Empson in his preface the second edition of his book observes that ‘The method of verbal analysis is of course the main point of the book’. Empson asks ‘is all good poetry supposed to be ambiguous?’ I think that it is.
He follows this up in chapter I. “Ambiguity” itself can mean an indecision as to what you mean, an intention to mean several things, a probability that one other or both of two things has been meant, and the fact that a statement has several meanings’.
To illustrate his point he observes, ‘To take a famous example, there is no pun, double syntax, or dubiety of feeling, in Bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet birds sang, but the comparison holds for many reasons, because ruined monastery choirs are places in which to sing, because they involve sitting in a row, because they are made of wood, are carved into knots and so forth, because they used to be surrounded by a sheltering building crystallized out of the likeness of a forest coloured with stained glass and painting like flowers and leaves, because they are now abandoned by all but the grey walls coloured like the skies of winter, because the cold and egotistic charm suggested by choir-boys suits well with Shakespeare’s feeling for the object of the Sonnets and for various sociological and historical reasons (the protestant destruction of monasteries; fear of puritanism), which it would be hard now to trace out in their proportions; these reasons, and many more relating the simile to its place in the sonnet, must all combine to give the line its beatify and there is a sort of ambiguity in not knowing which of them to hold most clearly in mind...”
Clearly this is involved in all such richness and heightening of effect, and the machinations of ambiguity of effect, and the machinations of ambiguity are among the very roots of poetry.
According to Empson 19th century poetry was devoid of ambiguity. Empson, by quoting, proves ‘Brightness falls from the air as an example of ambiguity by vagueness. Is it light emanating from the sky or is a threat of thunder?’ Empson chooses a few lines from Synge’s play Deirdre as an example of ambiguity with an overtone of dramatic irony. Neisi has been killed and Conchubor left in possession.
Deirdre who’ll fight the grave, Conchubor, and it opened on a dark night?
‘The night is dark enough now, and, of course, her main meaning is that she can’t be fought after she has killed herself. But she herself could not fight against the impulses of the night at the beginning of the play.’
The next important reference in Empson is to the play on the ‘nothing in King Lear.’
Empson chooses Shakespeare’s Sonnet LXXXI to comment on the fluidity of grammar balanced by rhetoric plays on words like ‘tongues’ ‘eyes’ ‘rehearse’ in the poem.
The next comment to note is—’It is the part of a civilized language to be simplified in structure and generalized in its notions; of a civilized people to keep their linguistic rules and know what they are about; but this must not blind us to the nature of such phrases as; There thou, great Anna whom three realms obey. Dost sometimes council take, and sometimes tea.’ (Pope, Rape of the Lock)
Where the effect of limited comprehensiveness, of a unity in variety mirrored from the real world, is obtained by putting together two of the innumerable meanings of the take.
The next example chosen is from the beginning of Eliot’s, ‘The Waste Land’, second section ‘A Game of Chess’.
Empson comments, ‘what is poured may be cases, Jewels, glitter, or light and profusion enriching its modern meaning with its derivation, is shared, with a dazzled luxury, between them; so that while some of the jewels are pouring out light from their cases others are poured about as are their cases on the dressing table.’
Empson next quotes from Eliot:
“Webster was much possessed by death
And saw the skull beneath the skin;
And breathless creatures underground
Leaned backward with a lipless grin”
Leaned may be verb or participle; either ‘Webster saw the skull under the skin and the skeletons under the ground, which were learning backwards’ (leaned may be a verb with ‘that’ understood, as so often in English, but it is hard to distinguish this case from the participle), or, stressing the semi-colon, Webster saw the skull under the skin, but meanwhile, independently of him, and whether seem or no, the creatures underground leaned backward,’ both in order to have their laugh out, and to look upward at the object of their laughter.
The verse, whose point is the knowledge of what is beyond knowledge, is made much more eerie by this slight doubt.’ We can now mention Empson’s point: ‘King Lear is more desperate in his variety of uses for the genitive:
Blasts and fogs upon thee.
The untented wounding of a father’s curse
Pierce every sense about thee.
(Lear, I. IV. 320)
The wounds may be case or effect of the curse uttered by a father; independently of this, they may reside in the father or his child. The next example of ambiguity is from Othello: ‘That I did love the Moore, to live with him, My downright violence, and storme of Fortunes May trumpet to the world.
It is after the pattern we have considered, except that the adjective throws a new term into the calculation; it qualifies either violence or violence and storme, and thus tends to detach violence from fortunes’.
An ambiguity of the third type, considered as a verbal matter, occurs when two ideas, which are connected only by being both relevant in the context, can be given in one word simultaneously. This is often done by reference to derivation; thus Delilah is that specious monster my accomplished snare
The notes say: specious, ‘beautiful and deceitful’; monster, ‘something unnatural and something striking, shown as a sign of disaster,’ accomplished ‘skilled in the arts’ of blandishment and successful in undoing her husband’. The point here is the sharpness of distinction between the two meanings.
‘An ambiguity of the fourth type occurs when two or more meanings of a statement do not agree among themselves, but combine to make clear more complicated state of mind in the author.’ Empson analyses A Valediction, of weeping from this point of view. The other ambiguities are not specifically mentioned.
Empson concludes his book with a belief that all sorts of poetry may be conceived as explicable. His intention is to make poetry more beautiful.
Empson is a successor of Eliot as is I. A. Richards.
Most recommended.