(sorry for this long review in advance) this series had SO MUCH potential – but after finishing rivals, i am extremely worried for its fate.
rivals was legit a hot mess. like, it is worse than majesty in my opinion. majesty at least had good drama, a decent plot line, some purpose...this book was filled with petty drama, childish banter, and a conference with a bunch of random kingdoms. so basically, a whole lot of nothing.
i hate the fact that this book was created to "make up" for majesty and keep the story going. the story did not need to keep going. everything that happened in this book just made the series worse. i could've literally been fine with just majesty as the end.
each character bothered me to my core in this book.
like, there wasn't a single person i LIKED.
beatrice acted less like a queen and more like an insecure, easily persuaded girl. she completely pushed her relationship with teddy to the side and ditched him for the next best thing (louise). her chapters in this book were so. freaking. boring. especially because they took place at the league of nations, which i genuinely did not care about. the car accident was the most interesting part, but she did teddy so wrong that she almost deserved what she got (sorry. ik that's mean)
daphne was off her game in this book. and this says a lot, since she is my favorite character. her rivalry with gabriella was extremely childish, and her plots to take her down were just downright stupid. "oh, let's sneak into her room and find incriminating stuff about her then sell pics to the press!" or "i'm going to be pretend to be her friend so that she tells me a dark secret!" THESE ARE THE MOST DUMBEST AND UN-DAPHNE-LIKE PLANS I HAVE EVER HEARD. an absolute DOWNGRADE from her plots in books 1 & 2. also, her "pregnancy" plan to keep jefferson in love with her is totally stupid. it's not going to work and it's just going to create even more messy drama. (also, i thought everyone would find out about what she did with ethan and himari by now. but I GUESS i have to wait for ANOTHER installment.)
samantha and marshall are just cringy to me, and the fact that they ran away from their respective positions is extremely childish. it's unfair to beatrice and rude on sam's part that just because she's the spare, she gets to run away from her royal life and leave her family/friends in the dust. even though beatrice justifies samantha and marshall's actions, it was not a smart decision at all, and they are going to have to come back from Hawaii after learning about what happened to beatrice. so this plot (i hope) will be short-lived, because i was not here for it.
jefferson cannot make up his mind on what he wants. it bothers me so much that he hops from daphne to nina and back again. MULTIPLE TIMES. even though he is adorable, and super thoughtful and caring, this storyline makes me really dislike him. he is playing with these girls and their emotions, and simply cannot decide which one he wants to be with. one minute he's all like "daph, i care about you. i trust you." and the next he's like "nina, you are the only girl for me. i want to be with you." like ??? you can't just ??? hop back and forth ??? like that ??? i thought he and nina were clearly done, but their plotline in this book felt like it was simply there for drama.
nina is another issue. she's just like jeff – can't make up her mind. she says thousands of times that she and jeff are just friends, but then he kisses her and she's all like "yeah, i'll date you, but we can't do that to daphne." i liked the nina/daphne alliance (even tho it was for a stupid reason) and the fact that nina betrayed that alliance actually bothers me. she knew how much daphne needed a friend, yet she did this and backstabbed her.
now, the ending. the ending was a trainwreck. the car accident wasn't bad – that has me waiting for book 4. it's the fact that jeff is now THE KING. like, the accident JUST happened, and the royal staff is just like "...yeah jeff we're like in the hospital waiting room rn and beatrice is on life support but like take this oath so you can be king." and jefferson DOES IT.
also, i just KNOW nina thought she had her main character moment delivering that last line over her shoulder to the paparazzi. and that BOTHERS ME.
so, yeah. book 4 is going to be a disaster. i'm not even excited for it, like i was for majesty and rivals. but, i'm going to read it because i unfortunately need to know what happens next.