Going Back Inside
Thanks to Buggy for recommending this story to me. She knows I'm a fan of prison stories. When I read author Brenda Novak's preamble:
I went to Utah to visit my daughter and she insisted on showing Prison Break to me on DVD. "You'll love it," she said, and she was right. I found the characterization, plotting, acting and dialogue fantastic. I was so captivated, in fact, that I rented every season and watched the whole thing. But, when it was all over, I decided there was one thing about Prison Break I would've done differently, and that was the romance between the two lead characters. The writers took a very minimalist approach and yet, for me, it was the most interesting part of the whole show. So...I decided to write my own romance set inside the high-risk, high-conflict world of a maximum security prison.
I jumped up and down with excitement. Prison Break is my all time favorite TV show, inspiring me to become a writer, but I felt the same way about the missed opportunities for romance. This novel didn't quite live up to my stratospheric expectations, but it was still an enjoyable read.
The deputy warren of a notorious California supermax prison is female: Peyton Adams. She doesn't take any shit, and she's not afraid to express her objections to a plan for infiltrating a gang by planting inside the prison an exonerated ex-prisoner: Virgil Skinner. (Virgil isn't my favorite name choice for this hunk of muscle and love.)
Virgil served 14 years for a murder he didn't commit, and to say he has trust issues is putting it mildly. Peyton is a woman in a man's world who follows the rules and doesn't want to do anything to jeopardize her career, which is her life focus. So how will these two manage their palpable attraction to each other? Virgil's confession hurt my heart:
"You can stop pretending to look at me like a human being. I'm garbage, right? A beautiful woman like you, someone with a normal life, and so much . . . promise, has no interest in gutter trash like me. I'm nothing to you."
Peyton has her own motivation for working in a prison, and I like her backstory. She keeps various pieces of artwork inmates have given her over the years, and defends them when Virgil mocks her:
"Because they mean something to me, okay? And so do the men who created them. They're proof that beauty can be found where you'd least expect it. That most people have some good in them. That the amount of talent that goes to waste in prison is a tragedy."
These characters intrigued me, and I definitely wanted to see what would happen to them, but I didn't feel a rush of passion for either character. Still, this is a solid read that I recommend for any lover or romance and/or prison stories.