It started well but I didn't like it
The plot: Grey is a man of humble origins who has made his own fortune through business and bought a title of marquee, he is obsessed with getting revenge on Asbury, a count who stole from his father and humiliated them, to get revenge he buys his debts and pressures him so that his daughter Lady Serena becomes his mistress . Obviously Grey only plans for the love affair to be an act to humiliate Asbury, he knows he is unfair to Serena but he plans to compensate her with money when everything is over, Serena moves in with him and Grey realizes his mistake, Serena is apparently submissive, but in reality she is brave, and challenges him, makes jokes and insults him, she does not let herself be intimidated and almost never obeys him, Grey and she fall in love but they should not so they do not know what to do.
Aydra is my safe place at this point, she's the one I turn to when I have a streak of bad books, I don't even have to see what her novels are about to know that I'll like them, and the premise of this story is very good, a lady who is forced to become a mistress for revenge, a commoner grown into a marquis with many enemies and rough ways, BUT... this book didn't work. The first half of the book is fun, entertaining, and interesting, seeing Serena rebel without losing her essence as a lady was very nice, seeing her resist an undeserved revenge, and stay dignified was very satisfying, and obviously nothing is more pleasant than seeing a hero regret being unfair to the heroine and fall in love with her even though he shouldn't. I also liked that he treated her with respect and kindness despite his rough personality and thirst for revenge.
But as usually happens in this books, the "Revenge" is the stupidest thing, no man in the world would consider something so silly as a revenge , when he could kill, have arrested or beat the man he hates, honestly this is something that only a female in her teens would consid a a revenge but it's just a baby pout if you ask me, I mean Asbury doesn't care about his children, he doesn't even love Serena so what revenge is it for Grey to make Serena his mistress? Humiliate Asbury??? He already did that by exposing his debts, making Serena his mistress doesn't hurt anyone, not even Serena because she doesn't care, she doesn't suffer or anything.
But even with flaws and everything, the novel is not boring and feels different but you pass 50% and the novel no longer holds up, the thing is resolved = revenge consummated, Serena already recovered her social position, she and Grey love each other and have no real impediments to be together, so it only drags on with boring nonsense, Grey rejects Serena and sends her away why? He doesn't have a reason, he tells us that she deserves something better, but he is rich, handsome, a marquis, respected, he loves her, so I don't know what could be better... As I said he has no reason, and the next day he looks for her but she doesn't receive him why? She doesn't even has a reason, she loves him and accepts him as he is but the plot needs to be extended another 100 pages so for no reason she will be difficult...
Then Serena's dad comes back to try to kill her, but he is useless and fails... Seriously nothing interesting happens in the second half, rather it seems to me that the author uses that to introduce the characters and the plot of the books that follow in the saga, which bothered me a lot, first because "Sarah" the employee, who will be the protagonist of the next book was UNBEARABLE, she is supposed to serve as Serena's lady, and she is a new employee, but she spends her time calling Serena stupid!!! her new BOSS!!! she insults her, disobeys her, is rude, a bad employee, a liar, even Grey almost kicks her out, but Serena loves her and wants to make her her business partner. Why? She really didn't know Sarah for God sake !!! , she was intolerable to me, no one in her position would have acted so conceited and arrogant, Serena was good and kind, and Sarah never acted like a friend much less as an employee, I don't know why she didn't fire her, and maybe because I had already bought her book but from the beginning I realized who she was, so not mystery there.
Now the epilogue, what the hell? It was all about Sarah... We didn't see that happily ever after that Serena deserved, it surprised me because something I love about this author is that she doesn't fill her books with her other novels, but here she disappointed me too much, I felt that she had run out of ideas, and that she didn't want to take risks, besides everything seems too ridiculous even for a novel and it's out of historical line:
-Serena talks about a change in society in which nobles must accept rich people without royal blood, that happened but about 200 years later
- Serena being welcomed by society again despite having been a mistress? It's not just impossible, but it would have been more difficult than what is being suggested here.
I know that Sererna's father was not the most affectionate in the world, but he didn't hit her, humiliate her, or insult her, he didn't leave her hungry, I mean he wasn't really horrible, he was in many ways what one considered a good father in his time, so why did Sererna behave like that with him? Teasing him, bothering him, insulting him, rejoicing in his misfortune by supporting his enemy, you see? It doesn't make sense, especially in an era when women were taught blind obedience and unconditional affection with their parents.
Now, Why if her father needed money he didn't give Serena in marriage??? if there were other proposals? He could have taken advantage of it but he didn't and it's not explained why.
Serena opening a school to educate the newly rich in the middle of the 18th century seemed implausible to me, it wouldn't have happened unless it had been run by a woman, which by the way we are told throughout the book that Serena is a noblewoman but the truth is she never behaves like one, nor thinks like one.