I've always loved stories of treasure hunting, and so the Lost Empires quantegy appealed to me considerably. Despite enjoying Mel Odom's "Threat From The Sea" trilogy, I felt that the scant 300-page length of this short novel didn't afford him the proper time necessary to carefully unfold the plot. WARNING: SPOILERS BELOW.
While the first hundred pages or so moves at a satisfying rate, is well-detailed, and gets the reader engaged with the book's protagonist, Baylee Arnvold, once the proper quest for the Lost Library of Cormanthyr picks up, pacing is thrown to the wind.
The second half of the book is a rapid, tumultuous rush to a fairly unsatisfying finish. In its hurry to reach its climax, there are a couple of pointedly ridiculous sections - such as relatively young, violence-disdaining Baylee slashing apart a dozen drow singlehandedly (what??). The primary antagonist was built up through so much of the book, only to be given an extremely short and undramatic death, and when the story finally moves into the Lost Library itself, there's precious little description of the wonders that ought to be within.
Ultimately, I was underwhelmed by this book,even though Odom starts strong and has a very good premise. Judging by the prologue and first dozen chapters, this ambitious story would have made a very good trilogy, with the events of this book spread out amongst three.
As it stands, the story is good, but far too much time and ground are covered in 300 pages to make it effective.