estate. He discovered they were Elizabeth’s relations and through them learned that she was visiting family in nearby Staffordshire. He noticed that they were evasive in discussing Bennet’s relations or their reasons for the visit. When the Bingley group, along with Georgiana, arrived at Pemberley the next day, Darcy quickly introduced his sister to Elizabeth’s aunt and uncle. Thus, forming a friendship, between the two families, that remained throughout the rest of the story. Caroline was horrid in her behavior toward the Gardiners. She was snide and free with her comments regarding the Bennet family, and Elizabeth especially.

This story was full of villains. As soon as one was handled, another rose up to take their place. Lady Catherine, completely beside herself after receiving a poison pen letter from our dear Caro, arrived at Pemberley under a full head of steam. She acted badly and quickly learned it was not wise to try and beard the beast in his own den. She would suffer the consequences of that mistake for an undetermined period of time. And Caroline’s reward for such a breach? She earned Darcy’s full attention and would rue the day she EVER wrote a letter to his aunt. Way to go Darcy! It was magnificent and, for a nanosecond, I actually felt sorry for her. However, it soon passed. I nearly swooned with a Darcy large-and-in-charge.

I loved watching the Bennet girls change with their new station. Lady Agatha was most excellent in her character, grace, and poise. She fell in love with the eldest Bennet girls, Elizabeth especially. She also enjoyed meeting Mrs. Gardiner and quickly recognized it was her influence, rather than Mrs. Bennet’s, that formed the eldest girls’ character. The younger girls, unfortunately, had followed their mother and that would have to be addressed and quickly.

I was impressed with the evolution of Mr. Bennet, the new His Grace. This was a big step for him and every once in a while, old indolent habits would bubble up, but this was a whole new situation and he soon realized his failings and attempted to make them right. This didn’t always fly with Her Grace or the younger girls. They wanted full and unrestrained access to London’s high society, shopping, parties, and balls. Oh, dear. After an unfortunate incident with Lydia… all that changed.

Bingley and Darcy were already making plans to mend fences with the eldest Bennet ladies when the announcement came out in the paper. Bingley felt it more acutely than Darcy, as he was already considered below Jane Bennet. Now, he was even further below ‘Lady’ Jane. Darcy’s situation was somewhat better. At one time, he considered that he was a gentleman and Elizabeth was a gentleman’s daughter, they were equal. His aversion was toward her relations to trade and the mercenary matchmaking machinations of Mrs. Bennet. That had all changed due to her family’s elevation in status. Those relations in trade were now connected to a Duke and that made them acceptable.

There was angst: A jealous harpy conspiring with a destitute rake led to the kidnapping of a Duke’s daughter in order to force a marriage. Then there were the usual misunderstandings that often separates lovers and their journey in finding that HEA.

I volunteered to read an advanced reader copy from Quills and Quartos Publishing via Booksprout. I first read this on the forums as an unpublished WIP [work-in-progress] in 2017 and again in 2018. At the time, I posted a review on GoodReads. I loved this unique take on our P&P story and was so excited to discover that the author was bringing it to the published world. Well done, Noell.

[Melissa · Rating 3 out of 5]

Enjoyable read. It gets a bit long in the middle and then a little soap opera-y at the end.

Everything and everyone is a bit perfect but sometimes you need that.

[Carole (in Canada) · Rating 4 out of 5]

One letter changes the Bennet's lives forever.

"My father is a duke. I am the daughter of a duke! Mama is a duchess!" (quote from the book)

Now that is a scary thought...Mrs. Bennet a duchess? What connections the Bennet's will have now! As this all takes place after Darcy's Hunsford debacle of a proposal and the receipt of his letter to Elizabeth, what impact will this have...if any? What about Jane Bennet and Mr. Bingley. She is definitely further above him now.

The Bennets depart Longbourn for their new estate, Grancourt, to meet With the Dowager Duchess of Everard, Duchess Agatha, the widowed mother of the Duke of Everard who was lost at sea with the rest of her family. Duchess Agatha helps all the Bennets in adjusting, and in some cases, transforming into their new roles. She was such a delightful character.

"I once accused him of wilful disdain for the feelings of others, and I do not want to be cut by my own words." (quote from the book)

I enjoyed this debut novel. For me, it is a gentle read with a little angst. We get to see Mr. Darcy take Elizabeth's reproofs seriously even before he learns of her new status. And when the Gardiners travel to Derbyshire without Elizabeth and tour Pemberley on their own, this is on full display. I loved the time Mr. Darcy and Georgiana spend with the Gardiners. It is here where Lady Catherine has her share in the conversation and Miss Bingley goes one step too far...or was it two?

"It cannot be true!" (quote from the book)

Yes, we have our usual villain, Mr. Wickham. But the inclusion of two new additional ones added a decided edge to the story...Lady Frederica Sutton, soon to be Lady Amherst, who I would describe as a cold cup of tea with a dash of arsenic, and Marcus Carlyle, Earl of Dunmore. However, I felt his presence was just a bit too late in the story or the story ended too soon after.

But through it all, Darcy is a man on a mission and I loved him! The growth of his relationship with Lady Elizabeth was a delight, and I loved how her father, the Duke kept him in his sights!

I also want to mention the beautiful book cover. I love it.

[Sam H. · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a fantastic blend of tone of the writing and the story itself. As a more lighthearted story, with a couple moments of drama, it does not get bogged down with heavier language. The writing flows effortlessly and the reader gets to enjoy a reformed Darcy woo Elizabeth the way she deserves.

The Bennets become peers and their lives change completely, but not without big challenges. Luckily the 2 eldest daughters learn that both Darcy and Bingley express serious interest in them again before being made aware of the change in the Bennet's circumstances. Bennet steps up admirably, the dowager Duchess is a fairy godmother and Georgiana adores Mrs. Gardiner, even before meeting Lizzy! Every character has their place, like perfectly designed puzzle pieces.

Absolutely 5 stars and a reread!

[Ｓｈｉｆｒａ ♕ · Rating 2 out of 5]

The premise is exciting but the story is uneven; some parts are blow your brains out boring and cringe and then, suddenly, the writing corrects itself; there is some smart dialogue, wit is evident, though overall the tale never manages to be thrilling.
'tis mercurial and vexing!

Synopsis:

The time is post Rosings but pre Lizzy's trip with the Gardiners. Mr Bennet has just received the most astounding news! He is set to inherit a Dukedom! What is the value of this inheritance?
Well its a doozy;
♕8 country estates, total annual income is £ 70,000
♕ 2 London houses
♕ investments in companies and businesses brings total income to around £ 125,000

Now I know what you're thinking; Does this mean the cursed day may come when Mr Collins is a duke? That was my first bone chilling query as well.

Like Rosings, Everard is not entailed away! Phew! Can you imagine? His Grace Collins? Heaven forbid! This means Jane Bennet's son will be the heir to the Dukedom!

If the Bennets are related to a dukedom why do they live on mere 2,000 p a year Longbourn?
Well the Bennets had a propensity to beget males, so it was entailed to stay in male line, and Bennet's father had a falling out with his family, seemingly due to a love triangle, which is why they lost touch. Alexander the heir to the dukedom wanted a Miss Elizabeth Perry and James, Mr Bennets father, won the hand. I enjoyed this little romantic tidbit about Lizzy's grandmother and namesake.

Under Duchess Agatha all the Bennets will undergo a transformation thanks to her example;
Mrs Bennet, now a Duchess, is in awe of the dower Duchess so she adheres to her instruction; Lydia, Kitty and Mary are no longer out so they go to finishing schools, and Mr Bennet now knows his daughters will inherit the fruits of his labor starts to take his duties seriously. Even Lizzy agrees to reign in her rambles and walks escorted by a servant for security.


Darcy is quite flirty in his courting Lizzy, though still sweet

“before he even realized it, his hand had released the rein, and his arm slid around Elizabeth’s shoulder, drawing her close. ”

There is this one scene where Jane and Lady Agatha are saying good bye to Georgiana as she and Darcy are leaving Everard and Darcy, taking advantage their attention is other wise engaged in farewell, steals a kiss! It's a bold move to kiss a lady with her family mere feet beside before you have reached an understanding,


What I Enjoyed:
❀ The Cinderella of it all! The Bennet girls now have dowries of £ 40,000! Seems a slim dowry considering their annual income but I suppose there must be debt?


❀ Darcy and Bingley making a game plan together to get the Bennet sisters!

❀ Caro getting kicked out of Pemberley after writing to Lady C about Darcy being into Lizzy;

“She wrote to Lady Catherine with the hope that her ladyship would condemn such a connexion, and she certainly did. But Miss Bingley does not know my character. I have never listened to Lady Catherine.”

❀ The epilogue- I usually hate them, but this was nice

❀ When Bingley preached straight facts at Darcy;

“How could you presume so much? Jane is a modest and genteel woman. What would you have had her do to demonstrate her affection? Would you have preferred if she had fawned over me and behaved the coquette, such as ladies do in your presence?”

Too true! Succinctly put!

What Displeased Me:

✗ The dialogue lacks authenticity, the characters didn't ring true, personality all are cardboard cut outs!

✗ It drags on; over explained, repetitive conversations, I was at 38% when I began itching for it to be over! Then 50% I was interested again. There is also a lack of real conflict.


✗ So much telling, practically no showing!

✗ What's the point of Lord Newbury? He serves zero to the plot and does nothing. His purpose truly eludes me. We got so much background info on him I kept waiting for him to come into play, truly irked me.

✗ -In the eleventh hour we get this rushed plot of kidnapping. It is not very fresh and seemed unrelated to the story and out of nowhere.

✗ There is this scene where Darcy and Lizzy start quoting 'Much Ado About Nothing' as Benedict and Beatrice at each other and it's so cringe. For they are shamelessly in conversation with their relations and just hijack it to blatantly flirt, get a room!

Verdict:
It has such an enticing premiss that I very much would like to explore and it’s disappointing that the author clearly researched, and set up the stage well for inheriting a dukedom, but lacked the writing chops to properly flesh it out and bring Austen’s characters to life.

There were these tedious droughts of good writing and then some good dialogue or scene would deign to appear before plunging us back to boredom, a very jarring read indeed! I am rendered vexed.


P.S. I can think of so many more interesting avenues the author may have explored.
For instance, Jane is now heiress to a terribly rich dukedom, would Bingley, a tradesmen son who has no experience running an estate much less several large ones, be suitable? I think not!
I would have liked to see pressure from Duchess Agatha or the crown- yes because the management of a dukedom is no flippant matter- for her to do her duty and marry elsewhere! Maybe Bingley resenting Darcy for deceiving him about Jane and now they can’t marry! Now that’s some meatier substance!

How about Darcy never gave the redemptive letter to Lizzy or she never read it and she thinks him a total pompous cad! With her pride and resentment I could see some very fun scenes. She would go to the season with mistrust for Darcy and get taken in by a titled charmer like Wickham before she realizes Darcy was noble and right for her. Instead here they resolve everything right away! How is that any fun?

Ms Chesney to impertinent me:

[Rita Deodato · Rating 4 out of 5]

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All That This Entails picks up the Pride and Prejudice storyline a few months before Elizabeth’s visit to Derbyshire with the Gardiners, and it has a very unique and appealing plot twist.

In this book, Mr. Bennet is a relation to Duke Everard, with whom there was breach in the past which prevented people from knowing of the connection. When the Duke and his heirs die in a ship wreck, Mr. Bennet is the only heir alive and becomes a Duke himself. This means that Mrs. Bennet becomes a duchess and the Bennet girls will all be Lady’s, way above Darcy’s station. I’ve read a few books where Elizabeth is above Darcy’s station in society and I confess this is a trope I don’t particularly like. I believe the changes it causes in the characters personalities, and in the storyline, are so big it hardly resembles Pride and Prejudice. Noell Chesney was able to use this trope without doing that because Elizabeth only becomes Lady Elizabeth after the Hunsford proposal, and this was certainly one of the aspects I enjoyed the most in the book. It was interesting to see how each of the Bennet’s adapted and reacted to their new reality.

Another aspect I enjoyed immensely in this book where the Darcy/Elizabeth moments due to their flirtatious dialogues and courtship games. If you usually love no angst books with a long and tender courtship filled with romantic moments, this one is for you! Once Elizabeth and Darcy reconnected, the story became filled of memorable romantic moments 🙂

My main quibble with this book was the lack of conflict that would push the story forward. At moments, everything seemed too perfect and easy for our characters as we go through dinner parties, walks in the park and theatre plays surrounded by caring, accepting and loving family members. I believe the pace of the story would have been more compelling if some scenes, descriptions or dialogues were reduced, and if the actual conflict that appeared in the very end of the book would have come sooner.

Nevertheless, the writing style in All That This Entails is very easy to follow and invites the reader to keep reading, which was another of aspect I appreciated in this book.

I would recommend All That This Entails to readers who enjoy slow-paced stories with little to no angst. It is a romantic tale, and Darcy is a true gentleman on this one. I am sure he will conquer many readers’ hearts 🙂

[Kim · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars. This book starts after the Hunsford proposal while Elizabeth and Jane are both at home and Lydia is in Brighton. In a twist of fate, Mr and Mrs Bennet are elevated to Duke and Duchess of Everard and all the Bennet girls are now Ladies with substantial dowries. Of course this means Lizzy is thrown into Darcy’s way again. After initial apologies, Darcy actively pursues Elizabeth as he decides she will be well aware of his feelings this time around. He surprisingly tells A LOT of people about his failed proposal. Bingley is reunited with Jane but there is a long stretch of the book where he doesn’t appear and isn’t mentioned. There is a rival for Elizabeth’s affections, so we get to see a jealous Darcy try to best him. The fencing scene and sleigh ride were both particularly fun. There are also two new villains but their plot is foiled rather quickly and it’s nearly the end of the book when it occurs. Wickham makes trouble once more but gets his punishment in the end. The epilogue is thorough and one of the best I’ve read in a long time, it gives details on everyone. This story was compelling and held my interest though it could have been tightened up a bit more.

[Meredith (Austenesque Reviews) · Rating 4 out of 5]

What If Mr. Bennet Unexpectedly Inherited a Dukedom?

Rating: 4 out of 5 stars

Source: Gift from Publisher

TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

THE PREMISE: Instead of Elizabeth traveling to Derbyshire with the Gardiners and Lydia absconding from Brighton with Wickhams, ALL of the Bennets make an extended journey to Staffordshire after Mr. Bennet learns he is to be the next Duke of Everard. Now that the Bennet sisters are elevated to the the highest echelons of society, what happens when they cross paths with some old friends and unsuccessful suitors…

WHAT I LOVED:

- A New Adventure: This is such an extraordinary change for the Bennet family. To see them depart from their original courses in P&P and ascend to such heights! Mrs. Bennet a duchess?! Who would’ve thought!

- A Besotted Mr. Darcy: Our dear ardent boy is so eager for the chance to win Elizabeth’s heart. I loved seeing his perseverance and patience. He is everything that is gentle and honorable. But unlike the reserved and private Mr. Darcy we typically see, this Mr. Darcy is determined to be overt with his intentions and refuses to let Elizabeth be in doubt of his feelings. I loved his flirty and pointed comments to Elizabeth. And my heart melted to see their tender moments and extensive courtship.

- Duchess Agatha: I thoroughly enjoyed this new character and the relationships she had with others in the story. She is the type of duchess that is benevolent and accepting, and not a bit imperious or haughty. I loved her guidance and support for all the Bennet women, and I especially enjoyed the affinity and closeness she shared with Elizabeth and the Darcys.

- An Eventful House Party: This was so fun – sleigh rides, horseback riding, dancing, and fencing! There are so many great scenes and moments to enjoy! It was amusing to see another suitor step into the fray and give Mr. Darcy some challenge! I loved witnessing Elizabeth’s reactions and thoughts about Mr. Darcy during this party. And Mr. Darcy was exceptionally swoon-worthy throughout these encounters, especially with his gallant knight-like play-acting and when he claims a reward.

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

- Not So Altered: With such a dramatic change of circumstance, you’d expect it to bring about some other ripples of changes and twists. But for the principal characters (Elizabeth, Darcy, Jane and Bingley), it didn’t really produce any big changes. Everyone was already predisposed towards each other and there was hardly any awkwardness, misunderstandings, or conflicts. Since the changes to their lives were so unique, it would have been fascinating to explore some unique challenges or obstacles these changes might produce.

- Small Quibbles: While I enjoyed seeing some new villains come onto the scene, their arcs were maybe a little too weak and brief to produce much tension or excitement. Also, this might be my own personal preference, but I felt that Darcy and Elizabeth sharing their whole past dealings with several relations seemed a little too open and modern for the reserve and guarded privacy we normally see with Jane Austen’s characters.

CONCLUSION:

All That This Entails is a romantic and gentle love story that is sure to delight readers who love seeing Mr. Darcy court Elizabeth without a lot of angst or misunderstandings. Their blossoming tender regard for each other and the improved manners and relationships amongst the other Bennet family members makes for a most gratifying and uplifting reading experience! I recommend!

Austenesque Reviews

[Madenna U · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Bennet's world is turned upside down after Elizabeth returns home from Hunsford. It appears that her father is now a Duke and she is Lady Elizabeth. Further north, Darcy has taken Elizabeth's comments to heart and introduces himself to the nice couple touring his grounds during their holiday - the Gardiners.

The author puts the canon characters in a different configuration. She manages to keep Mrs Bennet in the background, and introduces the dowager Duchess as the mothering figure. She sends the younger sisters to finishing school. Mr Bennet's new role keeps him mentally challenged so is also enjoying life and interacting with his family. The usual annoying characters are present but not given much time. All this is to set up a clean and very romantic story between Darcy and Elizabeth. He has decided not to allow her to mistake how he feels about her and he does a great job at it.

They have their challenges, a few new evil type people, new friends, and each other as they find their happily ever after.

[James S · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lady Elizabeth, daughter of a Duke

The Bennets hit the entail jackpot when Mr. Bennet is the next in line to be a duke when a distant relation dies.

Can we imagine Lizzy being the second daughter of a Duke? To put it mildly, Darcy has some competition for Lady Elizabeth.

Really good story. Hope to hear more from an author I don’t know at all. I love when a good new author is discovered.

Thumbs up.

[Ree · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Bennets Become Titled
This very pleasant read has Mr. Bennet inheriting a dukedom. Along with the title comes great wealth. How will the family adjust? The story begins some months after Darcy’s failed proposal at Hunsford. The usual Bennet characters are well portrayed in their new circumstances.

I have always liked this trope (being titled), and the author wrote a really nice story that didn’t over exaggerate the wealth by making it unbelievable, as some other books I’ve read with a similar storyline. I enjoyed and recommend it.

June 24, 2021 - Audiobook
Very enjoyable on audio with a very good performance by Katherine Anderson.

[Auggy · Rating 1 out of 5]

Both a "read" and a "dnf" as I skimmed the last quarter or so because I just could not take it. This was a very uneven read. In the beginning it felt like there was a plan and the story had a solid direction. Some things felt a little unpolished and there were a few typos and missing words but nothing truly horrible. By the middle, however, the story lost direction and began to drag horribly. There were pointless, repetitive scenes that felt very much like filler, as if the author were buying time to come up with a plot. In the few scenes that seemed to have purpose the characters felt flat and indistinct. Side characters began to fade out at about this time - some are shipped off to school, others just... aren't mentioned any more. Jane became a ghost - mentioned occasionally as talking to someone else across the room but having no presence otherwise (I don't think she even speaks after page 226 - just over halfway through the book). I started to check out at this point (it was just so boring!) but tried to keep going because I wanted so much to like this. But when the plot showed up again in the last quarter, it was full on soap-opera ridiculous and I was done.

Caroline Bingley is booted early in the book, but a new villain is needed, so we get Caroline Bingley Number 2 whose hatred of Elizabeth feels very forced and weird. Wickham is also dealt with by the middle of the book so Wickham Number 2 shows up out of nowhere to create a more directional plot (the truly soap-opera level plot). I feel this whole book could have been reworked to make Caroline and Wickham the bad guys through the whole book which would have been 1) more believable (for a given value of believable considering the plot), 2) prevented cardboard cutout bad guys, 3) perhaps given some tension to the middle of the book to keep it from being so dull, and 4) created a bit more cohesion to the book instead of making it feel like a fanfic that was written over a year and a half with no plot outline then published without revision.

Also, I think Lizzy says the whole "my courage rises with ever attempt to intimidate me" something like three times in this, and this is after she's already said it in Kent. She needs some new material.

[Sheryl Gordon · Rating 4 out of 5]

Intriguing premise and plot lacks passion

Long, but not as long as it sometimes seems. The characters are interesting to a point but there's little depth, just explanation. If you're in the mood for a true "What if?" without angst, with simple resolutions, you will love this story. Darcy is almost romantically fluent and even a bit forward, so that's nice.

[Sisi_k · Rating 2 out of 5]

I wanted to like this because I love the elevated Bennets trope, but I did not enjoy this book.
Nothing happens for so long, Elizabeth is a Mary sue, Darcy is boring. Everybody is so polite and unreal, the conflicts are non existent in the beginning and ridiculous by the end. DNF.

[MichelleH H · Rating 4 out of 5]

There's a lot to like about this book.

I really liked the overall story, especially Darcy and Elizabeth's romantic courting which was really the best part of this book, as it should be. There was a lot of page time devoted to them, hurray! Papa Bennet now the Duke of Everard, apparently becomes a responsible caretaker of his responsibilities over night, which was admirable but surprised me. The Dowager Duchess quite fortunately for everybody, is constantly on hand to advise, guide, and befriend the family. I loved her! The friendship that developed between Georgiana and Elizabeth, and to a lesser extent Jane was really lovely. Those parts gave the this a great story arc. For me there was a certain suspense that had me waiting for the other shoe to drop regarding the Dukedom. I really liked the epilogue. I applaud this author for her debut publication and I look forward to seeing more stories from her.

What I didn't like so much...

I thought it dragged and could have been tightened up. I liked the writing in the sense that of scenes, dialog and relationships, but found some awkwardly written sentences, some extra words, sentences further into paragraphs that should've been the first sentence of that paragraph. A couple of times I had to go back and reread multiple paragraphs to understand what that out-of-place sentence referred to, and was still left scratching my head. I got bored with too many little subplots, too many villains, too many new characters to keep track of and remember. Even so, I missed there being more of Jane.

Aside from my complaints above, I would read this author again. It's encouraging that Quills & Quartos has taken her under their wings. I recommend All That This Entails to all JAFF lovers.

[Dawn · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 I really enjoyed the first half of this book as the Bennets get some unexpected and shocking news that elevate both their financial and social standing. It was really interesting and fun to see the Bennets adjust to their new circumstances and I enjoyed some new characters in addition to our more well known and dear characters. After one particular storyline was resolved, the book started to drag and there wasn't really any plot moving the story forward. The day to day social gatherings, activities and preparations for the upcoming season start to get old if there's not something more pushing the story forward as was the case here. Towards the end, there was some more "action", although the motivation that led to this action by these villains seemed a bit far fetched. Such reprehensible and evil actions motivated by nothing but jealousy in the case of one party and I'm still not sure the motivation of the second party just didn't add up. It was wickedness for the sake of wickedness and that's not my favorite plot. Overall, there were many things to like about this book and I did enjoy it with a few reservations.

[Talia · Rating 3 out of 5]

I loved the beginning of this book but not so much the rest.

[Teresita · Rating 5 out of 5]

Interesting approach

A mostly low angst story with a well planned plot that gives a glimpse of the high society customs of the time. Engaging.

[Amy · Rating 3 out of 5]

A hard read, great concept - which was sufficient to request this book for Christmas. Let’s face it, most of us histfic romance fans love anything Austen. I’ve read a tonne of P&P twists and I was so intrigued about this one. The Bennet’s inherit a Dukedom, right at the point in which Lizzy has rejected Darcy the first time, and discovered the truth about Wickham. She cancels her trip to Derbyshire because they are all up and relocating from Longbourn to Staffordshire, but her Aunt & Uncle still go, and meet Darcy on their tour of Pemberley.

I wanted to love this, I really did. I genuinely think there is still potential in this story. I’m not sure the extent that it had proofreaders and a really good editor, but it would certainly benefit from it. There was far too much info dumping, tedious paragraphs of unnecessary details regarding daily movements, and a select amount of inaccuracies geographically in England. There’s not enough clarity in who’s POV you are getting in any given moment, as it chops around all over the place, sometimes within the same paragraph. I’ll take my publishers hat off now and just say, if you don’t mind reading through paragraphs of extras - you’ll probably really love it.

It’s a long book, so could easily be scaled down. Overall it wasn’t terrible, and I enjoyed it despite all the things I personally struggled with. I’m sure there will be many Austen fans who will pick this up based on the premise and love it.

[Craftyhj · Rating 4 out of 5]

I originally gave this 4.5* on the first reading. This second reading did not quite live up to that level and I now think 3.5* is more realistic.

This remains an enjoyable low angst read with a charming Darcy and a witty Elizabeth. The characters are warm and endearing making for a very pleasant read.

1/2* docked for a few too many grammar bungles. The second * was docked for a few plot points which didn't quite work for me. As they relate to the plot of the story I have hidden them as spoilers below.

- I think a dukedom was an error and an earldom would have been better. The expectations of marriage and behaviour for a duke and his family would've been such that even Darcy would have been less than acceptable as a marriage partner. Bingley would have been a total non-starter, particularly when his child would inherit the title. As complete outsiders to high society the new duke and his family would have found it difficult not to conform.
- I found the idea of Lady Catherine making a 4+ day journey at the height of summer to harangue Darcy a bit too unrealistic.
- the kidnap was just not necessary and diminished the story for me.

All in all this is an enjoyable book which many fans of the genre will enjoy and I love the cover!

[Dung · Rating 5 out of 5]

This story is action packed and keeps you turning the pages. The story starts off after the disastrous Hunsford proposal where Elizabeth is back home at Longbourn and Mr. Bennet receives news in his family's change in status due to the death of his distant cousins.

There's sandals, affairs, kidnapping, villains, Darcy and Elizabeth falling in love and much more.
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I love Duchess Agatha and how she bonded with Jane and Elizabeth while being a keen observer that helped the rest of the Bennets transformed into respectable members of society based on their new status.

I enjoyed seeing Darcy's relationship with the Gardiners as well as Mr. Bennet evolve. I'm glad this Mr. Bennet attitude towards his family and responsibility changes for the better. This is such a great story for all Pride and Prejudices fans.

My only slight quibble is Jane and Bingley's courtship. I would love for them to have a bit more page time for their own courtship to develop and grow.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Anne · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book’s epilogue took away a star. I won’t say why but now I understand why some readers dislike them.

[readundancies · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75 stars.

Let us first establish the fact that this cover is on point.

With that out of the way, I enjoyed this story for the most part.

Between Darcy's pining and Elizabeth's growing affections, it really was quite sweet little novel. It was nice to have more of Darcy's perspective, to see the change in the indolent tendencies of the Duke of Everard (formerly Mr. Bennet), and watch the duchess (formerly Mrs. Bennet) become more polished. There was an abundance of character growth in many of the characters that was pleasant to observe, because it's rare to see the more undesirable qualities of many of the side characters become curbed - I'm used to said characteristics becoming more pronounced in variations that I've read.

That being said, the number of antagonists made for a too-many-cooks-in-the-kitchen situation by the end; while Wickham and Lady Amherst didn't seem to be terribly villainous in their actions (the former being handled quite quickly and unceremoniously, the latter being an impressionable accomplice to Carlyle), Marcus Carlyle served only to usurp Wickham's role in the original tale for his jealous nature and iniquitous intentions. At the end of the day, the drama they were tasked with ensuing never really amounted to all that much, and the conflict they imposed upon our fair couple felt more calculable if anything.

But, even with that in mind, and the fact that I could feel the ending dragging on a bit in terms of length, it was still diverting and I was thoroughly engaged with seeing the story through.

It's not a bad choice if you're looking to pick-up a Pride and Prejudice variation.

[Lady Jl · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Bennet’s fortunes change

The story starts out with Mr. Bennet learning he has inherited a Dukedom and learn Mr. Collins is not eligible due to his ancestors bad behavior just as Mr. Bennet always claimed. Jane and Elizabeth become close with the dowager duchess as she helps the Bennet’s adjust to their new stations. Mr Bennet finally takes his role as father, husband, and caretaker seriously his wife is still silly but learns from the dowager duchess how to comport herself-mostly.
Over time Darcy and Elizabeth become friends after apologizing for their past prejudices and harsh words.
There are villains and offended relatives which help make the story interesting but not so unbelievable that would make you shake your head. I enjoyed this story so much it gets 5 stars.

[Katie · Rating 4 out of 5]

A Pride and Prejudice variation with an affectionate Mr. Darcy is, in my mind, the very best kind. Especially when the reader is feeling the emotion from his point of view. This was a charming story that had me smiling throughout over the sweet attentions shown by Mr. Darcy to his beloved Elizabeth. The fact that she is suddenly elevated in rank and wealth adds new complications to the tale, but ultimately proves the steadfast characters of our admired Bennets, as they only improve through this unexpected experience. I was particularly impressed by how Mr. Bennet rises to the occasion, striving to become the husband and father they've all needed, and taking his new responsibilities seriously, as does his wife. There are some interesting new characters added to the original story, a sudden and dramatic plot twist, and a sigh-worthy happily-ever-after ending. A delightful read for Janeites and historical romance fans alike.

[Cheryl-Lynn · Rating 3 out of 5]

I loved the premise of this book! It was fun to see parts unfold. The writing itself was a bit cumbersome in places. I felt like I was being told rather than experiencing the story. Recommend!

[Julieta · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was hard to accept Mr. Bennet’s sudden transformation into a Duke. But once I got over that I thought the story was a good one and well written.