Pool School

The Administration #3.9

by Manna Francis

Another short story in The Administration series.

The whole cast of characters go out for an evening of strip clubs. Warrick and Toreth decide to play a game of Strip Pool.

Genres: M M Romance, Dystopia, BDSM, Science Fiction, Romance, Short Stories, Erotica

14 pages

About the author

I'm the author of The Administration Series, a near-future SF dystopia published by Casperian Books. You can find the series in paperback, e-book, or (partly) on line at the Mannazone website.

I've been writing original slash since 2002 — or homoerotic fiction, m/m romance, yaoi, as you prefer. Original slash is my personal term of choice because I feel it best represents my writing in terms of style and what readers can expect to find there. Individual stories may or may nor be sexually explicit.

Reviews

[Penny Well Reads · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was nice to see them having a night out, fun with friends. It was refreshing.


My reviews of The Administration series’ books:
Book 1: Mind Fuck - 3 Stars
Book 2: Quid Pro Quo
Book 2.1: Unlucky Break - 2 Stars
Book 2.2: Friday - 3 Stars
Book 2.3: Pancakes - 5 Stars
Book 2.4: Surprises - 4 Stars
Book 2.5: Family - 4 Stars
Book 2.6: Mirror Mirror - 4 Stars
Book 3: Games & Players - 5 Stars
Book 3.1: Game, Set - 4 Stars
Book 3.2: As Long As It Lasted - 3 Stars
Book 3.3:Fuck of the Day - 3 Stars
Book 3.4: Wine, Women and Cushions - 2 Stars
Book 3.5: Playing with Fire - 5 Stars
Book 3.6: All Work and no Play - 3 Stars
Book 3.7: Gee - 2 Stars
Book 3.8:Shopping & Fucking - 5 Stars
Book 3.9: Pool School - 3 Stars
Book 3.95: Without the Game - 4 Stars
Book 4: Control - 4 Stars
Book 4.2: Wait For It - 4 Stars
Book 4.3: Caged - 5 Stars
Book 4.4: Unaccustomed as I Am... - 3 Stars
Book 4.5: Helen - 4 Stars
Book 4.6: Shopping, No Fucking - 4 Stars
Book 4.7: Losing It - 4 Stars
Book 4.8: Coming from America
Book 5: Quis Custodiet - 3.5 Stars
Book 5.2: Gratuitous Kink - 4 Stars
Book 5.3: Then and Now - 4 Stars
Book 5.4: Friends in the Right Places - 2 Stars
Book 5.5: Smoke & Cameras - 4 Stars
Book 5.6: Sunday - 3 Stars
Book 6: First Against the Wall - 4 Stars
Book 7: For Certain Values
Book 7.1: Family Values
Book 7.2: Boy's Toys - 3 Stars
Book 7.3: Make it a Surprise
Book 7.4: Prodigal
Book 8: Blood & Circuses
Book 9: Corpora Delicti
Gratuitous Epilogue

[Kat · Rating 5 out of 5]

Mama said that you should always wear smart underwear! Just in case you end up going to a hospital. Or in case you get humiliated after a bet gone wrong...

She also said there'd be days like this. Didn't she, Toreth? ;-)

[Sheri · Rating 5 out of 5]

RE-READ 2021
It's so naughty and so nice. I'm at their mercy.


Warrick you little hustler! Didn't know you had it in you, guess Toreth didn't either.
Toreth can't contain his jealousy (what's new) but honestly, I don't think Warrick minds. Seeing Toreth suffer thru his forfeit was fantastic.
Can somebody slap Dillian with a pool stick, please?

[Laura · Rating 3 out of 5]

Pool can be an extremely sexy game to watch. The planning, concentration, circling, anticipation, stretching, and bending hits all my pleasure buttons. Of course, Warrick and Toreth up the ante and appeal of the game to a whole new sexy level!

I needed this night out with the gang. I needed a fun night with Warrick away from work and the game. Just drinks, friends, fun, smiles, and well…a different kind of game. :)

Drop in and find out who gets schooled!

[Wency · Rating 3 out of 5]

What I felt like when they entered the strip club


"Another game?" Toreth offered. "We could make it a bit more serious, if you like?"
"You mean betting?"
"Something like that. How about a strip pool? One item of clothing per game."

Nice little Strip pool we got here.

With a little groving.


Catch it!


Yeah!


I'm still not comfortable whenever Toreth is close with Dillian though.

[Irina Elena · Rating 3 out of 5]

Huh. Never thought I'd see something like this happen.
It's awfully appropriate though, because I just learned to play pool a couple weeks ago.

So this was fun, entertaining and a bit surprising, but - and it pains me to say so - not particularly remarkable. *sigh*

It's just... girls, girls, girls! Girls everywhere! My god, get out of the way, shut the fuck up, and let me enjoy the goddamn story!
Why do they have to be so nosy and noisy? I'm not like that. And I'm a girl, in case I needed to specify that.

[Sun · Rating 3 out of 5]

The thought of Toreth dancing like a stripper grosses me out

The thought of Warrick dominating at pool makes me overheat

I’m kinda over all the girls (Cele, Dillian, Sara). Can we just leave them at home from now on?

[Shelley · Rating 3 out of 5]

What a nice surprise to know that there are some things Warrick can whip Toreth's arse at....for a change.

Toreth's hip swinging strip dance...uhm

I never ever want to see that again. I'm just going to pretend it never happened.

Cele, Dillian and yes, even Sara: Honestly! I wish, I just wish you could all just ...



You chicks are so annoying, you should be ashamed of yourselves, its because of woman like you, that I sometimes wish I didn't have a vagina.

[Marina · Rating 5 out of 5]

That was absolutely delighful!!!

[Danny Tyran · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow! Warrick who forces Toreth to danse naked in a bar. Even if it's a strip bar, that's something. I loved it.

[Joana · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was fun! Warrick was awesome.

[Mara · Rating 3 out of 5]

*deep breath*

I will be 100% honest and say that I'm not entirely impressed with the majority of the novellas in the TA series so far. I like the characters, and I think they are excellent, but I think they could be used better than they are. Toreth and Warrick are great, but the bulk of these stories are about....them having sex, getting mad about something, and then the cycle repeating with some little filler stories in between. And...I think the prose is boring? I know in this circle this makes me unsophisticated or blind or SOMETHING because the harshest reviewers in M/M act like this book is the holy grail to the point of seeming completely blind to any flaws....but....I almost want to call it quits? I don't think I will because I hate leaving things half-finished but....the hype on this series is making it more disappointing than it probably is....

[Camilla · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was such a funny, great Toreth and Warrick story.. right up until the last sentence, because Toreth is a slut..

Anywho.. This was the 3 girls, with T and W out at a Strip Club. Having fun. Toreth challenges Warrick to a game of strip pool.. Without knowing that Warrick is a pool shark.. That leads to a very funny scene of stipping.. on stage..

[Mich · Rating 5 out of 5]

ok....I loved this one. Wish I was at the club when T lost the bet. hehe. I would have been the annoying chick screaming..."take it all off!" lol There was something totally sexy about our nerdy Warrick being totally in control....oh, and don't forget to wear smart underwear just in case you get hit by a bus....hehe (impt. mindfuck life lesson here people)

[LenaRibka · Rating 3 out of 5]

There were too many women for my taste.




In spite of Toreth's timeless classic white briefs and spectacular show on the stage!

[♥Xeni♥ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Second read: Oct. 29, 2013

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First read: Sep. 28, 2013

Toreth believes he is the king of billiards. Little does he know that Warrick is only toying with him. Although, once their game of "strip pool" ends, Toreth finds how good Warrick really is.

[Mel · Rating 3 out of 5]

An okay in between story which was great fun all the way up to the dancing bit. What was that all about? Sorry, but I just don't want to imagine my Toreth doing that!

[Frau Sorge (Yuki) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Funny pool game. And the end was brilliant. Who knew?
Like it a lot.

[La*La · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75 stars.
First read on December 18, 2014.
Re-read on July 10, 2015.

[Pianisuparse · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 'Fun times where Tor is schooled by Warrick. Light, humour, witty and lots of banter. Just what I needed after the intense ride so far. Would have been 4 stars but Sara, Cele and definitely Dillan annoy the fuck out of me' stars.

[Em · Rating 3 out of 5]

I can cope with Sara but Cele and Dillian nattering away.....way too much! As usual though Toreth was the star of the show.

[AtenRa · Rating 3 out of 5]

I almost never like descriptions of people sexy-dancing, it always seems silly to me. This was done better than most, but still out of character for Toreth.

[Simple · Rating 5 out of 5]

The best one so far. Loved it.

[Ellen · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a totally fun read. It was great reading about Warrick getting one over on Toreth, even though Toreth's confidence make it so he doesn't really care. Good stuff.

[Trix · Rating 4 out of 5]

Oh, that was soo much fun! It was a lovely surprise to see the tables turned on Toreth!

I thought for sure Toreth would be the one to win the night and come up with some outrageous claim for Warrick to do. Imagine my surprise and delight to see that Warrick was even better than he claimed to be at pool. I sniggered all throughout reading this as Sara and Cele made catcalls every time Toreth dropped another item of clothing. And the pole dance... damn hot! And toreth, bold as f**k just stripping naked in front of the whoel club! Served Toreth right for being too cocky! And the teasing Warrick did at the start of the evening, when praising Cele... he knows how to push Toreth, that's for sure!

I really liked this story as it left me with such a homey feeling for the two of them.. just a regular couple going out for drinks and casual fun!

[Tasha · Rating 5 out of 5]

lollllll So funny.

Okay, so I definitely have the casting down for Toreth and Warrick.

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[Joy · Rating 4 out of 5]

Who's hustling who? Funny story about strip pool and strip pole--

[Victoria Loves Books · Rating 5 out of 5]

Um – hell yeah! A little game of seductive pool leads up to Toreth pole dancing. An Warrick gets a little bold and shows a little PDA. It was absolutely a perfect quickie!

[Liz · Rating 5 out of 5]

A game of strip pool! I was dying laughing and clapping my hands..oh Warrick! ILY!

[Cindra · Rating 5 out of 5]

Warrick is a subtle, sneaky SOB, but in a good way. Not many people outdo Toreth throughout this series. Acknowledged or not, Warrick is his weakness. Nothing like having to strip at a strip-club...