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195 pages, Hardcover
First published December 7, 1998
Sophie shivered. Jack did not know whether he was allowed to put his arm around her; if she had been only slightly less pretty he would have felt safe enough to do so.There's nothing wrong with this, it's just that there are multiple of these sort of lines chucked in seemingly at random, and there isn't a progression or realisation or anything. It reads like, "Ow, hormone surge. Umm... awkward" (actual plot and content) "Another hormonal surge - mega awkward - Imma gonna ignore it." (story moves on) "Argh, testosterone injection! Umm... I'm so confused and conflicted." (more story happens, and it ends). It's not terrible, it's just as awkward and cringey as actual adolescence, and I guess I'm always hoping for something less messy and more tied into the plot with actual meaning.