By now, not only were the editorial mistakes but the grammar mistakes getting on my nerves, but the story seems to simply fall apart in this installment.
The plot for this one was that Nicolae dies and upon his resurrection, becomes "indwelt" by Satan himself. That, I have no problem with, because that's Scriptural.
But what I did have the problem with was the now-normal strained plot twists. As readers, we're expected to suspend a part of our disbelief, but Jenkins takes things too far and expects way too much of us as readers with his insidious reasons as to why things happen. I understand that due to logistics, one camp can't know what the other is doing or else they would die, but he is now obviously way in over his head, trying to incorporate technical jargon that strains that disbelief to its breaking point. Instead of leaving some of this to the imagination of the reader, which will keep us engaged, he makes stupid character statements such as, "But you have GOT to remain where you are. We need you in this position, since you must be available to change databases once a team member travels to another country."
Is he SERIOUS?? Change databases?? Apparently Jenkins assumes the rest of us are too stupid or complete ludites that we wouldn't have the foggiest clue what a database is, or that in this particular context, that statement is the dumbest thing that could've come from the man's fingertips.
It annoys me when ANY author, Christian or otherwise, assumes ignorance or stupidity on the part of the reader, and Jenkins is apparently of that camp. Suddenly, things that didn't bother me in the first four books are really ripping me a new one now, and I just want to jump through the book and throttle him.