As with the first book in the series, I had mixed feelings. Surely the translation can't be very good. And in this volume, the diction shifts heavily to use of every possible American locution--despite being in another world, where we've gotten used to people exclaiming "Sinning Magicians!" and greeting one another with "I see you as if in a waking dream," we now get all the characters saying things like "gosh" and "by the way" and "aw shucks." And at the outset, it appeared that the mild tendency toward scatological humor evident in the latter part of the first book was going to take a major role in this one, but I am glad to say that it did not.
Like the first book, this one really has no plot, but consists of several linked adventures. First Max and Melamori visit a forest to deal with a group of bandits who have returned from the dead; in the second, the pair (forbidden by strict tradition to have sex together ever again after their accidental encounter in the Quarter of Trysts) fall for new and bizarre but apparently very suitable partners; in the third a local cemetery keeps sprouting undead and in the midst of this disturbance Max foolishly returns to our world and gets stuck there for a very long time. In this last, we're taken away from his beloved Echo where he is blissfully happy and constantly learning of new powers he never imagined one could have, and the story takes a more existential, disturbing turn. I'll refrain from revealing the end, apart from noting that it's not completely gloomy and Tom & Jerry cartoons play an important role.
My reaction at the end of the book is that despite all sorts of linguistic annoyances, there is indeed something delightful and mildly addictive about these books. Some of the jokes are pretty funny even in English, and while much of the time the reader is floating through a world that has little obvious internal logic and we never know why anything works or why Max is such a wonder boy there, the author's wild imagination conjures up bizarre treats and even (relatively rarely, but definitely there) reflections on the human condition. I thought I'd quit after reading the two books I own, but I might have to see what happens next now that Max has agreed to be a king in absentia.