This reminds me of Tolkiens hobbits except frodo aka Mr underhill is actually radagast is actually smaug.
My flash-new rating system. It rates the things I find important, and if it scores high, it satisfies me!
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Characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Birt was cute. Blackbird very flat. Yevaud is super cool (the little hints of his true identity in his description?? Ah!)
Dialogue ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Very straightforward. Fine
Setting ⭐️⭐️⭐️
In my head I see a little island that's very bright green and very sunny. It's really nice and if it was a happy story it would've been more stars but for this story, and I think the ordinariness is intentional, it's also plain and not special.
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Writing style ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Written almost like a cutesy fairytale which I think is entirely on purpose and honestly the twist at the end is very fairytaleessque, plus the fact that death is heavily implied at the end is very much like the stories of Grimm.
Depth/complexity ⭐️
It's just a story and it's not trying to be anything more and that's fine.
Re-readability ⭐️⭐️⭐️
It's short so easily rereadable. Again like a fairytale.
Creativity ⭐️⭐️⭐️
2.5
Ending ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Perfect to be honest.
+a shitty little wizard on his little island is visited and truth comes to light!
+wizards, fantasy, dragons, treasure, magic, community, secrets