It's v. hard to root for the star-crossed HEA when the heroine is a ninny & hero is a luv-sick sap. If he were a virgin, he woulda won more sympathy vote from me, but he's a jaded rake, who's been around the blocks (unfortunately, not my block). The succulent meat of the story is only embedded in the last 10 chapters. It took me days to finish it 'cuz I put it down, picked it up, put it down again & then switched to Jo Bev for a change 'cuz the reedy plot was moving @ a 1-legged turtle's pace. I kept reading @ stops & starts even tho’ I was hoping it’ll get more riveting. The 1st 2/3 of the book is merely mind-numbing marathon sex that @ times I thought I was reading Stephanie Laurens, who’s infamous for over-stretching the sex quota & luv scenes ad nauseum. I give her credit for the 1st wince-inducing boinking in the carriage, it's realistic that heroine initially feels pain being over-stretched on hero's King Dong. Interwoven w/ the lengthy nookie, is lotsa going back & 4th thought process between the H/H. Tarquin's (both spoken & unspoken) grilling in regards to Diana's actions & motivations is like doing laundry, lather, rinse, repeat, to no avail. I'd hire her as an FBI instructor for "10 ways on how to evade crunchy questions" class, 'cuz she does have admirable skills in spinning the 3rd degree inquisition around & making Tarquin reveal his sad lonely self instead.
I like hero's name, BTW, v. unique & not used too often, the only other book I can think of featuring same name is Jane Feather - Vice. If U've read AC's previous ab fab works, U're no stranger to her uber obsessive heroes. I luv obsessive, jealous, possessive heroes, but methinks Tarquin is inexplicably too hypnotized by Diana's spell, to the point that his pride-lowering aggressiveness in his pursue of her, came across as just a tad too pathetic for my taste. I dunno, mayhap I'm PMS-ing, but I really couldn't believe that the hero pops the question upon knowing that heroine's preggers & she turns him down. Whyyyy oh whyyy ? His prospects aren't too shabby, Tarquin's status is in equal footing w/ the baddie. Bad move. Oh and to have Tarquin show up in the nick of time for the wedding, after a severe beating ? Jeez louiz... he'd be better off letting the heroine reap what she sows. Also, we're told that Tarquin's a champion for the underprivileged / the poor / something like that, but we don't get shown what / how exactly he does to fight for his cause, 'cuz he's too busy trying to subdue his infatuated boner. The juicy luv scenes do have some palpable threads of tenderness & mutual feelings, but not enuff to overcum the repetitive mental flogging & dubious premise (coming from me, who’d sell all my books to buy a decent roof over my head, that’s saying something LOL).
On a side note, I dunno if the release of LV's book a month ago has made it a standard to crank it up a notch in terms of overcooked luv scenes & the minimum quota, ‘cuz from the moment Tarquin sets eyes on Diana again, they just keep bangin’ like a barroom door on a windy day, as in, the more, the merrier. It gets tiresome that whenever he tries to make her fess up 'bout her diabolical plan, she clams up. Then to spray acid on his sore open wounds, she goes nilly willy w/ the creepy villain like a shadow, when beckoned, after Tarquin finds a golden chance to corner her (his 3-day bushy stake-out was endearing yet pitiful). Also, for some unfathomable reason the unintended sly digs @ Patience made me smirk (sorry, can’t help it, I must’ve been bored outta my skull & LV’s atrocious book was still fresh in my scarred mind) :
<< “Patience” entered his lexicon as a synonym for “torture”. >> (hahaa… so true, that book was pure “torture” for me)
<< Patience is over-rated. >> (nods head in agreement)
PS : If U’ve watched Star Wars, U’ll know the plot twist (an homage to Darth Vader VS Luke Skywalker showdown).
PPS : The reason I switched to Jo Bev's latest in-between finishing this 1 was 'cuz the premise reminded me a bit of "Secrets of the nite" - which I luved to pieces.