From a storytelling perspective, I thought this was a fascinating story for the High Republic. While the previous two manga editions have been fairly linear, this book employs flashbacks really well!
This book really employs villains well. I was so excited to see Marchion Ro on the page, and even though it was short, his appearance made me excited for Phase 3! In addition, we also got the new villain Vol Garat, who is really menacing and works well for the scope of this story. Using a Harch, who are notoriously hard to kill or get rid of as we learn in "The Clone Wars", makes him freaky and understandable that he would be present during both eras of the High Republic.
Of the Jedi in this book, Jedi Knight Arkoff, who is a young Jedi at this time, gets the most page time. Because he didn't necessarily have dialogue, his character wasn't the most interesting. I really wanted to find out what was up with Azlin Rell, even though his scenes got a little bit repetitive. A few other characters are present, but this really is a small cast of characters for this book.
The most fascinating character in the book, however, was the droid "ZZ-10". Despite being a droid and I only really know him from this book, he has become a favorite HR character. His devotion to his master and determination to not give up, as well as his hutzpah in the face of danger was fascinating. I really hope we get a lot of him in Phase 3, because he was delightful!
Where this book really misses the mark is the artwork. The artwork was so sloppy and difficult to understand at times. I understood the story because of the writing in the text boxes and dialogue, but the artwork itself was pretty bad. They switched from Mizuki Shakakibara (who did the art for Edge of Balance #1 and #2), and brought in Tomio Ogata, who overall tried to mimic the style. However, the artwork just doesn't work near as well, and there were entire panels that needed so much work. I wonder if the artwork was rushed on this one? Regardless, its the weakest artwork of thus far.
That being said, I really want to grade this based off of the story and not based off the artwork. I do think this is the most entertaining and well done story of the Edge of Balance stories, so it gains a few points there. But the artwork is noticeably worse, so it loses a little. I'll give it an overall 8 out of 10! Well Done Daniel Jose Older!